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Reviews for Pulling Her Down

By : aishiteru
  • From ANON - subaru on May 22, 2004
    ummm.........I think you should do a lemon. It would do good w/ this story. Well I hope there are more chapters. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Tammy on May 22, 2004
    Should you extend the story with a lemon?? Huh? You're joking right? Don't we ply you with enough reviews? because I could send MORE reviews, if you are having doubts... you know we want a LEMON, silly rabbit. I don't care what you make them do, just keep writing it. I lurve this story!!!! Every chapter is sweeter than the last. (smiles at author with mouth full of rotten teeth) Cavity central, baby.
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  • From ANON - Interested Reader on May 21, 2004
    I liked this chapter just the way it is (Chapter 6) and now I can't wait for the lemon cake to come out of the oven and be served up next! ;)

    I did announce your story to my Inuyasha Group and I noticed that you saw the announcement and responded. I look forward to hearing more from you on the group message page.
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  • From ANON - ME on May 21, 2004
    Oooooohhhh!! YES!! DE-FIN-ATE-LY!!! A LEMON!!!!!! I'm a hentai, and proud of it ^_~
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  • From ANON - Fire Witch1 (2ff.net) on May 21, 2004
    LEMONLEMONLEMON!!! LOL He gave hera hickey!! XD
    Continue ASAP!
    Love the story it's good, BTW what's the sight the whole version of the story is on?
    -^^
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  • From ANON - Patricia on May 21, 2004
    Thanks for the support. If you could e-mail the link to the first chapter of your other story I'll begin to read it. The next chapter of Redemption will be ready soon along with the other mediaminer chapters. Keep up the good work
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  • From ANON - Alesyira on May 21, 2004
    I loved it just the way it was! But, I would also be happy reading a lemon addition to this.

    I wish I had more to say, because sweet stories deserve better reviews, but, it was just great!
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  • From ANON - ~A~ on May 21, 2004
    Oh come on, you went all this way and no lemon? =P You should finish it with a lemon, it's the logical ending. So you should have them do it, for the sake of logic of course. ^_^
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  • From ANON - drakµ¨ ‘ on May 21, 2004
    there are reasons i think your a fabulous author adn this chapter just confirmed it.
    HOT DAMN!!!!
    everything about this chapter was great. the language was, as usual, wonderful. the emotions and phystical reactions were well described with nothing too trite. that part at the end when they realize things may be going too fast-OMG! KUDOS FOR SLOWING THINGS DOWN!!!!! now as my alter ego Smut Monster can testify, i'm all for a good lemon but with taking the road less chosen, well, that made all the difference. your restraint only elevated this fic into a more mature realm of writing and i, for one, applaud you for that. Not (as SmutMonster growls threateningly) that if you decide to write a lemon, i won't read it. to read a lemon that will be as well written as your will, i can safely say be a pleasure. (no pun intended, you dirty girl!!!! Bad you!! naughty naughty!) anyways, congrats a fic well done if this turns out to be the ending.thisthis isn't the end, i will be reviewing later!
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  • From ANON - szmadad on May 21, 2004
    Help, I've melted and I can't get up :) Wow...I don't know how put put words together that can convey so much tenderness and heat without being totally hentai! And yipee, they have confessed their feelings. I love Inu's humor at the end when he kids Kag about Sessh!

    I'm *so* looking forward to reading more so that I can read the lemon...(now I'm being the hentai)..because you have such a way with words and creating images!

    Looking forward to next chapter :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2004
    I thought this story was very sweet and an excellent version of what could happen if Inuyasha really did pull her down with him.

    I think that with the way this story is going, there doesn't really have to be a lemon part, but it wouldn't hurt it either. The whole snogging thing seems to work out just fine for this story line. Keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - LadyCatBailey on May 21, 2004
    *squeaks and falls over* *stares blindly* Oh...wow...whew. *coughs* Is it hot in here? Its hot in here. *tugs shirt* Really hot in here. Where the hell is a sexy hanyou when you need one!? ARGH. I love you as much as I hate you right now-darling, this fiction is truly wonderful. Its beautiful, sweet...you truly convay all the emotions-the fear and the overwheleming sorrow they both have, then the sweet passion...whew...passion...uhmmm...*fans face*

    I seriously doubt I will be the only person asking fora lemon. I think I just might die, I mean...no lemon...*lip quivers* Honsetly, damn Kagome for speaking up! *thumps Kagome* ForGET talking, women, speak in BODY LANGUGE! The speak of loooovers....*spot lights come on and I grab a mic* LETS GET IT OOON! OWWWWW! YEAH! LETS GET IT ONNN! WHEEEEOWWW! o.o *is maimed by Yasha*

    SOrry. Moment.

    Even though I'm being a whiny little bitch baby over the no lemon thing, I love this. Should you decide to continue with a lemon (*begs...lots...offers pocky and Pepsi and my undieing devotion*) I'm sure there will some very pleased Yasha fans out there. And I'm sure Yasha will love you. Ehehehe...*Leers* Yaaasha's hooooorny....*points and laughs...then figures out taunting a sexually frustrated hanyou maybe isn't the greatest idea...runs. fast.* Anywho, if you don't, that was a beautiful, sweet ending.

    Damn I wish I could write like you. SO sweet. So good. So hot. Yummy Yummy Yaaaasha....*drools*

    Much Love,
    Cat
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  • From ANON - Mischief on May 21, 2004
    Loved chap. 6. I, personnaly don't think it needs any changes at all. It was great the way it was! ;)
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  • From on May 20, 2004
    Wow, excellent. Thanks for a great story! Can't wait to see how far this goes.... ;)
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  • From ANON - Raining_like_tears on May 20, 2004
    Oh, WOW, Oh, WOW, Oh, WOW! This story is...INCREDIBLE!! You've taken something that most people think is funny, and but a reality check to it. You're right, IF Kagome ever did a 'face plant' like that, she would definitely get busted up. I could just see Inuyasha doing exactly that too. Not thinking first when he reacted but then get all torn up inside. Are you going to tell us why he pulled her down or why she said sit? I guess it really doesn't matter, just leave it to the imagination as to whatever.

    It's really great that you have both of them thinking thoughts about the other. I think Inuyasha's a given, because he's always worried about her (well, almost always), but Kagome usually never shows a thought of remorse sitting him, except the time she did it by accident and then she only laughed it off. This shows a whole new side of her.

    I just love the little banter you have between them too. Especially the "I wasn't kissing you" fumble, and where he's getting her to sit him again. Panties! HA!

    I'm looking so forward to reading the next chapter... it's driving me crazy that he's 'in pause' at the moment. I love the details you give. Some might say they're long, but you nearly give steps as to everything so it's like a person's right there having it done to them. God, if you ever right a lemon...!!

    Well, great, great, did I say great? job! Please, please don't stop writing.
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