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Reviews for Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past

By : Zelix
  • From ANON - Review Person on September 01, 2004
    Bring an oc and make him kill the bad guy (I forget his name) or just make that oc give someone like kagome or Inu a power wachamecallit
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  • From ANON - Sei on September 01, 2004
    Love the story line and everything. Really dramatic and romantic. Absolutely love it, sorry it's kinda at a stand still point for you, only thing I can think of is Inu Yasha's dear older brother coming into the fray to help him or rather check out the creature that is causing all of this fear and chaos. A battle between them would be as intense as the one between Inuyasha and the your villian.

    Look forward to reading the next chapter as soon as you get it up. I've been so dissappointed with fanfics lately because they keep putting Inuyasha with Sango, Kagome with his older brother and mixing everything up it's nice to read a fic were it continues the love that's already there and makes it come into full bloom and yet mantains the hardships and trails that brings that pack of miss matched fighters together to form such an impressive fighting team.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 21, 2004
    Oops. I was thinking you had reviewed Kag's Blood, but it was Sketches which I wrote under the pen name Hanyou Slave. Anywho, I didn't realize you were such a prolific writer. I'm sure I will be entertained for many hours now that I have found your stories.
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  • From ANON - Snowfall on August 21, 2004
    Hey there, Zelix! I just read chapter one. Great start to an epic. Very descriptive. I enjoyed the whole battle and celebration. Just loved it! Looking forward to more battles. Such a great cliffie too. I will read more sooner than later as I have got to know what happens with Kikyou. Right now, I'm working on aamy,amy, detail ridden lemon between Sango and Miroku for Kag's Blood. There is something in it just for you. Don't forget to have a look. "I'll be back" to read more and give you more reviews!
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  • From ANON - essie on August 06, 2004
    omg omg omg this is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - essie on August 03, 2004
    damn that is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - essie on July 28, 2004
    OMG OMG OMG plllleeeeeeeeeeeeessssssse update soon this is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - BluePuppy on July 25, 2004
    cool story. Oh and thanks for reviewing mine.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on July 25, 2004
    Yay I get new chapters. Boo I get a cliffie. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - essie on July 17, 2004
    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WAY WAY WAY DAMN YOU DAMN YOU WAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY DID You stop there whyyyyyyyy you are truly evil this is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - Khi on July 17, 2004
    Ok.. tis the first time I've ever reviewed any fanfic. And while this isn't the most well written, with the best grammar or punctuation.. or any of that technical crap that everyone always points out ^^ The idea and descriptions still are very well done. I'd love to continue reading this fic.. but I have little patience.. so.. please resume writing soon. And if you need help with spelling or any of the "technical crap" I'd be more than happy to help out.. my Dad's an English major so I have had all of the rules drilled into my skull time and time again. So if I can be of use feel free to ask.. other than that.. goodluck ^^
    ~Khi
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  • From ANON - Missa on July 14, 2004
    Oi! What the fuck!!?? Fucking stupid Kouga...always has to ruin something!!
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  • From ANON - essie on July 10, 2004
    this is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - Neo-Crystal on July 09, 2004
    PLEASE!!! NOT THAT!!!! NOT A CLIFFE! so that is y i'm reviewing. ok i lied. i reviewing because I LOVE ur story and i shall wait for u to put up the next chapter! And i can't wait to find out wat happens to Kagome!!!!! ;)
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on July 04, 2004
    Awesome story. I love it. Keep up the excellent work.
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