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Reviews for Return To The Feudal Era

By : inuyashasgirl
  • From ANON - Ela on July 08, 2004
    OMG!! I just love your story!!
    U got to update as soon as possible!

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  • From ANON - PJ on July 08, 2004
    This is very good I hope you continue soon. I really am enjoying this story
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  • From ANON - greetings on July 06, 2004
    I'm quite satisfied that this is not a steal of "Hello Again." I am beginning to be embarrassed I thought such poorly written drivel was a borrow... And Supercool... I'd email you if you had the balls to leave an email... But frankly you make me LMAO. BUT NAAA I'll get my shits and giggles watching her defend herself... kthxbye.
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  • From ANON - my my on July 06, 2004
    Excuse me... ummm wouldn't Sesshy have run into him sometime or another considering IY went to his old house IN the Western Lands???? and how did Sesshy defeat it? GODs. and how does Sesshy travel through the well? PLOT HOLE!

    also, IY's sword has the ability to break through barriers! he gains this ability after his encounter with the bat youkai (the arc w/ Shiori, the bat hanyou); his sword turns red, and he is able to cut through barriers like burning through butter. oi.

    again, poorly written. Rin is stupid and poorly written, AND OOC. you write her like a retard. also, Sesshy is WAY OOC. yeesh.
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  • From ANON - Supercool on July 06, 2004
    Once again Inusgirl, I am sorry you have to deal with these childish reviewers. They are just lackeys of the one author who think you are plagerizing. I believe there is nothing wrong with your story and you should continue to post it.
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  • From ANON - brianna on July 06, 2004
    good story can you add me to your noteds list if you have it up?
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  • From ANON - Concerned reviewer on July 06, 2004
    Some of you reviewers are way too harsh and insulting. First of all, her fic isn't that terrible. The grammar and spelling are acceptable and the paragraphs well formed. While the characters are a bit OOC, she could use constuctive criticism to improve that and not insults.

    Before you all jump down her throat, consider that the idea for this fic is one that almost any Inu/Kag writer could have thought up. Just because another author had a similar story doesn't mean she is stealing anything.


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  • From ANON - Hahaha on July 06, 2004
    It gets worse. I didn't think it was possible for one person to stink this badly at writing.
    You have managed to prove me wrong. There is no description to your story, how am I supposed
    to visualize anything if you brush over the details in your rush to get to the dialogue? And, you
    have Sesshoumaru so OOC. Please go to school and pay attention in class. Come back to this when you have
    a real story, not one that where you borrowed the idea and thought you could do better. It is always better to
    blaze your own trail than to follow in someone else's.
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  • From ANON - charming on July 05, 2004
    simply revolting, poorly written, corny, sappy, and stupid. a waste of my time reading it. you ought to be ashamed of yourself for posting something so worthless.
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  • From ANON - MoonGuardian015 on July 02, 2004
    Great chapter! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - LiTtLe KiTtY on July 01, 2004
    I reallyl like your story so far. Its really good and i hope you updata asap i really want to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Sparkmaster on July 01, 2004
    I haven't read Tat Brt Breath away yet but I will, This looks very promising.
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