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Reviews for Kagome's Return

By : jeffshelton
  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 05, 2004
    Thanks for the update and i'm still enjoying the story. Just keep up the good work and don't give up on theis story because i really want to see how it ends.
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  • From ANON - yasmin on August 04, 2004
    EVIIIIIILLLLLLL u r a bad girl lol OMG i cant wait till the next chappy is up . wooooohooooooooo
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  • From ANON - snowcat on August 04, 2004
    Jeffs, I just have to comment on "lady" fluffy's review. I understand what she's attempting to "comunicate". There is room for you to put in more emotional descriptives, BUT that's what my imagination is for if needed, maybe because she's so young she's lacking, or doesn't know how to enjoy just getting to know the other person and goes straight for the sex when on the first date. I remember "when I was young" reading about a dozen Harlequin Romance books, it didn't take long to go numb. VARIETY!...what's sweet if thereo soo sour or salt? Doesn't laughter feel better after tears? She brought up boring, what if her house were done in the color tones of only one color? So your better at history (I like history the older I get, so I'm jealous, even just to have a memory that would remember like yours) anyways...so your better at history, but so was "Gone With The Wind", the character's relationships were pathetic and disfuctional which, to me, made it more angst than romance. But people still revere it! You come across as a strong person, I believe you will pick what you want from it and move ahead. GO jeffs GO!
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  • From ANON - snowcat on August 04, 2004
    {{{*SIGH*}}} Yes, I'm pouting over the shortness of last chr. Br. But, I'm SOOOOO... happy aff has come out of it's coma. Twice I tried to leave reviews on mm, but they didn't post :::*raspberry*:::!!! As for spelling I only caught one mispelled. HEH, HEH, but that pales to your style, but have you noticed the paragraphs are broken up differently than when you started "Kagome Where are You?". Anyways...MORE sensei jeffs, MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Biggles on August 03, 2004
    Ah, finally adultfanfiction is back and so is one of my favorite stories. Bravo! Glad to see it updating again. Good work, Jeff. I like how you do some actual research when you decide to add different elements to your stories.
    Ignore LadyFluffy...it seems that some people had rather read bad porn/rape/snuff fiction than something that actualy has a plot and decent characterization.
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on July 20, 2004
    Well, it is certainly about time that I review. I starreadreading during "Kagome, Where are you?," and picked up on some of your other past stories for further background of the world you have sculpted around these characters. Your writing is very distinctive, the detail and planning you put into a story goes beyond your typical fanfiction. While, I think there are times you sacrifice pacing in favor of explaination, it is also refreshing to see the lengths to which you think out each situation. It makes the story all the more believable, even as the circumstances grow more fantastic. I have enjoyed the originality of this storyline, and I look forward to the remainder of this particular story arch.
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  • From ANON - HazeHime on July 19, 2004
    Perfect as always, but...CURSE YOU FOR THE CLIFFY!!!!!!! now that that is off my chest, i really hope that when you do update the chapters are as wonderful as the rest of the HUGE fic this has become. don't ever lose that ability, it suits you so well.
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  • From ANON - aya_rei on July 19, 2004
    agh! how could you?! *sobs* your stop with that cliffhanger than you say you wont update it for a while?! your cruel
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 18, 2004
    Weelll. The ironic thing about the demons in Inuyasha is that they do not act the parts of the animal they are. For instance.. Inuyasha has shone more dog like behavior than Sesshoumaru ever has.
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  • From ANON - Shell on July 18, 2004
    Three words. You. Are. Evil. That's all I'm going to say.
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on July 18, 2004
    No... You deserve a break for all you're work, but I hope that you'll update soon.
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  • From ANON - HazeHime on July 15, 2004
    Great as always. I was Mystic-ice, but changed my name. Your fic rocks, be sure to update.
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  • From theMaven on July 15, 2004
    Interesting preview for chapter 12.
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  • From ANON - Tweekymonkey (Hyatt) on July 15, 2004
    I don't remember which name I've reviewed under.
    Sorry I haven't review lately I've been kind of out of it. I'm still reading the story and still very interested in what is happening. I've noticed a few more gramatical errors than usual, but that really has no bearing on the story. I really like the story and I am eagerly awaiting the discussoin with Inuyasha. Keep up the good work.


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  • From ANON - Lady Fluffy on July 14, 2004
    What are you doing wrong, you ask? Well, I'll tell you my version of it. I've been reading 'Kagome! Where Are You!' from the beginning, but I've never really liked it (and that's why I've never reviewed before now). And from your persistent notes, I got the impression that you are extremely full of yourself. All the notes you made were very borand and persistent and stupid. WE DON'T NEED TO KNOW! Keep your history to yourself. And your sex scenes weren't even worth remembering. They were just Kago and Sess fucking eachother. Although you mentioned it multiple times, about character development. What. the. fuck? What character development? There was none. And all your aristocratic crap about Sess's demon life and hierarchy and whatnoto gio gives a flying fuck? Not me! The only thing that kept me reading was to see what stupid world you would come up with next. The only reason I am still reading is... Hell! I don't even know why I'm still reading this piss poor excuse for a story! But, I guess it's b/c I don't like to quit halfway througmethmething. And thast cst chapter! What the fuck was that? Have you ever even taken a proper English class? Where is your structure and metaphors and similies and heart wrenching descriptions of Kagome and Sesshomaru's passionate love for eachother??? You draw everything out waaaaaaaaaaay to long and that makes it waaaaaaaaaaaaaay to boring. Be short, concise and to the point. Don't draw everything out so long. Why in the seven hells am I giving advice to you? I must be going soft in my ripe old age of sixteen. When you get this I hope you go crying to your mommy because I'm not even close to being mean. I don't have the heart to be truly nasty to some poor fuck who's convinced he can actually write good fanfiction. Poor baby! I dearly hope you enjoyed my 'constructive criticism.' Bye for now. And I hope I hear from you in the future. I refuse to give you my e-mail address. Only those deemed worthy can have it. And from all my ranting and raving above, I think you can probably guess that doesn't include you. Write me a note at the end of a chapter or something. Hey, it's one way of making sure I keep checking the story's progress, thenthen again, why would I give a flying fuck about some poor son-of-a-bitche's ramblings about mean people. I think that I've given you enough to think about for now, so I'm going to leave you and your piss poor excuse for a brain to ponder all that I have said. I have spoken. (Good Lord, and I thought YOU were full of yourself...)
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