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Reviews for The Path of Pins

By : girltype
  • From swasdiva on June 19, 2005
    This is probably the most seductive story I've ever read. You have mastered the art of female persuasion with your cunning words. Honestly, I think the intrigue and deception you've crafted are more erotic than any blatant sex scene I've read. There's a darkness in your story that's only emphasized by the rhythmic lilt of your writing style. Your characterizations are rush and naturally assimilated into our canon knowledge of how these people should and would act. And what an amazing twist with Naraku and Kagome's relationship. That's so original it's frightening. And is it wrong for me to suddenly have a crush on kohaku? Ah well, you write him as a man, a very sexy, brooding one at that. I'm addicted to this story. I can't wait for you to update and expound on Naraku's devious plot further. Really, the lemon can wait, because these chapters are much like very enjoyable foreplay. Amazing work.
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  • From ANON - Kagomereborn on June 17, 2005
    Hello....I thought I should try and review like you aske4d....Chap one...you gave a nic prolude but you may have extended just a bit more.....Chap 2 & 3 I liked and thought were solid.....Chap 4 & 5...I like the way you make Kagome think harder and more mature if mind than the series...but stil there is a pleasant softness to her...even though she seemed knid of hornier than some fifteen year old virgins that learn their life is going to be on their "bac' so to speak but I like the change... Chap 5 &6 were ingenius...ANd CHap 7 had me laughin till bout teaars....there I hope you like my review and I eagerly await your next addition...
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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on June 17, 2005
    Poor Inuyasha, everyone wants to play with his ears. Intrigiuing developments, nice how you included Hojo and Miroku, and let me guess who's related that female Kistune, but probably not there since he *is* just a little boy(Or did you age him up, too?). Laters!
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  • From ANON - Wolfye Productions on June 17, 2005
    This story is absolutely enchanting. It's lyrical quality puts me in mind of fairytales, although with a very erotic twist. It's absolutely lovely. I look forward to reading more of it when you are able.
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  • From ANON - Misty on May 23, 2005
    Keep this story up!!
    it is VERY good!!
    0-:^1
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on March 02, 2005
    Interesting...Very well written, and I'd love to see this continued!
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on February 18, 2005
    Great job on the newer chapters! I'm so glad to finally read some more of your story...it keeps getting more and more interesting to me. Thanks for the e-mail to let me know you updated! I loved the update!! Keep those chapters rolling.
    Much luck and love,
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - essie on February 17, 2005
    wow this is great great
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  • From ANON - Spunki on February 17, 2005
    Wonderful Story !! The best I read so far, and I did read a lot !!! I hope you will continue soon !!!

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  • From ANON - Scorpinac on February 17, 2005
    Intriguing development, not exactly a usual pairing, per se. Will Jaken also be in this, I wonder? Most likely, I suppose, but your call in the end. Well, laters.
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  • From ANON - Kotori on February 17, 2005
    Very nicely written. I was hooked in the very first chapter. The plot is flowing smoothly and each event is well-planned and placed. I would completely recommend this fic to anyone, regardless of their pairing preference. Although, I must say that S/K is one of my favorites.
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  • From Resmiranda on December 01, 2004
    Extremely promising. Am looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - KagoKitty on November 28, 2004
    Wow! I am loving this...so dark, yet not too dark...and so well written! *giggle* I know it must've been embarrassing when your father read some of this...but what if he read that last part...?? Ha...anyway, great job...hopefully there'll be much more soon.
    Oh I was wondering...if you could remember to, that is, to maybe email me when you update this? You don't have to, but it may take me much much longer to run back across this when you update it because I have such a wacky schedule.

    Much love,
    =^-.~^=
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  • From ANON - Numisma on November 27, 2004
    this was HOT.


    there are a few spelling/grammatical errors here and there, and some run-on sentences that could be split up, but the content itself is very promising. i would suggest a beta reader simply for fixing up those errors. your writing style is very fluid and elegant, without sounding pretentious.
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  • From ANON - A Flower-sama on November 18, 2004
    Your Dad caught you? Lol! I have fanfics on ff.net and my friends founf it and showed the guy I liked what a twisted mind I had, hehe. Well, as per the chapter, another great one! One down-- wait, how many left to go? Lucky Kag.
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