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Reviews for The Price of Vengeance

By : YoukaiFate
  • From ANON - ICYGIRL on April 30, 2005
    HELLO IT's still me is there anyone here i really do hope you don't plan to give up your story because after 61 chapters it would be very damage. your story is really really great . UPDATE VERY SOON PLEASE IT's been a lot of time since your last update! i'm keep on reading and i would love to know what 's going to happen next! i understand maybe you are busy but good writers who write long stories with each character not too ooc are very rare so keep on going i'm waiting! tanks a lot and to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ICYGIRL on April 09, 2005
    review please it's a wonderful story and it's been awhile since yor last update don't plan on give up after 61 chpters ! well i understand you are maybe very busy whatever as soon as you are be able to, update please bye and soon i hope!
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  • From ANON - ICYGIRL on April 02, 2005
    SORRY I HAVEN't REVIEWED FOR A WHILE BUT I ASSURE YOU I KEEP ON READING YOUR STORY I4S VERY GREAT BECAUSE YOU EXPLORE VERY WELL EACH CHARACTERS' fEELINGS. A STORY WHERE YOU MIX A LOT OF GENDER. WELL KEEP ON GOING AND I HOPE YOU WILL TRY TO UPDATE SOON.I CAN't WAIT; bye and see you next CHAPTER.
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  • From ANON - ICYGIRL on March 10, 2005
    WOW YOU4RE FANFIC IS ALWAYS FANTASTIC AND I CAN4T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERS ; you have a good imagination and to keep on on the same level with 61 chapters without boring your readers! wow!! so see you to the next chapters;
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  • From ANON - queenofnothing on March 06, 2005
    really good story...i started reading it on ff.net. you write really well, and i can't spot too many spelling/grammar errors...however, there are some areas in the story where the words seem to get warped, where there are just a bunch of random letters. thought you'd like to know. keep writing!
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  • From ANON - Neko_Chaos on March 03, 2005
    This is a wonderful story! It's just as great as the story "The Lucky Ones" that you mentioned earlier! My only request is that you put more Sess/Kag into the story. I was starting to miss Fluffy for awhile, (sadness!) i'm going to keep checking back to see when you up date cause i'm anxious to see what happens... Also I was wondering if you had some sort of grudge against Miroku? Poor Guy seems to be getting the short end of the stick! Hehe.

    Neko_Chaos-chan
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  • From ANON - Angelicmaiden on February 28, 2005
    Oh no! I just spent two days reading this. Don't stop now, PLEASE! I need to know what is going to happen! LOL.
    Great job! You are a very talented writer. ^.^
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  • From ANON - Fairia13 on February 27, 2005
    Fate - Wow girl, I'm so glad you finally updated! The chapters were awesome, and hella long too! It's hilarious what you're doing with Jaken; though I'm not particularly interested in him as anything other than a possible football, I love the way you use him as comic relief. How do you think he'll react when he finds out Kagome's preggers? I'm going to predict open mouth, insert foot and the probability of an immineient attack on eith Kagome's part or Sesshomaru's. It would be funny, I think, if Kagome went off on him and put the fear of God poor Sexxxomaru, who's standing on the sidelines. (Sorta like O.O; on Sessy's part...)

    And I loved what you did with Niaya - where did you get that name? Anywaym thank you so much for that, it was stupendous!


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  • From ANON - ICYGIRL on February 11, 2005
    IT4S A WONDERFUL STORY FULL OF EMOTIONS ; the pairings are good and characters feelings are ver well-analySed.SO PLEASE DON't give up this wonderful story and i hope you will update soon.i enjoy it!! DON't give up !! good luck i can't wait to know the next chapters .

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  • From ANON - Supi_chan1026 on December 31, 2004
    FOR THE LOVE OF ALL THAT IS HOLY, PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAASE, write another chapteeer reeaaally soon. I just can't wait . don't let us your faithful readers down.... =P
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  • From ANON - Courtney on December 24, 2004
    Dude, THIS STORY SO ROCKS!
    Write more PLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAASE!
    I can't wait the suspense is KILLIN ME @_@!
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  • From ANON - OtakuSailorV on December 05, 2004
    Good update. ^^ I loved it, as always. Nice job and keep it up. Happy Holidays, btw.
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  • From ANON - kenoshi on December 02, 2004
    please update soon with more on Kagome and Sesshoumaru.
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  • From OtakuSailorV on November 23, 2004
    Very good chapter, once again. ^^ Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Fairia13 on November 05, 2004
    MUAH-HA-HA-HA-HAAA!! I'M AWAKE!!!!

    And I'm off of work too! ^.^

    And b/c of all of the goings-on, I actually got to read the last chapter instead of *blearily* Sango...Inuyasha..Mew?...wheee..flying...stupid monk....*hit's floor*

    Look! Its a bird...!
    It's a plane....!
    No! It's Kiraria!!!

    *static* "Kiraria1, Musashi tower, traffic; oak tree at four o'clock, wind estimated zero-zero-three at five, runway two-two left, cleared to land."

    Translation: "Kiraria1," (aircraft's - not plane's - callsign) "this is the local air traffic control tower (Musashi). There's a tree to your left so avoid it, cuz if you hit it, it's gonna hurt. Other than that, the wind is estimated at three knots and coming from five degrees" (zero degrees being due north). "You're assigned runway is two-two left and you are cleared for a full stop." (Runways are also measure by degrees from north. So if it's twenty-two, pronounced two-two to avoid communication errors, that means it's actually two-hundred-twenty degrees from north and on the right. Markings at the end of the runway will be seen as 22L from the sky. The L - left - is to signify that it is parallel with another runway [21R] which is probably being used for practice approaches such as touch-and-gos or low approaches. In other words, people who aren't making a full stop.)

    That, Ladies and Gentlemen, is your basic Air Traffic Control Tower Operator phrasology lesson for the day. You think I'm joking? Next time you're on a plane and the pilot announces you're begining descent, plug your headphones into the armrest and listen to the radio stations. If you're lucky you'll be able to tune into the tower frequncy and listen to the ATCers babble. Phrasology differs rom place-to-plce depending on the needs of the airfield, but that's basically wht you'll hear. You'll also hear phrases like "Roger" (I understand and don't require a response) "WILCO" ( I understand and will comply), and "Affermative" (which is a fancy way of saying yes).

    So, Fate, what have you learned today??

    *evil cackle*
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