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  • From ANON - lady_siren on July 04, 2004
    AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! wright more soon!!! it is not aften that i ally lly love a story so much that i cant wait to read more!
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  • From ANON - Isis on July 04, 2004
    I love you. Have I told you yet how much I lyou?you???

    And do not fear your lemon writing skills, cause they rock.

    Please please please tell me that there is more to come, lemon or otherwise. It doesn't matter. It's all equally awesome!!!!

    I am very excited that I got to read three new chapters today!!!

    *squishes*
    Isis
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  • From ANON - Isis on July 04, 2004
    I love you. Have I told you yet how much I love you???

    And do not fear your lemon writing skills, cause they rock.

    Please please please tell me that there is more to come, lemon or otherwise. It doesn't matter. It's all equally awesome!!!!

    I am very excited that I got to read three new chapters today!!!

    *squishes*
    Isis
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  • From ANON - huntress on July 04, 2004
    this is amazing so far!!! this is going on my recommended list for sure!!! just great, please keep it coming and up date soon. i can't wait for the next chapter(s) and any other stories u'll be writing.

    huntress =^.^=
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  • From ANON - drake220 on July 04, 2004
    ok, is anyone else really REALLY jealous of kagome right now? because I am!!! ::whistles:: that was a great lemon! i think all the smut writers here at aff.net need a hand if they helped contribut to your imagination. ::applauds wildly:: and kag is right, visuals really are exciting! ;D nice job!!!!
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  • From ANON - szmadad on July 04, 2004
    Ibeenbeen following this story at mediaminer and am glad that you've begun posting here.

    Your latest chapter was *so satisfying*. (hentai that I am, I have a big silly grin on my face....ahh...full demon Inu is quite the dominating type, ne?) All along your characters have been so 3-D and believable beyond cliches. Your writing is at a level where you paint a wonderful picture of the relationships and situations while keeping the story moving along.

    Inu-Kag are my favorite couple from the anime so I have to tell you that I'm happy they have finally consummated their relationship in your story....I'm glad you had Kagome hold out...even tho her grandfather's role in that has been funny - drugging Kagome ?! But you've set up both Inu and Kag so realistically regarding their growing feelings of love beyond lust for one another.

    I know that the future will get a bit rough...being that both Inu and Ji-chan's conspiracy regarding their initial meetiill ill have to be explained. But I'm looking forward to how you will do that and restore Kag's faith in both men.

    One thing that I hardly seen done in AUs that take place in the modern day....will you have somebody explain the depth of the youkai mating to Kagome? I mean, in most of the fanfics....Kagome never seems to know anything beyond youkyoukai mating for life and that there's a bite involved. In your story, are they bonded in some deep way?

    This may help her realize that Inu does truly love her when she does find out the truth......

    Looking forward todingding more from you :)
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  • From ANON - Hanyouluverr on July 04, 2004
    Yay! Finally, it took them long enough...jeez, good job, it coulnd't have been done any better, you are the best!!

    Hanyouluverr


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  • From ANON - lady_siren on July 04, 2004
    by the way i forgot to add....i really loved it when you made hojo guy lol way to go! he is one of my least fav.
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  • From ANON - lady_siren on July 04, 2004
    i love this story please hurry up and update again. it has cought my intrest and i love it when i read a good story and i cant hardly take my eyes off of it! :D
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  • From ShaeyaSedjet on July 03, 2004
    This is simply wonderful. It is one of the bette AU representations of Inu and Kag that Ie ree read. I am enjoying. You are definitely a queen of the cliffy, though, and I am beginning to hate you for it...but in a good way...h I I'm looking forward to your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Nadene on July 03, 2004
    i love this story. You write very well and your pace is perfect. The plot is not moving to fast or to slow. Great job! And i'd like to know what gynocolgist lies to their patience like that! A few months for birth control to get in yoru system. BULL! Ive been studying it for years... They only tell that to 16 year olds cause the girls dont realize to take it at the exact same time every day. It only takes 7 days of taking it properly for you to start to be able to have unprotected sex. When the docto the the story told her months.....i was like.....AW DAMNIT! Now shes going to make inuyasha wait that damn long. SHIT!
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on July 03, 2004
    Can't wait tp READ what happens!
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  • From ANON - paoo on July 02, 2004
    Hey cool kerep updating that fast!i like it
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on July 02, 2004
    AW! thats so sweet!
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  • From ANON - Cancan227 on July 02, 2004
    What did she DO!
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