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Reviews for Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past

By : Zelix
  • From ANON - essi on July 04, 2004
    omg omg omg OMG this is a kick butt fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 27, 2004
    I can't believe how evil that was. That was soooooo evil. Anyways I love the story can't wait to see how it goes. This being even though sealed for an eternal period doesn't seem really evil. I mean yeah he has the vibes and stuff. But there seems to be something else to it. How does Koga, Inu-Yasha, and Kagome seem to feel as though they know this being? Could it be that this is Inu-Yasha in some shape or form? But that doesn't make sense. Is he the ancestor of the demons? A god? A being of chaos? So many questions, I look forward to the answers. Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From ANON - akuma_river on June 25, 2004
    Great chapter. I love the story. Keep up the good work. I can't wait til how this all goes.
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  • From Atropa on June 19, 2004
    o may... tension tension...
    I really liked the part where Sango breaks down... It was so emotional, perhaps because the weather is rainy here and there is not much to do...
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  • From ANON - Liz on June 18, 2004

    No dont delete it, you might not be getting reviews from people but you cant delete it because of that. i have read your story well the parts you have written and i like it its a very interesting story so dont delete it. keep up the good work and cant wait to see what happens next.
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  • From ANON - essie on June 16, 2004
    this is a great fanfic please update soon
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  • From ANON - Ickabod on June 16, 2004
    Not bad, I do have some advice Zelix.

    1. You jumped between past tense and present tense a little to much especially in the Kouga, Inuyashnd Knd Kagome scene.

    2. You should never post AN in the middle of stories it distract from reading your fanfiction if you insert random notes.

    3. Dialogue is a must, I kin min most books dialogue is written differently.

    I think you have an excellent idea and an intruging plot and plenty of writing skills. if you have any more questions feel free to email me I am trying to write my story and it has taken me almost 2 months just to plan out the first 10 chapters and t not not even typed only notes. So if you have any questions feeee.ee.
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  • From ANON - arson(pyro) on June 12, 2004
    this was great! you have at least a 12 star quality on your lemons here, keep on writin my friend.
    pyro
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  • From ANON - Inu Chan77 on June 12, 2004
    Nice start. I think you did a wonderful job on the opening action secquence. I also thought you lemon was well written and you have a plot to boot! You Go Boy!
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  • From ANON - Sesshomaru on June 12, 2004
    You wrote action, sex, and have a wonderful plot. GREAT STORY!
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  • From ANON - TLC on June 12, 2004
    Very Good and you made a very hor lemon and have an intrguing plot as well I hope you write more Inu/Kag lemons in the future it was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - Albino Elf on June 12, 2004
    Great Story and what an awesome lemon I thought it wasn't that chessy. Update soon.
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  • From ANON - Venus on June 12, 2004
    I really enjoyed this story so far and you wrote and excellent lemon. Please contiune soon.
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  • From ANON - Venus on June 12, 2004
    I really enjoyed this story so far and you wrote and excellent lemon. Please contiune soon.
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  • From ANON - essie on June 12, 2004
    this is a great fanfic please update soon
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