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Reviews for While Kagome's Away, Demons Will Play

By : kogaluver
  • From ANON - kitkat on June 18, 2004
    I really like your story. I enjoyed it. I'm just gonna stop reading here, cawellwell het....irks me. I'll stop here, and cherish the yaoi momments.
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  • From ANON - christine on June 17, 2004
    you made that chapter great!!!!!! perfect lemon with the fluff/sap put in just right! i cant wait for the next chapter! but one thing is i dont think you should put a kagome kouga inuyasha 3-some but hay thats just me! plz update soon!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Shadow Raven on June 17, 2004
    This is a very interesting story. I am such a huge Kouga fan so i had to read the story. I dont like Yaoi stories w/ Kouga/Inuyasha pairings but this story I can make an exception with. I love it. I cant wait to see what Kagome will think in the next chapter. Please update real soon. Awesome story.
    SHADOW RAVEN
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  • From ANON - iaka on June 16, 2004
    im so excited about this fic!! i love it!! but i do agree with kou/inu! i think it should stay just kouga and inuyasha!! I LOVE THIS FIC!!! plz update soon!!
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  • From ANON - kou/inu! on June 16, 2004
    im lovthisthis story!! 1 thing though i dont think ya should have a three some with kagome. but hay this story still rocks!!
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  • From ANON - ionay on June 16, 2004
    yay!! i love this new chap!! inu and kouga are mates!! plz update soon!!
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  • From ANON - Please continue! on June 16, 2004
    If Inuyasha was going to use the jewel to become human then Kagome can damn well use it to extend her life span or become demon. You MUST find a way for them to stay together as a threesome! I love this story! Please! Please! Keep them together forever! (if you lisclosclosely you can hear my piteous begging coming through your computer's speakers right now)
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  • From ANON - Shinna on June 16, 2004
    I wonder how Inuyasha and Kouga are going to explain what they were doing to Kagome? How will she react when they do tell her that they decided to be mates?update soon
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  • From ANON - saiyan_legacy102 on June 15, 2004
    more!!!! must have more of the story! maybe something like: Kagome catches them or something..maybe put Ayame in it too? lovin the fic so far, so pwease continue it

    -saiyan-
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  • From ANON - Toyo on June 14, 2004
    You really should incorporate Kagome into the fanfic next time. Or Koga and Inuyasha getting caught by Kagome, and she joins in. Or someone else catches them. It would add the element of Koga/Inuyasha trying to stop the person who caught them at it, from telling anyone else and revealing their love-affair.

    You're pretty good at doing this, and the more you make of this fanfic, the better you can get at doing it.
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  • From ANON - Kamui on May 31, 2004
    Hi Nina!!

    This is Christy's daughter. You asked me for my personal opinion on your story since I do write Yaoi and Douji
    I'
    I'm a little rusty because I havn't written in so long, but I'll try my best to help you out on your fanfiction.


    ~ ~ ~ ~


    Well, I do love your story! I like how in the beggining you described how Inuyasha was laying, his pouty look which I adore so much.

    -Parts You Need To Work On-

    In this statement, or sentence, whichever, you don't end it with a punctuation mark like you had in the beggining. So a reader for example might think he's thinking more things than you want him to.

    Inuyasha’s nose twitched. ‘What the hell is that scent? Oh… shit…, he’s not getting embarrassed or flustered he’s getting… aroused? Shit! Me and my dumb ideas.'
    Same thing Here
    Inuyasha was tramping through the forest sulking. ‘I can’t believe Kagome’s mom dragged her off to a family reunion for four days! What in the hell am I supposed to do now? I can’t hunt for shards. There is no way I’ll sit around and watch that perverted monk get slapped or hit over the head by Sango or li to to the little rflapflap his jaws about nothing for the next four days.'
    I don't know if you ment this one to be like it is, but I'll show it to you just to check:
    ‘"This is not happening; this is just not happening. Shit!!! Why does that stupid flea-bitten wolf have to show up now?"’ He said grumbling under his breathe.
    Wouldn't those be Quotation marks instead of the ' '?
    That's about all I can find in the first chapter!
    ~ ~ ~ ~
    -Parts that I loved-

    And with that comical thought in mind Inuyasha got out of the water and sauntered over towards a very amused wolf prince.

    Placing an absolutely adorable pout on his face, he said in a hurt tone, “It wasn’t that funny wolf boy”.

    That was just priceless. You sucked me into it! I could -picture- Inuyasha pouting and then sauntering over to Kouga in his little cocky ass way!
    All your discription has gotten me fascinated! I love reading your stories and you NEED to keep writing and roleplaying. Right now I'm roleplaying SessyxInu with Christy. *Winky*

    Always,
    Kamui.
    Kisses and Hugs!

    I do love your fic, it's very detailed, semi-romantic, and funny at the same time. I don't laugh a lot, but I had to snicker and giggle at certain times, or just grin dumbly as I stare at the words on the page before me. *Chuckles*

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  • From ANON - Danni on May 30, 2004
    Omg! that was a totally hot and sexy fan fic. I thought that it was great and I hope you continue it. I honestly prefer yaoi but if you want Kagome to join the mix I'm sure that it'll be awesome. You're a great writer. Hope to see more of your work! Danni
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  • From ANON - aznreject on May 28, 2004
    UR FIRST FIC?!?!?!? WHOA!!! ur soo good xD plez write more i am luvin dis story ^-^

    ((add kagome in dis nxt wun!!!!))
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  • From ANON - dark_orion on May 27, 2004
    ummmm...that was FABULOUS!!!!! Yes, please continue with the story. I, personally, would prefer it to be Kagome-less (she can be annoying at times, ne?), but do what you feel; you obviously have great instincts for it.
    Also, thank you for supplying me with Inuyasha yaoi. This is a category that is woefully underdeveloped, and you have made my search worth the while. THANK YOU!
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  • From ANON - InyYaShasLilNymph on May 26, 2004
    Man...this was one hella good story!
    The details you put into it and their feelings were totally amazing.
    It would be a wish come true if you would continue with this story and bring Keg into it like it mentioned at the end. And or throw in a twist and maybe let that lecherous monk get involved too. Who knows, maybe Keg could get really upset that her Inu and the wolf got involved and as she and Sango are discussing it, decide to find out for themselves what it's like to be one someone of the same sex?
    But I'm rambling. :P
    Anywho, your story kicked some major assage. Plz write morech mch more!
    Thankies, Lei
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