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By : girltype
  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 07, 2006
    Also, when whill Shippo get into the story, if at all? And I don't suppose there'll be any backstory on how Rin came to live in Inutaisho's palace, will there? Ah, well. Again, laters.
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on August 07, 2006
    Okay, just caught up on the two latest chapters, and just who did Kohaku kill? I doubt he could take down Kouga, and while he might be able to take down Hiten or Manten individually, there's no way he could take them on at the same time(Inuyasha himself barely managed it, though that *was* admittedly with five shards in their possession at the time...). And you haven't really said who has the last two. Now I really look forward to chapter ten!! Laters.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on August 03, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - swasdiva (not signed in) on July 22, 2006
    Do you remember the Nickelodeon TV show "The Adventures of Pete and Pete"? And if so, do you remember Artie? I hope you do, because right now, I need to borrow his catchphrase: inflection, bizarre hand gestures and all.

    This is the greatest fan-FIC...in the WOOOORRRRLLLDD!!!!!!

    If that is lost on you, I do apologize. Just pay attention to the comment itself, because yes, I mean it. I love this story. The intrigue is mesmerizing, the craftmanship is chilling and beguiling all at once, and the menace...oh, the *menace* of desire and plotting and coy *subterfuge*!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!! Yes, I'm smitten with every hot man that graces the IY stage, but never have I come across a story that practically wallows in their brazen masculinity as much as it mocks their self-indulgent bravado. Each man is just on *fire* with hotness, but completely at the mercy of Kagome, and to a different extent, the reader. Yeppers, I live vicariously through Kagome because as she feels power or helplessness, I can't help but commiserate. Guess that's what amazing writing does to a person, true? Of course Naraku doesn't fit into the standard male mold you've created, for good reason. Ah, I just noticed something: he and Sesshoumaru seem to be the only two not completely under Kagome's influence. Yes, Sesshoumaru wants to bed her, I guess, but so far he's merely a pretty bauble on the shelf, not the focal point. I know figuring out that Naraku and Sesshoumaru will eventually be the only two men who can really influence Kagome is not that much of a revelation, but the sleek way you've built that dichotomy is. That's what I'm impressed with, the tenure you've given both these men, even if Sesshoumaru's hasn't been earned quite yet. I think it's more of an impression you've made on me more than it is a startling discovery concerning the plot. So yeah...I'm impressed!

    Take all the time in the world you need when updating, my dear. When each chapter is as spellbinding as this one, I could wait a few decades and still be enthralled.
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  • From ANON - lemom_ice on January 11, 2006
    your story is quite brilliant! congradulations! it is wonderfully written, and extremely believable. and even though do not approve of the 'courtasian' buisness, it is certainly a new angle, and you have made it an utterly fascinating story. one that could even be am actual story, not just a fan-fic. it is brilliant, and i cant wait for more! and i hope you do add more, though it seems it has been awhile since you last updated, i wont hold my breathe, but i hope that if you haven't been working on this story for awhile, and you read this, that you wil continue, because it is brilliant!

    sincerely,
    Lemon_ice
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on January 04, 2006
    omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg omg OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS AMAZING!!!!!! I LOOOOOOOVE IT!!!! YOU HAVE TO UPDATE IN LIKE 2 MINUTES OR IM GOING TO DDDDDIIIIIIIEEEEEEE!!!! this story is sooo amazingly awesome!! please oh please oh please update really really soon!!! im begging with everything that i am!! plllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaaasssssssseeeeeeee UPDATE!!!! thank you soo much! -bows to the amazingly talented author- sesshysgirl08-
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  • From ANON - LIQUIDCELL on December 31, 2005
    Just saw Memoirs of a Geisha.... heh...I was afraid the fic was turning into something like it.

    You've updated... please be kind and update more often!
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  • From ANON - Elisa on December 29, 2005
    I really am enjoying this story, and I'm glad this chapter cleared up the difference between a courtesan and a geisha, because I really didn't know until now. I can't wait for the next chapter so please don't make us wait much longer and update soon. ^_~
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  • From ANON - amhor56 on December 24, 2005
    AHHHH! You finally updated. I always came to see if you updated and them BAM! There it is. A wonderful, beautifuly written chapter. As said, it was a wonderfully amazig chapter. I felt angry though by Sesshoumaru's words concerning Kagome. But I know things will get better between the two. Please try and update as soon as you can! I really love and adore this story and I wouldn't like it if you left it incomplete. Thank you!
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  • From ANON - COLE on November 03, 2005
    please update!!!!!!

    i love your fic and have been waiting long for your update!
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 07, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - penpaninu on October 07, 2005
    read the first four chapters of your story before work, then read the rest once I returned home. VERY GOOD STYLE AND STORY. I would love to see more in the future!
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on June 24, 2005
    Aw! The chapter ended so cute and playful...I loved it! Hope you update soon; I like this story more and more each chapter.

    Much
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  • From ANON - a reader on June 24, 2005
    Oh very good. I love your writing style. This fanfiction is a beautiful masterpiece!
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2005
    *giggles insanely*

    I love how you have written this so far...especaily kagome, She is not a flake. I love it.

    The ears...chicks always dig the ears!

    Though If I could choose between the two brothers Sesshomaru would be my pic most definatly.

    Sel
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