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By : badkittie
  • From ANON - truelove on January 24, 2005
    I just love Sesshoumaru. So sexy yet so deadly.
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  • From ANON - drake220 on January 24, 2005
    you updated! how exciting!! yay!! poor miroku. i think that choosing for him to get raped was a very interesting and apt in a poetic justice sort of way.
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  • From ANON - Mia on January 19, 2005
    Please post more!!!!! *is addicted to ficy*
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  • From ANON - Yashie on January 17, 2005
    please continue this fic rocks!
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  • From ANON - keiko on January 06, 2005
    OMG this is the best I've read so far. SO what does happen in the end
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  • From ANON - ivy on December 29, 2004
    im so sorry for what happenned to you ,some people just dont respect other peoples work. but please dont let this disencourage you ,your story is great and i hope you keep on writing it and please update soon im dying here(lol)
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  • From on December 27, 2004
    My gosh, I didn't notice I never reviewed before! So sorry! I think I might have on my other account. Anyhow, Great ficcie! Don't get sick or die or anything, can't wait to see how this is going to turn out! :D Keep it up! Im witcha all the way! Plugging Up Authors is the way to go!
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  • From ANON - Kikyo is a bitch on December 25, 2004
    I would like a review your story. Please send me yourlatest chapters. Your story is awesome. You kept drama. That is so like Inuaysha. Inuyasha and Kagome what will happen in later chapters? I must know.
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  • From ANON - HN on December 22, 2004
    Dear Kitten,

    I've read through all of your stories posted on AFF, and I have to admit that this one is my favourite. You have the dominant male, submissive female down to an art. Unlike others, I don't mind the detailed fashioned bits, they're just part of your style. I notice you pay the same detailed attention when describing important rooms and other things, which just sets the scene. I read a few comments that advised you to expand on the character's emotions rather than these physical attributes, but what's on the outside often does tell a story about what's on the inside. Also, you sometimes describe how a certain character sees another or sees a room, giving us emotion and depth, while still describing a physical attribute. Guess this is just my long way of saying, don't stress those other reviews ^_^

    I admit that I was a bit worried when Inu had Kag in the *cough*dugeon*cough* as it seems just too unreal and fantastic to me. But, I kept with your story, and found both the bathroom scene and the bleachers scene really, really good. And, having already read the dugeon scene, I was more open minded when you threw more fantastical aspects into your story. In fact, I love how this does seem like a fantasy, how you've unleashed your imagination and twisted things to your liking to fit your AU. It's nice to see such an unrestrained writer!

    Another aspect of your story I've enjoyed is how you include many characters, and not just as flat characters either. You go that one step futher to give each charater life, making many of them three dimensional -including your bad guys, which many people fail to do! I'm particularly looking forward to some Rin/Sess, especially given the way you've set Sess up in this story. And Rin, I'm sure you already had it in mind, but please, give her enough backbone to stand up to Sess... after the pet kitty incident, he deserves some payback!

    As for Kagome, yes, you have written her character voice less strongly than many of the male characters. But I see you as a writer with a strong male voice. There's nothing wrong with that. I believe as you have Kagome develop into her powers, you will find that her voice grows and you will naturally write more with her POV. At the moment, I'm thrilled with her innocence and her inability to resist Inu. Let's face it, many woman fantisize about the dominant male and semi-forced sex. About surrendering. About being seduced. I mean, how many romance heroines are tender virgins?? Hee. You know what the readers want and you deliver. Bless you for doing so when many authors are trying to be more politically correct. This is perfect, pure fantasy smut. Hooray!

    anyways, thanks again for writing this wonderful story. Once more, I'll gently remind how much I'm looking forward to some Rin/Sess ^_^

    HN
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  • From ANON - anime fan on December 21, 2004
    ok, seriously...CAN'T find this story on MM.org. a little help?! *innocent, "help me" expression*. thanks. someone emaile me if you know the link!!!
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  • From ANON - mimi on December 09, 2004
    did you just say this story is now om mediaminer bcause if you did i can't find it
    by the way i love this story
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  • From ANON - Spike Of Doom on December 09, 2004
    Well i havnt reviewed this story in a while cause i just read like 5 chapters and wow i forgot how good this sotry was One of the best stories on AFF really no dout about it! Ill be sure to look out for your update this time :S
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  • From ANON - LilCin on December 08, 2004
    hi, umm u said that u began posting ur story on MM.org, but i tried seached for ur story Bad Boy but i cant find it can u tell me if its dat name or other name cuz i lik ur story alot n i would hate it if i didnt get to read da rest! so plz hitme back n tell me da name of da story on MM.org or ur Nickname.

    thx
    bye!
    -LilCin-
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  • From ANON - Jake on December 07, 2004
    hey great i like it. personalluy i dont like sess kag fics. they really dont belong together. anyways i love this story please update soon. plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz. Thanx.

    Jake.
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  • From ANON - anime fan on December 04, 2004
    hi there! i went on mm.org to check this story there (it has that automatic email thing, when an author updates, so i'd rather read it there) but i couldn't seem to find it. what is the name on mm.org? please let me know.
    thanx! :)
    btw good story!
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