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Reviews for Kagome's Return

By : jeffshelton
  • From sesshysbitch74 on June 26, 2007
    Hmm, I'm not sure how to start so I guess I will start off by saying that I liked Kagome Where Are You better than this one but it was still good. Not good, amazing. You have such and imagination and love for history it seems. I do have one tiny little small suggestion/complaint. You use the words time and timeless waaay too much. "A timeless pause..." "Time passes..." It just got really really annoying after awhile to read the same thing over and over again. Maybe come up with a couple other ways to say that. I don't have any suggestions for a different way to say it, but i'm working on it. As always, I love the detail and planning and history that goes into your stories and I hope to be able to read more! Keep up the great work!

    Your Devoted Fan,
    LadyFluffy
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  • From ANON - Rinseternalsoul on February 16, 2005
    FINALLY Done with this saga. (for now). An ending with promises for another ending? Hmm... interesting. I must thank you, Jeffs, for putting so much of your free time into these stories. While not grade A writing, the storyline, history, and imagination more than make up for it. Good job.
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  • From ANON - SqurielLord on October 12, 2004
    I fianly cave for teh e-maill....

    ANYWAYS

    THIS IS A GREAT-no-WONDEFUL! story/epic/thing Mr. Shelton.

    66 chapters for KWAY?. I cant get past 150 pages on my patheric attemps at stories.

    I hope this is as good as its prequell.

    Thank you for your time,

    SqurielLord
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  • From ANON - snowcat on September 01, 2004
    ***HEY EVERYONE*** I IT IT FANTASTIC THAT YOU CAN DEPEND ON "jeffs" TO COMPLETE HIS STORIES! Thanks to jeffs and hope your still checking for reviews... Glad that you explained what you intended this story to explore, cuz I was hoping for more K/S/I interaction/dialogue, although what you did write was a pleasure to read, and that whole Naraku drama. Cared less (not "I couldn't care less") about the whole adoption thing, but I still "ah"ed, and thought it endearing. About Inu's sex path before Kag, I believe your version is more accurate to "historical" account, but I believe that R. Takahashi would have us believe he is more inexperienced, however way we can imagine him to be denied somehow. And lastly, I'm just not getting the "other world" connection, not that it matters, I just think that Takahashi would have us believe that Inu would still be skewered to the god tree to this day at the shrine, and be a great marketing tool to sell those "shikon-no-tama key chains" of grandpa's. Thanks jeffs, I like reading your stories...hope to be there for the next.
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  • From ANON - Biggles on August 31, 2004
    Jeff,
    Very good. I really enjoyed this and can't wait til the next supliment to your story line.

    As for your...cunning...flamers. It's amazing how those who can barely write in any coherent form bitch the most about a well thought out plot line that doesn't involve people 'fucking' within the first three sentences. Keep adding your historical facts and viewpoint to your plot, they are highly enjoyable and point out that you are rising above the rest of the fanfic crowd. Especially the teenyboppers who, when not writing MarySues are screwing up lemons with biologically impossible sex. For this I can only thank you and worship at your feet.
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  • From ANON - PrincessSweetSugar on August 30, 2004
    I have read your story 'Kagome! Where are you?' And I have to say that was an AWESOME story but the sequel is kind of lacking. I thought this was going to be an Sess/Kag fic, not Sess/Kag/Inu. And that fact that Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru have to share her something that just blows me away, I mean I'm one to never follow the anime exactly, like being traditional and all. But I would never make them share her BUT I will not flame you or anything because this is fanfic world were the author has control over anything they write, so us as reviewers really do not have any say on how to tell you to write your story...over all it's a great story, great writing, hardly any spelling and grammar errors just, not really believable at the moment.

    Also, I love your little history lessons, I mean I took down some notes and went in search of these things they are very informative and I learned alot about how ancient Japan was. Just that most readers will pass off the history lesson as boring, and the story too long and drawn out, and they will most likely not review or if they do they will flame. And no one, that I have come in contact with that are my age who read fanfics care about the histoy, so just tone it down a bit.

    Hope I didn't offend you in any way. Gomen ne if I did, just thought I post my opinion.

    Good job any ways Jeffs,

    ~PrincessSweetSugar~


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  • From ANON - sesshomarusgirl56 on August 29, 2004
    OMG!!! Wahhhh the the end why is it the end I think Im going to cry ,oh shit I am crying and its your fault now I have to wait forever to find out what happens wahhh yor really mean making a girl cry but I still love your fic and I"ll wait till the end of the month no the end of whenever till you update!!!
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  • From ANON - Fanficaddict on August 29, 2004
    great story and i'm sad to see it end.
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  • From ANON - mofaf on August 29, 2004
    great story...can hardly wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 27, 2004
    O.K soyour saying that this one isn't going to be an sess/kag flick it's only going to be an plain family gettin to know you flick? And if it is how is it going to be a seqel to kagome where are you!!! in that one you said that it was going to be a sess/kag flick not a sess/kag/inu so my real question is what is this story really about your really confusing me truefuly i want to see the it it has gottin to me but if your goiing to change it then i sorry i going have to stop reading. : ( bye
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  • From ANON - mofaf on August 26, 2004
    great chap....think Kag is gonna have to make Inu feel like he is the greatest when they get in bed....lol.
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  • From ANON - Kayla on August 26, 2004
    Jeff you are definitely the best writer on AFF. Keep them coming!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 26, 2004
    I thought you said it was going to be an sessomaru and kagome flick not all three
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  • From ANON - Mitsuko on August 26, 2004
    If i remember correctly, you've said before that the world created by Go-shin-boku-kami is a dimension like the ones Kagome and Sesshoumaru traveled through. So it's not really the past of Kagome's wrold, therefore changing InuYasha's world will not affect Kagome's world. Please explahis his because I am greatly confused.
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  • From ANON - maria on August 26, 2004
    why in this chapter sesshomaru eat human food?
    is it in 'kagome where are you?' you wrote that if dog eat food from human who feed it, they will follow them?
    so, as a taiyokai he not suppose to eat food from kagome.

    t rit right??????
    tell me if i wrong.
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