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By : nena
  • From loretta537 on March 11, 2008
    this was a great story! i promise i'll read your other stories, however i read this straight through and since it is now 5am i'll read the rest later.
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  • From ANON - suki on December 23, 2005
    great story you should do a sequal! keep up the good work
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  • From drake220 on December 22, 2005
    i love this story! (though the epilouge is not the last chapter)
    great, great story!!!
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on December 18, 2005
    Chap. 13 - I knew Souta was dating Rin. It was kind of obvious since he was at the game. But that's cte... Not many authors put them together. ^_^

    Well, I loved this chapter - well, the whole story really. *hands you a cookie* I hope Kagome and Inuyasha make it through their fight all right. Though this means they're getting closer. But I wonder what the fight between Sesshomaru, Kagura and Kagome's Jii-san was about... Well, he and Sesshomaru seem to have patched things up. I hope they stay tha way...

    Oh, one more question. Do you address what happened to Kagome to make her loose her memory? It obviously wasn't the accident in which her parents died (though you don't talk about her mother). I was just wondering what happened...

    Again, great chapter. I'll continue reading now but I hope you write more (and proof read/spell check) later. Sorry about the short review. Ja mata~!

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - Jeszie on November 01, 2005
    I just thought I'd let you know that I thought this story was wonderful. I happened to come across it today while searching for something new to read.... now I usually don't read stories with so many chapters... but I must inform you that the ten hours I spent reading this story was well worth it! I loved this story!
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  • From ANON - Lea on October 23, 2005
    i absolutely LUB it!!!
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  • From ANON - Kikia on July 08, 2005
    Wow..that was a excellent story.I cried at the end but i was really happy to see the surprise.I think that was an really great story and you, the author has an amazing talent.I cant wait for another one of your stories.
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  • From ANON - Lita on July 08, 2005
    I almost died reading this story it was so good. I loved every chapter, every .. everything about it. I certianly reccomend it to everyone who loves the series. (:
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  • From ANON - SailorTee on May 02, 2005
    Ohmigod!!! I just started reading this today and I couldn't stop reading til I finished .
    This was such A well written and detailed story.
    This story was absoluletly the best story I've read in a HOT minute
    I have 2 say you're a good author and I can't wait to read some of your other stories
    Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - GWPH on May 01, 2005
    This story was wounderful. I've been readying it sence you posted the first chapter. I don't think this story could of been any better than what it was. Congrates on the completion and I look forward to reading more of you stories.

    Till Next Time,
    GWPH
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  • From ANON - Kari on April 02, 2005
    wow that was a wonderful story, i cried, laughed and everything in between. this has to be one of my most fave stories off all time. i couldn't story reading it once i had to continue to find out what happend in the end. awesome job writing it, it was wonderful.
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  • From ANON - snowfall on March 25, 2005
    Okay. I've been a bad reader/reviewer. I didn't review at first because I was expecting the story to take a cheesy turn. Never happened. I saw your update. My memory hasn't been great lately, so I had to reread the story. It is a great story, well written, several plots running together keeping it interesting, humor, and the angst is great. Inuyasha as the playboy is great, but man, taking Kagura. That's pretty low. The courting, Inu's arguments with his youkai, Kagome's instinctual reciprocation was very inventive. Not that it hasn't been done before, but you did a good job. Poor Sess. You did a real number on him. It was nice to see him keep his cold demeanor and have emotions simultaneously. I'm glad to see more Sess/Kagura pairings out there. The whole idea of Hojo being gay was great. Inu's references to him were amusing. I liked the relationship you gave Kanna and Kagura. Your portrayal of all the characters were great, especially Souta's abilities with clothing. Rin lying? Gasp. Sneaky little wench. And, pairing her and Souta was a great idea. Kagura's reaction was priceless. There is so much of this story I like that I couldn't possibly put all of it here. Suffice it to say, you held my interest with great characters, an excellent but simple plot, although I was a bit confused about Sesshoumaru's 'condition', and you have excellent grammar and spelling (mostly). Of course, no one is perfect in that last area! I'm picky, hard to please. You did a great job.

    Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 25, 2005
    are you missing the bottom part of ch11? "night of spontenantieititity"?
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  • From ANON - inu hanyou nikkie on March 25, 2005
    EEEPPPP!!!! your story I have read it several times before both on AFF and FF.net.... And I thought it was very good but with parts missing (AFF)was confusing in places.... NOW it is super missing chunks and parts!!!! If you have a copy of your story maybe you could compare where you are missing and re-instate the missing parts- other than that I really love the story.... Must If I re-read it...
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  • From ANON - Parapsychic Psycho on March 24, 2005

    Could you please fix the chapters on 'The Ad'? Almost ALL of the chapters are broken down, and I would really appreciate if you fixed the problem. Thank you.

    - Parapsychic Psycho
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