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Reviews for Transitions

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Joanna on November 04, 2005
    That was very fun! The transition from sweet virginal come-ons to the sex toys was pretty sudden, but all in all I enjoyed this story very much. The emphasis on the difference between Human and Hanyou Inuyasha was amusing, and the little quips and double-entendres were cute and endearing. The sex toys were fun and playful, but I think I personally would have preferred a less OOC approach. Very hot though! Yes yes I like these fics - they stimulate my imagination! ^__^ Thanks!
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  • From on June 26, 2005
    Lol...Loved the ending..

    It was pretty good all the way thru ! ! :)

    Sel~
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  • From ANON - Aislynn PK on June 05, 2005
    very nice. I enjoyed this story! I love the way you have Inuyasha in his human state... It does seem as though he would express his feelings better. I wish there had been more to the story, I wasn't ready for it to end so soon! Their relationship seems like it will turn out to be VERY interesting. Never thought Kags had it in her though!! Great work...

    PK
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  • From ANON - kiiru on May 13, 2005
    That was absolutely beautiful but... is is just me or did it kind of slip his mind he screwed her?
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  • From ANON - onomiyaki on January 18, 2005
    Incredible! It's amazing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2004
    HAHA man i loved the ending to the epiloge....man what kind of videos was kagome watching?!? lol
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  • From ANON - Decoy on December 16, 2004
    Good story...
    I would have liked for kagome to try out some of her "things" and let Inuyahsa watch.
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  • From ANON - ColShaLin on December 14, 2004
    I love this!! A great lemon and great humor woven together perfectly.
    "Where's the off switch on this thing?"
    "That DEFINITELY wasn't it!"
    Good God, I almost fell off my chair! Awesome work! Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - drake220 on December 07, 2004
    weee!! loved it!!! fabulous ending with great humor!!!
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  • From ANON - KikiAnn1RosEl1Derf2 on May 26, 2004
    Stellar story hope you write more like this you could do one of Kagome giving advice to Sango and then Sango and Mirokou doing something sim.
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  • From ANON - GV on April 27, 2004
    i liked it alot..who would have knowed that kagome was such a freak but damn inuyasha's an ass when he is hald-demon and an overly sensitive pansy when he is human. damn boy always seems to be PMS-ing. but good work none the less
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  • From ANON - shaid on April 26, 2004
    Good sex, sweet ending and great writing. It's got it all, Maven. thanks for writing it!

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  • From ANON - Manda on April 26, 2004
    I really like the ending on this, how you mixed what she was remembering and what Inuyasha was saying. Great stuff. I'm not a huge fan of sex toys myself, so I was glad that they didn't use them (sue me, I'm a traditionalist....). I'm a huge fan of your's, keep writing!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Hillary on April 26, 2004
    awwwwww
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  • From ANON - drake220 on April 25, 2004
    hehe...kagome is in total control of this situation. it's just so funny. i liked the line: sodomy, whips, masks- y'know, humans"
    very cute. BTB, did you already post this once or something? b/c it sounds familar. NO i am not insinuating that you plagerized but...just curious if this is a repost.
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