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  • From ANON - mhall on March 22, 2005
    repost the story
    because it miss things when you read
    but i love story great job
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on December 06, 2004
    Darn AFFN corruption...I just read your author's note at the end of chapter 14, and realized that thanks to the corruption, it means I missed something somewhere in the previous chapters...
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  • From ANON - Fabu on November 30, 2004
    This story is fabulous! I started reading it from the beginning and the only thing that made me stop was realizing I had work in the morning and even then I kept reading for a couple more hours. Unfortunatly I also realized that with the site problems some of the text has be truncated (especially in chapter 11). I've noticed this occuring in other stories and figured I would bring it to your attention since you seem to have lost a large chunk of the chapter I mentioned before...and I need to know just what happened...it plagues me...and with a story this wonderfull I hate to lose any of it! Keep up the great work and I'll continue to read what you write!
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  • From ANON - Mandy on November 15, 2004
    Hey, I just wanted to let you know that something weird is going on with "Th Ad". It's like half of some chapters have been deleted, or the names are mixed up (I've read it before and have noticed this when trying to re-read it), or it'll have computer code in the story. I haven't seen that with other stories. Do you have any idea what it may be? Has anyone else noticed this?
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  • From ANON - hibi on September 16, 2004
    for some reason, i liked the alternate ending better
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  • From ANON - Hiei81 on August 25, 2004
    I loved it! This was grate! How ever did you come up with this story?! ja ne!
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  • From ANON - kashuneko on August 24, 2004
    I liked the alternate ending better. I much prefer Kagome realizing for herself that he had already shown her that he loved her than him having to do something to prove his love. While the wisdom-dispensing cabby was a bit much, sometimes it takes the viewpoint of a stranger to help see things from a different perspective.

    By the way, this story was unbelievably amazing.

    I don't even have the words.

    I laughed, I cried, I stayed up til 2 in the morning when I had to get up at 6 the next morning (and I'm too old for that) because I couldn't stop reading it!

    Then, knowing that they track our internet usage at work and that the site "adultfan.nexcess.net" would set off alarms in our IT department, I STILL went to the website during my breaks to finish up the story.

    I hope to read future work by you.
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 24, 2004
    What happened to the hot sex in chapter 11!? NO NO! Thats the best part! Please...email it to me or something...PLEASE!
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  • From ANON - Nicole on August 23, 2004
    “Think cold thoughts...think cold thoughts! Rolling around in an iceberg...naked. Sesshomaru in a pink Speedo. Kaede in a bikini.”

    Omg, that made me laugh so hard.
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  • From ANON - Gyousei on August 23, 2004
    I'm so sad its over, and I think the alternate ending was better by the way, love your story and your writing and I hope to read more stories from you in the future!!! ^_^
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  • From ANON - hrc on August 23, 2004
    hey i loved both endings and the epiolgu thing(yeah i cant sp today) was really cool and i so love this story!!!

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  • From ANON - FrameofMind on August 23, 2004
    First of all, I love the epilogue! Inuyasha's interaction with the boys was absolutely adorable, and I love the little sort of overview of where everyone else is in life.

    As for the alternate ending, I think I'd have to say I prefer the second one to the original. There were a couple of minor things that just didn't seem to sit right in the first one (like the part in the office, when Sesshy wanted Kag to hide behind the curtains, but she refused. It sort of felt like "then what was the point of her being there again?"), and the second ran a bit smoother in my opinion. The only criticisms I have for the second version are that I would have embellished just a tiny bit more in at the very end (it's slightly abrupt as is), and that I would have smoothed out Kagome's realization that she wanted to forgive Inu (whics sls slightly abrupt as well) -- but those are minor details. Overall, it's great!

    Good luck with your job and your Ph D! Oh, and of course good luck in the Protege polls! Ta ta...
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  • From ANON - lady_siren on August 23, 2004
    I really enjoyed this story you are a very talented writer. thank you very much for letting me read it! i will be waiting for your next one.
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  • From ANON - flyer_byer on August 22, 2004
    Great story! I definitely like this alternative ending better the the other one, mostly because it's more plausible for Kagome to find Inuyasha at the mansion, rather than the park. Keep up the writing, I'll be waiting for the new story!
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  • From ANON - Rocky on August 17, 2004
    WOW! This is such a good story! I loved it from being to end! I hope you do a fallow up story but if you don't its ok, anyway this is great!
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