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Reviews for Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past

By : Zelix
  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on December 21, 2004
    Awww. I'm so sad now. Well, take a break and thanks for letting us know *pouts*. In the meantime, have a Merry Christmas/Happy Hannakah/Happy Kwaanza (what ever it is you celebrate). I really was interested in what was going to happen next! Come back soon to us!

    -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - MelMuff on December 20, 2004
    I hope you update soon. I really like this fic a lot.
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  • From ANON - Sess_2005 on December 14, 2004
    Zelix, man, you are truly one of the best ever. i just love how you end each chapter with "Next time on...." like it was a v show. Totally origonal. keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Inuchan on December 14, 2004
    Great plot you've got here boy! You write very well, though there's one thing that is annoying the hell out of me: please, PLEASE stop putting "they're" or "you're" when it should be "their" and "your"; it's not only confusing but frustrating have to read these mistakes SO many times!!! I'm not a grammar freak (actually I'm from Argentina, I speak Spanish) but enough is enough! Otherwise, your fic is awesome, the plot is interesting, the romance is wonderful and the lemon and lime are GREAT! Udpate soon!
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  • From ANON - Jen on October 11, 2004
    Well. I took your advice and i read this story and you blow my mind away once again. And the last chapter A lemon, man you stole my heart. (God of Lemons). I can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - essie on October 11, 2004
    that was a great great lemon please update soon
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  • From ANON - Paul on September 25, 2004
    I'm Sesshomaru fan and I can't wait for battle between Kasaraki and him.
    You are great in describing battle scenes, but there could be less pathos after the battle.
    Especially Shippo could be less serious and more funny, after all he is a comical character.
    In anime Shippo is not so bright, basically he is teasing Inuyasha and provoking Kagome to sit him, and he is Kagume's familiar pet/cuddle toy :)
    I can believe that he has grown a little, because we have to wait indefinely to watch Naraku defeat in anime or comic...
    I think that Fluffy does not despise Inu so much after third movie, because Inu gained his respect as fellow warrior in fight against those zombies and their boss.

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  • From ANON - NightSky on September 24, 2004
    Calm down already!! Consider this a review of the whole story up to now: Naraku's death was very fitting, he deserved everything he got! And the teamwork of the "pack" was great, good job!
    Kasaraki has me wondering, you really MUST write more, I'm DYING here! NEED more info on him!!! FINALLY Kouga gave up on Kagome; who would know that it would be Shippo giving him a solution he should have thought of before?! Way to go Ship You You are a VERY EVIL person!!! Don't you think they've had enough suffering for a while?! Let Kagome and Inuyasha BE! At least allow them the peace of mind of finally belonging to one another as TRUE mates after FOUR LONG YEARS!!! And, let me say, as a Sesshou fan, I'm really looking forward to his participation in this story! THERE! Is this review long enough for you?! (just a thought, I know some people who refuse to review when authors insist so much on it. BE HAPPY, DON'T WORRY!! It's a big site but they'll get to your story soon enough! Sit tight and write the next episode SOON for those of us who are waiting anxiously!!!!!!!)
    NightSky
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  • From ANON - essie on September 22, 2004
    lemonlemon lemon lemon please
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on September 21, 2004
    ah question! When u mean the new name, does that mean that u're making another story or does it mean ur continuing this just under a different name????? OH!! I LOVE how this chapter turned out!!!! Can't wat for more! I almost forgot, LEMON! :>
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  • From ANON - essie on September 21, 2004
    your are eeevvvillllllll very very evil why why why did you stop this is great update sooon
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  • From ANON - essie on September 19, 2004
    great update soon I'll feel sorry for a woman he come across 3000 years without getting some is just wrong
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  • From ANON - Paranoid on September 18, 2004
    This story has a good idea but quite a few problems. There area few spelling and grammar problems. The A/N in the midlle of a paragraph breaks the flow.

    I am not trying to be mean, just point out a few things you may want to look after. E-mail me if you want.

    Paranoid
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  • From ANON - snowfall on September 12, 2004
    I loved the hunt. And, your description is excellent. The way you describe their breathing, the adrenaline, was great. I loved this chapter. Off to read more. Snowfall, aka, Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - essie on September 11, 2004
    this is a great fanfic please update soon
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