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Reviews for Lay With Me

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - soraryu on August 09, 2008
    One of my favorite Inuyasha/Kagome stories ever! I like how you paced their dialogue and the action =), and great depiction of their relationship. Cute moment for them both, loved the description. Great job!
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  • From gokusgirl on May 11, 2008
    That was wonderful! @_@

    I have been sitting here for hours looking for a good Inuyasha/Kagome fic, and wow it pays to keep looking! It was witty, the dialogue was so clear and NO errors... I liked how you had them saying "Kagome" and "Inuyasha" just like in the anime...lol! But it was so sweet... it wasn't overly graphic, it was LOVE MAKING!! I hope you have done more on this paring, and if not please DO MORE! You did an excellent job in this, and it wasn't smutty and raw like so many I/K fics I've read out here (not that I'm bashing those fic because I do like to read them from time to time), but sometimes a girl has to have a nicely romantic story to read to leave her all fuzzy inside.

    Thanks so much! (had to re-edit review, sorry.)
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on March 02, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - InuGrrrl on September 03, 2006
    Awww, that was lurvely!
    Bravo!
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  • From thecinnamonneko on August 18, 2006
    So hot! Very well-written. Is there a sequel?
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  • From on June 26, 2005
    Fantastic one shot...very cute, very hot...
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  • From ANON - Enchanted Faery on March 16, 2005
    Very cute! You are a gifted writer.
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  • From ANON - keiko on February 23, 2005
    that was incredible stuff
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  • From ANON - Kate on February 15, 2005
    Great one shot. But might I suggest that you use less blunt terms. Like instead of penis his swollen member and instead of sperm his seed. Just things like that. I've read a few one shots and it just sounds better. I'm not perverted I swear I just know what sounds better.
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  • From ANON - sky on February 14, 2005
    The story was awsome!
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  • From SilverFox on January 08, 2005
    Oh my...I think I need a shower after this little bit!! Yes...a shower definitely!! Until next time!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on August 25, 2004
    This is my second time reading this and I LOVE IT!!

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  • From ANON - Kanzen ne Tsuki on May 01, 2004
    That was entirely one of the sweetest things I've read in a long, long time.
    Well, done my dear. If its a one shot... Bravo! If not, I can't wait for more. Be that as it may... I hope you don't mind if I add it to my collection of story links on my website. www.tsukisan46.com/heartoftheflamingsword.html
    I also write fanfiction. but I write most Kenshin... but I love Inyasha... and I have a page all pristine and dedicated just for him. you need to write more.
    respectfully, tsuki-san
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  • From ANON - drake220 on April 25, 2004
    see, now its a fic like this that shows me why i think you are one of the best writers on these sites! this fic was incredible. simply put it was erotic innocence in the best sense of the phrase. it wasn't overly descriptive but you used lanugage that communicated exactly what was felt and said- it was just a joy to read.
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  • From ANON - alien_ryoko on April 24, 2004
    SO WAFFy, SO STEAMY, SO FUNNY...............so... BEAUTIFUL!!!! i luved this fic; i wish there were more like it. ty 4 the awesum 1- shot, and i'll keep a look out 4 more of ur fics.
    ryoko-chan *^___~=v
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