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Reviews for Loneliness of the Free Wind (Sequel info inside)

By : Zelix
  • From Dunkelgelb on December 06, 2005
    Well, LotFW was awesome back in June 2004, it still is awesome, and it's going to be awesome forever more. Zelix for the win!
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  • From sil3ntr3tribution on September 17, 2005
    this is very well written
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  • From ANON - mhika on September 12, 2005
    i just finished it...phew! what a chapter! (meant in a good way, lolz)...i absolutesly loved it! i think somewhere in the middle of reading it i thought 'wow, this guy is so intuned to emotions, and the sex...holy shit!...he probably has a girl for every day of the week'. sorry for that, just wanted to say it. anywayz, i loved it!! thankx
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  • From XYZ on July 27, 2005
    Quite interesting story, though I think it would be easier to read if you broke it up into chapters. Nice description, and just enough details to create a visualization without taking away from the story. Kagura as a writer, huh? I don't I've ever seen that before. Her relationship with Arc is unique, though. I always imagined Kagura as fiercely independent, though you showed a softer side of her. Good job, would you consider a story with Kagura and some other pairing, perhaps?
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  • From ANON - SHADOW. on June 23, 2005
    BRILIANT, ABSOLUTLY FUCKING BRILIANT....I TOTALY LOVED THIS STORY, IT MADE ME LAUGH, IT MADE ME CRY...I HAVEN'T HAD A STORY LIKE THIS AFECT ME LIKE THIS SINCE I READ LORD OF THE RINGS...THIS IS TRUELY AN EPIC STORY, AND IT SHOWS THAT YOU HAVE GRATE POTENIAL TO BECOME AN EVEN GRATER WRITER IN THE FUTUER....SO WITH OUT FURTHER ADO, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.. AND I TRUELY HOPE THAT YOU KEEP WRITEING THESE AWSOME STORIES....OOH P.S. I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO FIND THE SECOND PART TO THIS STORY, SO I HAVEN'T BEEN ABLE TO READ IT YET....ANYHOO KEEP WRITEING O.K.
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  • From XYZ on May 26, 2005
    Wow, I'm surprised, I never thought that Arc would be Kagome and Inuyasha's kid. I always thought Kagura would be someone of Inuyasha's generation, though I suppose it would make sense if you counted the actual years. Interesting story. Nicely done, though maybe you could break it into a couple of chapters. I personally thought that sucha long chapter might a little intimidating to some readers.
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  • From JebusOfNazareth on May 16, 2005
    HOLY FREAKING GOD.


    *Blubbering of incoherant praise.*


    MOTHER FUCKER.

    Awesome.
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  • From ANON - FieryFaerie on May 01, 2005
    Hey Zelix. I loved this story. The relationship betwee3n Kagura and Arc is amazing, and of course, I love Arc as a character. He's is definitely the coolest OC ever. Woot. i especially like the way you escribe the whole soulmates thing, because it's awesome...and incredibly romantic. Thank for writing this, and continuing it with TSE, because that story isw amazing too. Keep writing! Woot!
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  • From on April 12, 2005
    SOOOO LONG BUT IT WAS WORTH IT SATISFACTION AT LAST FREE AT LAST FREE AT LAST OH LORD I AM FREE AT LAST!!!!! Hippy-THE SMOOTH GROOVE OF THE WIND YES RIGHTEOUS POWER MAN Commi-BLOODY WOOT HELL YEAH ME LOVS IT!!!
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  • From ANON - Some1 on February 15, 2005
    extremly fantastic ass kiking story (sorry but i really suc at spelling) anyway this has been one of the best fanfiction story ive ever read! im gonna go chek out the sequel so aneway keep it up.cyas
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  • From ANON - Glenn on February 15, 2005
    Wow!! That was good and it was very fun to read. As I read I thought that Arc was Sesshoumaru's son so I was very surprized when you said he was Inuyasha's son. Keep writing. Signed a fan of Kargura
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  • From ANON - catt on February 12, 2005
    wow....damn That chappie was sooooo cool, i never said this but it totally rocked!!!!! I love ur story!!!
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  • From ANON - justme on February 05, 2005
    Great story!! I was very impressed with the level of detail you put into it. I hope to see more of your other works soon. They are excellent as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 31, 2005
    Pretty lame. Your grammar needs improvement, as does your punctuation, and your OC just feels... blah.
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  • From ANON - kittyonnails on January 28, 2005
    You have a really origional idea here, and I love it. There are some major style isssues though. Tense. It's extremely difficult to write a story in present tense, but we speak in the present tense often enough that it slips in. Read over a few times to weed out the present tense. It will do a lot to improve the flow of your story. One more thing that nagged at me while reading, chatty words in the prose. There's no reason you need to trail off and then begin again with things like, "anyway," I really want to stress that I think this story is good, but could be so much better with a little bit of stylistic help. The one-shot format is something I love, and I'm glad to see how well it has suited this story. Although I did have one idea; breaking the intoduction off and making a separate story about the war that drove Kagura out of the sengoku period. Really, that could be it's own story. Rather than saying that it wasn't recorded in history books, try to relate it to one of the many territorial wars that were raging at the time. A bit of reasearch could add a lot. Please don't be too sensitive and know that I offer this criticisim with the sincierest of intent. I'd love to see this story polished up, it would truly shine.
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