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Reviews for Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past

By : Zelix
  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on February 09, 2005
    Twas a very good chapter and I hope to read the next one very soon(I know its short but I'm tired so sue me ^^) Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on January 27, 2005
    I finally finished right now, it only took me 2 days to read this freaking thing, which was worth my time in reading it. I love how you write things in detail, its much easier to picture the events that you are describing in my head. It’s not boring detail, like in history books, but cool and kinda anticipated persay ^^. Well for the first poll, I hope that Inu Yasha and Kagome live, Shippo is too young, but if it were between him and the previous 2, I would rather him die(cruel I know but what can you do?). Miroku and Sango, I don’t think so, because they have just ‘discovered’ their love for each other, and if one dies, the other will most likely kill themselves, but you’re the author so its your decision whether or not that happens. If Sesshomaru were to die, then the good thing would be that Inu Yasha will we the ruler of the western lands, but not a full youkai(which can be overlooked) but depressing because then Rin would lose her ‘father figure’ but could get adopted by Kagome and Inu Yasha, plus the fact that Sesshomaru is indeed hot, but I can get over that. What the hell just kill Kouga, though he seems to have finally gotten his life straightened out and his tribe would be at a loss and maybe even dangerous position, but who cares, to keep all the previous alive, Kouga should be sacrificed, for all in all, it would be amusing, in a sadistic kind of way. As for the second poll... I would rather see Sesshormaru and Kasaraki fight, and once again die instead of Inu Yasha, instead of Inu Yasha fighting first. But I think inevitably it will be Sesshomaru’s fight first because he’s actually searching for Kasaraki and is too hot-headed to think that he can lose. But once again, this is just my opinion, and I am anticipating future chapters and hope to read them soon, but otherwise keep up the good work ^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Inuchan80 on January 25, 2005
    You updated!!! Yeah!!!

    Poll: I have no guess in who will die, but I'd love to see a fight between Sess and Kasaraki!
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  • From ANON - novastar on January 23, 2005
    To the first question I think Kouga will die.
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on January 23, 2005
    I'm scared to vote...but the with Sesshou.....
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on January 22, 2005
    Uh? *blinks twice* well, Sesshou --- since 'Sesshou' isn't part of Inu's pack? But then again, nobody said how they would die...........so, if not him, then I'm gonna still say Sesshou, for good measure, since that would be kinda unexpected --- and maybe he doesn't know about the super ancient history of our beloved OC.
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  • From ANON - WiccanMethuselah on January 20, 2005
    Kouga, please! don't do away w/Inu/Kag or Sango/Mir just yet, ok?
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  • From ANON - essie on January 20, 2005
    Kouga DIES
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  • From ANON - vashta on January 20, 2005
    Ok, I have to say Koga because he is the only one I could stand to see die! Plus, he was a jerk trying to take Kags, or maybe Miroku, so that Sango can be with the new guy...nooooo... forget that I love Miroku. Definitely koga.
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  • From ANON - catt on January 12, 2005
    Hiya!!!!!! I just wanna say thank you for what you said. I really really apprediate it. I'm not quiting, not by a long shot. I just been having alot of stress in my life lately, and it just built up to the point where I just reacted totally at that person. I usually don't blow up like that. I'm a ver patient claim person, but it just got to me so bad, and I felt like crap for losing my cool, but I'm fine now. I really needed to blow off some steam and I am alot better now. As for what you said about someone sending you a flame, what an asshole, they don't know what they are talking about. Your a great writer!!!!!! I love your stories, I am so sorry that I never reviewed before. But I am a fan. Hheheheh, and I was wondering if you would like to join a group I am setting up. Its for roleplaying, and its inuyasha. So far I am kagome, another girl with be kaede, and well I need guys and girls for certain chracters, or made up characters. If you or anyone else out there are interested please email me, or review me by my story and Ill get back to you. I wont choose who's who, first come first serve. If you make your own character thats cool too. But no kikyo!!!!! I am certainly not having involved with inuyasha. Just inuyasha and kagome, and other pairings, or switching, which ever. I'll explain more soon. Anyways I love your stories!!!! Please update soon!!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on January 08, 2005
    Glad to have you back!!!
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  • From ANON - essie on January 08, 2005
    this is great please update
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  • From ANON - Sango on January 08, 2005
    great story. i loved the last chapter. 10/10 ^-^
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  • From ANON - jodibetz on January 08, 2005
    :) sooo glad you're back!
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  • From ANON - yasmin on December 22, 2004
    . What did you think about the battle scenes?

    Battle see was good.

    2. How is the plot?
    So far good , a bit confusing but i guess it'll come thru as u go along , right? lol

    3. How is Kasaraki?
    He sure is something special,Honerable fo sure. Im still curious of his past. What did he do so bad htat was sealed like that ?

    4. Did you enjoy the Lemon?
    The lemon was tasteful , very nice. ROMANTIC. A+

    5. What was the best scene so far?
    The lemon. Im a sucker fo rlove sorry

    6. Is the text made by the 'unknown' fella at the beginning of each chapter good or bad?
    No is good so far . Just dont take to long to unravel his story. It kinda gets boring when theres too many chapters out and theres still a mystery to him . get me?

    But over all , i love this story .

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