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Reviews for Kagome's Return

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - grrrrrr on August 24, 2004
    Ok i have to agree with Lady Fluff on a lot of things, this whole sequal SUCKSSSSSSSS where is the magic from the first o Wai Wait, i guess im a little off because only about 3/4 of kagome where are u was absolutly amazing, then all the sudden after u hit that orgy world everyting goes down. I mean its just not likely they would ever agree to share her and the whole way u handle this story makes me want to scream!!!!!!!!!!!! I fell in love with ur first one and would eagarly wait for an update but ur butchering the story! Kagome just came out of character and u use all the past bullshit which no1 really wants to know about and is irrelivent to the story anyway! In kagome where are u i was expecting a nice happy ending with her and sess but then u throw in this bullshit where he cant amrry her and has other wives and owuldnt leave them for her, i was waiting for u to pull it together and have sess tell her that hves ves her more than that and marry her and have the happy ending but NOOOOOO u come up with this crap about sharing her and her accepting that she cant marry him, let me tell u , u can never TRUELY care for the 2 lovers in your life the same, there will always be one in ur herat that u cant live without, god help us, this crap u pulled out of ur ass makes me want to re write some of ur chapters, scrathch that, makes me want to re write ur last few chapters of kagome where are u and just compleastly erase this story, if u can even call it that!
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  • From ANON - Tory on August 24, 2004
    So ive been following the story kagome where are u?! since the very begining, ando reo really like the sequal, but this one seems to lack the same style as the last one. Its as if u get to wrapped up in trying to explain about the past and how families used to get eachother off and what not. Its compleastly not logical for someone in this time to EVER claim that they even thought of breastfeeding their son at age 12 or w/e to be closer to him! Its just not done and some of the other things mrs. Higurashi was saying were just not plausible. The flow of this story is just different and i dont like it that much, but who knows after reading kagome where are u?! its obvious your a talented writer so maybe it will change into something spectacular.
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  • From ANON - inuyasha_n_kagome_rox142 on August 23, 2004
    Hey,

    Not bad.

    If I remember correctly, somewhere in Kagome! Where are You there was a part where Sesshoumaru wondered if Kagome could heal her virginity. Will that be happening anytime soon?

    Also, I reviewed A Shard on FF.Net, and was wondering if you got it as my internet was screwing up.
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  • From ANON - Mayukagurl on August 22, 2004
    Really great story! I hope you make more really soon, and really really long!!
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  • From ANON - Kimeko on August 21, 2004
    We need to know more don't leave us hanging!! This story is great.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 21, 2004
    nice update and i'm sad to see this story end. i just hope that the story with sess's mother is resolved.
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  • From ANON - mofaf on August 20, 2004
    loved the chappie....hope they can help out Kohaku....and hope Inu and Ses can get Shippo to see their pov

    think Inu and Shippo should let Ses be with Kag when he is able to....since he has limited time to be with her due to his responsibilities

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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 18, 2004
    alright good chapter and i can't blame you about the olympics cause i love them too.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 15, 2004
    finnally aff is back online. Good chapter and i hope we see more of sess.
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  • From ANON - REDEYES on August 11, 2004
    Just want U to know that I hate how U'T l'T let Sess and Kag marry, it's stupied especially since she really loves Inuyasha as a friend. Your writings has provided the facts that Kagome loves Sess more and to put her with Inuyasha is stupied especially when U make Sess get a mate and produce heirs. Kagome is gonna be heart broken and U know it. Im am hurt!!!
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  • From ANON - theMaven on August 10, 2004
    Awwww . . . that's so sweet. Kagome's been the agressor with every other stage of their relationship, so why not this one. ^__^ I still dislike the idea of Kagome and Sesshomaru together, but it makes sense in this warped little world of yours.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 09, 2004
    another cliff hanger? I can't wait for the next chapter and i hope aff doesn't keep dying on me.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 08, 2004
    finally on to the good stuff keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - aoidragon on August 07, 2004
    this is a very good story. i especially like your kagome! where are you?! and i love the sequal 2. i can wait to c wat happens. plz update soon alright? ja ne jeffs.
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  • From ANON - YASMIN on August 06, 2004
    I WAS SOOOOOOOOOO WAITING FOR THIS CHAPTER , IM DYIGN TO SEE WHAT THEY GONNA AGREE TO
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