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Reviews for The Path of Pins

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  • From ANON - loopypants on November 17, 2004
    I like Ilike. Very well written. The best I have read so far. Please email me when you have put another chap up:)
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  • From ANON - YoukaiNME on November 17, 2004
    TY TY TY...finally a story where Naraku isn't so evil!!
    Interesting to see Hiten in the story to!!
    Oh my goodness on your Dad seeing the story, I would have died, and went 100 shades of red!!
    Good Work, very interesting!!
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  • From ANON - inieda on August 21, 2004
    You have the same lyrical writing style of Jacqueline Carey. Mixing Inuyasha with that makes an interesting homage to Kushiel's Dart. It makes me want to read that book again while I (patiently) wait for your next chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - A Flower-sama on August 18, 2004
    Ooh, I love your story so far. It's very interesting. Unlike most stories, the prologue wasn't dull and boring and each chapter held my attention. I like Kagome's character design, she's not some whimpering, slobering, and and highly-annoying lap-dog. Good job. To sum it up, you have a really enjoyable story here. I'll just have to wait patiently for the next chapter! :)
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  • From ANON - Tom on August 11, 2004
    Wow this is getting good
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  • From ANON - Somnambulicious on August 10, 2004
    Ooh, six shards to find! Will there be six different men who hold the shards? I'm guessing one is Hiten, and one is Sesshoumaru...who else could there be?

    Inuyasha?
    Miroku?
    Inutaisho? (hey, it's AU...he doesn't have to be dead!)
    Kouga?
    Hojo? (Hm...that would most likely be a very boring lemon.)
    Youko Kurama? (I know, I know, it's not a crossover, but a girl can dream, can't she?)
    Jaken? (Just kidding. Please, do not take that seriously.)

    You have the opportunity to do a wide variety of lemons here, and I can't wait to see what you have in store for your readers.
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  • From ANON - alaina on June 01, 2004
    hey good story naraku is too nice but oh ell the story is still good and update soon k?
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  • From ANON - MADFAN on May 31, 2004
    Great story really looking forward to reading more
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  • From ANON - Alemap on May 31, 2004
    Hi,
    I don't normally review, I haven't much time too, but I just had to tell you something. The personal voice in the story is wonderful; very delicate and perfectly capturing the personallity of your Kagome. I wouldn't usually tell people this, as it would be quite insincer, but have you considered writing professionally? Your pacing is well formed and you seem to have a good grasp on cause eff effect with different variable additions (ie: you have the ability to understand different individual modivations). Your writing is a bit rough in some areas- I was too caught up in giving you a review to remember to cite any specific spots- but I don't know of a writer who do't h't have a team of editors correcting their stuff before final print, so there isn't much of a problem there. Really, I intend to check up on you every day hoping for an update to your story.

    Sincerly yours,
    Alemap

    P.S.- Sorry about any spelling errors; no time for spell checker.
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  • From ANON - O.O on May 31, 2004
    JEEBUS YOU'RE GOOD! You're better then good.. You're like the best author ever! I just wish your chapters were a little longer and closer together in updating... But I'll wait a year to get the next chapter if I have to. I absolutely love your style, and you're so .... perfect. It's rare you find such perfection on this site. Even some of the best authors make mistakes on things, but your's is magnificent..
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  • From ANON - Yvonne (Not signed on) on May 10, 2004
    Hehehe..I loved it!
    This is the first I have ever seen a story like this.
    It's very interesting!
    ^_^ As long as you keep me notified of your updates you will always have a review from me!
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  • From EvilNekoEatsYourSoul on May 10, 2004
    Being that I am a fan of both Inuyasha and Kushiel's Dart I'm really excited to see where you take this. I very much enjoyed reading this first chapter and am looking forward to reading the rest. ^_^ Good luck with your writing.
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  • From ANON - Unknown on May 10, 2004
    That was absolutely, positively brillant! You write very well and I'm sure to keep an eye on this story. Keep it up, man!
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  • From migele on May 10, 2004
    A good idea.
    Hope the plot will keep up.

    migi
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  • From ANON - tonia on May 10, 2004
    sound pretty good so far. please keep up the good work. i look forward to the next update.
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