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By : badkittie
  • From ANON - Tammy on May 29, 2004
    When you redo something, God bless you, you REDO it. Chapter three stole my breath!!! I don't want to sound like an English teacher...I avoid critiquing people because I am not a very experienced writer, and I am never really sure if what I have to say is the best advice to give...but I will give you a constructive peice of praise. The attention you gave to the character's surroundings, and the extended glimpses into the character's thoughts/feelings/ideas, took a section of your writing that was good and exciting beforehand and made it attention-TSEALING schwing fest. The exra time and introspect just really gives the story a less rushed feeling, and makes it more suspenceful. I was so pleased at the effect that the re-write had;you should NEVER rush...you have too much potential as a writer, and too much to say as a storyteller. I was just wowed...I should send you and Numisma both choclate. Have. Mercy.

    (presses coke can up against face) Yeah. I just stared across the room at my blissfully slumbering boyfriend hissing curses under my breath for like ten minutes after reading that. lol. No, it would be a joke if a super-hot guy tried to blackmail me....within a few days he'd be trying to blackmail me into leaving him ALONE. "Help this Ho is a complete HEADCASE!!"

    (SIGH)

    Anyway, enough of my impossible dreams, what the HELL are the assassins visiting Kag's lunchtable for?!? And I just know you want to give me a clue about when I'm gonna see some action?!? (bats eyelashes and holds forth plte of chewy warm brownies) This is one tense situation. Totally, deliciously tense. Please update soon! I am freakin' dyin' to know what's gonna go down....And I SO want to know what's gonna happen under those bleachers...*evil grin* Sweet job!

    Luv Ya, Tam ~_^ !!!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on May 28, 2004
    Aww.. the chapter was much too short for my liking, but great art takes time if only in installments. My one complaint is that the story seems to not be flowing as well as it could be. Perhaps it is because the chapters are short or that you end every chapter on suspenseful note, but this is my one little complaint.

    Keep writing though, the story is great and I look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - me on May 28, 2004
    talk huh? does she know about inuyasha or will she confess about miroku
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2004
    talk huh? does she know about inuyasha or will she confess about miroku
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  • From ANON - Feminafures on May 28, 2004
    OOhh... I think it's going to get hairy later on for little Kagome. I feel sorry for that Hojo though, he's so naive..lol.
    Is Sango pregnant? I think you alluded to it in earlier chapters, but now I'm not sure.

    Well, anyway, keep up the good work and update soon!

    Gia
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  • From ANON - Yessi on May 28, 2004
    u gotta update now i can't wait no more u have 2 everyday i think dis is da best story i've read and i've revied on all sites of fanfiction and suchi didn't think some of da stories were worthy of being reviewed 4rm me and ur da 1st so i think u should update thanx fo da story bein great update soon

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  • From ANON - InuYoukaiOtaku on May 28, 2004
    Wow! Another AWESOME chapter ^_^ Thanks for reading my fanfic, but I doubt I'm going to get around to uploading my other chapters on this website..too lazy ^_^' There are 20 chapters of it on Inuyasha.net It's lmy smy second home...lol Everyone is so nice there and I get so much more reviews there then I do anywhere else.

    My username..you can't type on a keyboard on Inuyasha.net..so Look for the title. lol (dont ask about the typing thing, if you see my username by the title of story..you'll understand..lol

    I can't wait for your next chapter..lol I'm always online, and I get bored and check several times a day to see if you update, it's at the top of my favorites! (literally..lol)

    ^_^
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  • From ANON - Crystal on May 28, 2004
    oh im luvin all of it the concept, story line, good grl goin bad lol-keep goin
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  • From ANON - Liz on May 28, 2004
    Oooohhhhh naughtiness.... heh heh.. *grins* Great chappie! Can't wait til the next review! Email meh if you can.

    With Much Love
    Huggles
    ~Liz~

    Ja! ^_^
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  • From ANON - drake220 on May 28, 2004
    ::long drawn out sigh:: kagome! USE YOUR FREAKIN BRAIN! just wear your underwear the whole day adn take them off right before! hello?? eeesh, use those neurons! and inu's a piece of shit for even coming up with that little idea.....public humliation is pointless b/c then her reputation is ruined anyways! but oh, kagome's not thinking with her brain above the belt,s o to speak, now is she? no, she is not. and what the HELL is miroku doing asking kikyo (and how the heck does she get away dressed like in school???????) to fuck him when he has a girlfriend in the very short tempered sango? oh, she's gonna kick his cheating ass when she hears about that. WHAM, y'know? update soon
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  • From ANON - nena on May 28, 2004
    Poor Kag. That had to be traumatizing for her. I hope she doesn't give in that easily.
    It would be nice to see her fight it out. She seems to have a good support system at home. Hopefully, it helps her survive this. I can't believe Inu Yasha did
    THAT to her. Did Miroku go along with it?
    As for Miroku and Sango, I like how there relationship is going. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - deville on May 27, 2004
    i love your story. if you don't update soon, i'll send you to hell
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  • From ANON - szmadad on May 27, 2004
    Hmm..you have a naughty naughty idea going with this story...it's more than the usual "good lil' Kagome being attracted to bad boy Inuyasha" type of plot. It will be interesting to see if *real* feelings will develop between the two, given the strange way they are starting out. I'm not sure what is in store for Inu-Kag but I hope it won't be anything that would stop them from getting into a real relationship...but I'll keep reading to find that out. You have me curious! :)
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  • From ANON - Tammy on May 27, 2004
    Okay, so you know that weird car-horn noise that happens when Roger Rabbit's eyes bugg out in the old movie 'Who Framed Roger Rabbit'? Yeah. So I made that noise when I reread this chapter. Obviously I saw it before you reloaded it. WHAA, WITH THE TEXT MESSA! T! This guy is pretty f-ing serious about having people respect his authori-ti, ne? Ohh, no, this is every hentai babe's fantasy!!!

    I am sorry....It cat cannot get over the text message! You might want to make a note at the beginning of your next chappie to make sure everyone gets that. That was wicked! WTF? How would you like to wake up to some shit like that?! "Rise and shine my hot little peice of ass...meet me under the bleachers today after school...you know, the bleachers riight in front of your boyfriend's track meet...yep,those bleachers...*wear your new work clothes!*...and be SNAPPY about it!! My erection doet apt appreciate tardiness. I'm a punctual sort of hoodlum. Wind your watch, bitch! Love Inu-chan."

    I am just trippin' out over this story of yours. I've never reviewed one chapter 3x before. But hey, first time for everything, right? Anyway, I will be panting after an update. (Tammy prays feverently, "please let it be a chapter full of nothing but fabulous smut!!") But I know whatever it is you're going to cliff me next time, arn'tcha? Well, I take what n gen get... See ya soon!!

    Love, Tam ^_^
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  • From ANON - Queen on May 27, 2004
    This was so so good! So please update o I can read more of this.
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