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Reviews for Return To The Feudal Era

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From XxSangoxX on February 14, 2007
    Another plot hole would be the Tessaiga leaving his side
    as well as Sesshoumaru being able to surpass the well.

    Still you have good thoughts, I think you just need a little
    more time to get them gathered together and do a little more
    research. I know it's just a hobby but, there really are
    people on this site that have a true obsession **me for one**
    and it's like a little escape from their lives.

    trust me, a little research into the history of japan and
    a closer look at the original story created by the magificant
    magnaka Takahashi Rumiko, will prove to really better your
    writing thoughts.
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  • From XxSangoxX on February 14, 2007
    One huge complaint.

    His mothers name was Izayoi.

    There are a few flaws in this, but all in all,
    its not illiterate and I appreciate that to no end.
    continue this, but whatever you do, just DONT make this
    a Sesshy and Kagome fic. I think I will die if you do.
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  • From ANON - feh on February 01, 2006
    OKA OKA this is relli starting to piss me off cus this is fucking turning in the area of a sess/kag fic i can handle them but 'd rether NOT HAVE ONE AFTER THE FIRST ONE!
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  • From ANON - a lost soul on December 13, 2005
    You must update soon please, I love it. Oh yeah , keep up the awesome work ^_~
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 29, 2005
    I hope that you finish the story hon. I can't wait to see what will happen next if you are going on with it. :)
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  • From ANON - Sabrina on September 29, 2005
    I love your storys I can't wait to see what others you come up with. :)
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  • From ANON - Dark_Lady_69 on July 01, 2005
    PLEASE UPDATE SOON PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Katt on March 31, 2005
    Cute story...I agree about unkind reviews, constructive criticism is one thing, but just being mean is pretty pathetic. Keep writing, smiles.
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  • From ANON - Gemini on March 01, 2005
    Must have more of the wonderful story!^_^ Comment: I love the InuyashaxKagome thing...but Why can't Fluffy(Sesshy) wait for Rin to grow up!!!!! He'd be a lot happier. (At least I think so.) I mean she kinda does love him already. She called him "dashing" in a recent episode (cute!).
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  • From ANON - Lady on July 22, 2004
    I have read the insulting remarks other immature and cowardice reviewers have left inusgirl. As an author myself I have t wit wit with the same thing. Let me give you a bit of advice, you can't please everyone but yourself and that is what counts. What proof do others have of plagiarism? If they have no solid evidence then their accusations are purely speculation and hold no ground. Just know that in your heart you did not plagiarize. Your stories are truly works of art that deserve the Pulitzer prize and it also gives myself inspiration to write even though people try and shoot it down every chance they get. Keep updating this wonderful story and ignore the harsh remarks of others. They know that in their hearts they are jealous and want you to fail miserably. Remember your stories are like your children, nurture and put your ideas into them and they will not disappoint you. I hope I am of some help of taking the burden of flames from you and giving you peace of mind to continue this story. Good luck with the rest of your masterpieces.

    Lady
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  • From ANON - Blah Blah on July 22, 2004
    Please bring Fluffy (Sesso) back to his senses and character! And why is Inuyasha so pissy?
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  • From ANON - ME on July 22, 2004
    Great story, are you going to leave it a INU/KAG?
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  • From ANON - PJ on July 21, 2004
    well I think this is good. Please keep writing. I liked the first story and the sequel is great. I almost feel sorry for Sessy but then agian it is only going to cause problems if he decides to pursue those desires. I am actually glad he feels bad about it. I am a big Inu/Kag fan and don't really like Sessy/Kag fics. If is is written well then it is ok but many times they are just thown together. Anyway back to the story please keep writing I like this story.
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  • From ANON - DelKaidin on July 09, 2004
    First Supercool... I sign my reviews.

    Now for the actual review.

    Inusgirl your story could be much better if you didn't rely so heavily on dialogue to advance the story. Sometimes the best moments come in narrative. The second criticism is that Sesshomaru is way out of character, with no explaination of the change of heart.
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  • From ANON - FB on July 09, 2004
    Ok, I can tell this is going to be a touchy issue and by no means do I wish to offend anyone....

    While I agree with your other reviewers that the charactere Ore OOC, I think their methods of informing you are a bit aggressive. While I did read "Goodbyes" by Delkaidin a long time ago, I don't remember the particulars of the story or how close you came to it with your fic. So, I'm not in the position to judge you on that.

    I've been a victim of plagerism myself and I know how frustrating it feels when're're an author that spends a lot of time on his/her work to find out that another person has ripped off your material. So, I'm not surprised by the heat you're receiving from these other reviewers.
    But like I said, I'm not in the position to judge you.

    If you want to make this story better, I would suggest that you watch some Inuyasha episodes and study the characters closely for their personality and habits. I find this method is working for me now and the characters are bit more realistic when I write them on paper.



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