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Reviews for A slave's story

By : Kagomechan
  • From ANON - HILLARY on July 21, 2004
    AWWW POOR KAGS
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  • From ANON - emily on July 16, 2004
    i cant wait to read more
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  • From ANON - mikkey_hodge on July 03, 2004
    i want more i love this story continue lemon!!
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  • From ANON - DarkLady on June 30, 2004
    it sounds like an interesting beginning you might want to proof read some things a bit more though. i look forward to more updates
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  • From ANON - valene on June 30, 2004
    hey totally awsome story cant wait to see an update...*_*
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  • From ANON - valene on June 30, 2004
    hey totally awsome story cant wait to see an update...*_*
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  • From ANON - Takhisis on June 29, 2004
    HI, Kagome! I wanted to tell you that I enjoyed the first chapter of your story, I think it has a good plotline, and it could get very interesting. I found that this first chapter was a bit rushed, however. I mean, it seemed like you wanted to get a lot of things into it, and didn't go into details, especially about the transformation Kagome suffers, her feelings, etc. Maybe you should try to develop that part a little bir more. I hope you don't mind my telling you this, after all, it's only my opinion, the stoy is your's! ^_^ You choose wether you pay heed or not ;) Other than that, I'm looking forward to finding out what will be happening soon ;)
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  • From ANON - Tom on June 29, 2004
    Kag/Inu, but I'll accept Koug/Kag, Sess/Kag, Hiten/Kag,or something not already oJustJust make it good.

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  • From migele on June 29, 2004
    I always thougt that Virgin Sex slaves were worth more.
    well a pity.
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