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Reviews for Dark Soul of the Future, White Heart of the Past

By : Zelix
  • From ANON - Piper on June 05, 2005
    A few chapters ago Kasaraki said, I don’t ever want to hear or see another woman cry because of me ever again. If he kills Inuyasha, wont he have to experience that from Kagome? And he seems to not want the Shikon no Tama to fall to evil, but doesn't he relise that Kagome will hate him and most likely taint the jewel if he kill Inuyasha?
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  • From ANON - T on May 15, 2005
    The story is good, but coud you eliminate the author's notes within the story? They are very distracting.
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  • From on April 12, 2005
    *SIGH* OH HOW I LOVE TO READ WEEEE ITS SO GEWD Hippy-Oh man so much emotion gettn dizzy Commi-DEAR BLOODY GOD HURGH BLEahhh...... tooo much....
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on April 01, 2005
    You're Evil
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  • From ANON - chanda on March 30, 2005
    I hope you hurry up and update soon...LOL I really enjoyed your story
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  • From ANON - Noelle on March 06, 2005
    PLEASE update the story, I've become addicted to it!! It's awesome!
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  • From ANON - wave_of_... on February 27, 2005
    hi zelix! want to say i like your story very much even through i'm a mir/san fan and there's much 'bout inuyasha and kagome stuff going on. i must beg you to give sango and miroku a chance for a lemon or a lime [lemons are better (i know the difference)].
    thank you for writing this story. bye bye
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  • From Inuaru on February 23, 2005
    Wow... Awesome fic.
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  • From ANON - Kaitlin on February 14, 2005
    Hey, its Kaitlin again. Just waned to say that there definitely need to be more inu/Kag scenes, and there DEF need to be more lemon scenes, hmm, maybe a lemon sango/miroku scene?
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  • From ANON - Kaitlin on February 13, 2005
    Hey, still loving the story, but i just wanted to say that you should really use spell check on your writing, or ask a friend who is good with grammar to check it over, cause it can be really distracting. Also, the "authors inserts" or random comments from you throughout the story can be a bit distracting at times, it takes you out of the imagination bubble youve been creating and takes you back to reality. Still lovin the story and waitin for some good old fashioned, "un-interrupted" (cough) Kagome/Inuyasha lovin! +o)
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  • From ANON - Kaitlin on February 13, 2005
    Hey, lovin the fic. I would say that a little more sex wouldn't hurt, but you sure know how to take us to the edge and then leave us hangin there, y'know, in agood way =o). Oh yah, it's spelled Tessaiga, or at least thats how its spelled in the sub-titles of the Japanese language Inuyasha episodes. And the backwards ki or whatev is a wee bit much. Great story!
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  • From ANON - Miroku\'s_Student on February 10, 2005
    Wow, this story is a great one =) i love the way you did the whole inu-kagome's time at home parts, i would really love to see that blowheart Sesshoumaru get wrecked by Kasaraki. (beaten, not killed. he should be alive to watch inu-yasha fight him.)
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  • From ANON - essie on February 10, 2005
    great update
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  • From ANON - lord andross on February 10, 2005
    not karisako i mean damn i forgot his name
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  • From ANON - lord andross on February 10, 2005
    i think .... hmmmmm sessy-sama no never inuyasha sama will no doubt falter and for the fight sesshomaru and karisako
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