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Reviews for Predestination

By : chillkat
  • From ANON - malice_babe on January 16, 2006
    Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Awesome story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Update please???

    Ja ne!
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  • From ANON - Jeanette on January 13, 2006
    I loved your story and i hope you write more on it because i would love to read the rest of the story
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  • From ANON - Haywire_Hakaze on January 07, 2006
    @ 21 beginning

    I'd read all of it, but I've got to jet! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Nikki on January 03, 2006
    Please update, I love this story, and I want to see it finished.
    I know that you have a life, and that you are probably a busy person,
    but if you can just email me to tell if you will continue, I would be a very happy person!
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  • From ANON - missing ur story on December 26, 2005
    well i love this story, I've been following it forever, and Im just kinda losing all faith that it'll ever be updated, its HAS been over a year now. Could you even just let us know if you'll continue this? I've seriously read this story over at the very least 10 times. i LOVEEEEEE it, and not knowing whats going on with it totally sucks, it's just so good u CANT let it just go unfinished! plesaeeeeeeeeeee! e-mail me at sxyitalian008@yahoo.com if u get a chance or just add me to ur notification list. AMAZING story!
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  • From ANON - Whispering Angel on December 16, 2005
    Hey! this story is great i got hooked on the very first chapter!! Please update soon its been soo long since u updated!! I know that all of your other readers want you to update soooon!!!! I look forword to your next update because i know just like your other chapters it going to be great! Just like your other readers I can't wait! Keep on writing because you are a great writer!
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  • From ANON - Cyndi T. on November 26, 2005
    heeeey sup? =P when r u gonna write the next chapter?!?!?!

    i'v been waiting 4 such a LONG TIME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    byeeeee!!!

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  • From ANON - Anon on November 03, 2005
    Thank you so much for this story, I really enjoy reading it. Your characters are very believable and I hope you continue writing.
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  • From ANON - Animefreak242 on October 22, 2005
    I've liked your story so far. It's just this chapter. This chapter, as well as the one before it, was a little... well, not so good. There have also been a few mistakes (as far as spelling and grammar). Like in this chapter you called Kazou, Yazou. Maybe you want to get a beta to look over your chapters before you submit them?

    Another thing: Throughout the story you've sometimes (though more now) omitted putting the actual name(s) of the characters when they speak, think or act. Instead you've written 'she', 'he', 'him' and 'her'. I ignored it previously because it wasn't that big of a deal (and I thought someone would have already mentioned it to you - you'd fix it), but now that there are more characters it makes reading the chapters a bit confusing/annoying. You have to pay more attention to who is saying or doing something, rather than what is being said or done. For example: You wrote, "Kazuo was stunned when he saw her, he felt her presence as he sat upon his mountain, it was so strong and unique he had to come and lay his eyes upon the source. She stood in front of him in beautiful winter colors while her hair was done in the most elegant style complementing her beautiful face further if it were possible..." We know that Kazou is the one that's thinking all of this, but it wouldn't hurt to put his, or Kagome's name in there once in a while.

    Anyway, like I said, I enjoy stories with this plot. They're not that common. But I guess I keep reading. Hope it gets better.

    ~Animefreak242
    aka
    Kawaii Girl
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  • From ANON - Dragon of fire and darkness on October 08, 2005
    Your story was great!! Keep up the good work!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 07, 2005
    good
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  • From ANON - WHALEON on October 05, 2005
    hey, a few mistakes, but excellent story! ^^
    please tell me when uve updated
    kiara not kilala lol i burst out laughing !!!
    congrats on the awsome story again!!
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  • From ANON - meggg on September 12, 2005
    an update would just about make my life, been waiting since, well forever, i know u have a life and all so whenever u can at least let us know whats oging on? WE LOVE U
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  • From ANON - anon no more on September 07, 2005
    I hope you continue with this story. I've really enjoyed it and you have a unique story telling ability.

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  • From ANON - anon no more on August 28, 2005
    I have read all 23 chapters. I love this story. You slowly gave Sesssome emotions and allowed Kagome to grow. This is an enthralling read and I hope you can write some more very soon.
    My thanks to you for a wonderful story.
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