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Reviews for 'Just Say Good-bye, Kagome'--Chp corruption fixed

By : Lin
  • From ANON - lere on June 14, 2004
    Oh my sweet Lord! You did it! An Inu fic! I couldn't believe my eyes when I saw the story and your name! So, it's a review and I must say some things:
    1. Yes, they are VERY OOC. But the thing is... I REALLY like it. They are not a teen couple living at ancient Japan fighting demons to find pieces of a jewel. They are a married couple living together for some years and having real problems, just like real people. I was thinking about that yesterday after reading a fic about Inu being an ass an torturing Kagome because he was pissed after having his "possession" threatened. I can understanding a possessive half dog who thinks about people like his pack members and Kagome like his mate. I can bear a male character who lives in feudal Japan and thinks about a woman like a possession. But I just CAN'T bear people writing about a modern man who treats his woman, who he is suppose to love, like a piece of meat. He doesn't think twice before punish the girl he says he love using samesame girl like some sexual toy. It's disgusting! Your story is about a man who did mistakes and after realizing that is suffering because he is punishing HIMSELF to make his woman happy. It's reality and I love it! I wished all man could be like that!
    2. You WILL read criticism but bear with that. Many people are not mature enough to see things like they really are.
    3. I can't wait to read the next one!!!!! I hope to read some juicy lemon.. hentai lere!!!!!

    Big hugs from your number one fan and good luck!

    Lere

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  • From ANON - jules on June 13, 2004
    AWESOME...LOVED IT...You really nailed Kag/Inu's relationship and did an excellent job of defining it and corresponding it to the PRESENT values/lifestyles versus their FEUDAL relationship. Sincerely hope chap 2 is just around the corner (puts on puppy dog face)
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  • From ANON - drake220 on June 13, 2004
    wow...inu is a freakin' moron! let her get a word in edgewise stupid! she obviously wanted to say aomething, let her say it! he was a bit OOC but i think you got their relationship down pat. goo job
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