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Reviews for Ningen no Kokoro

By : StillWater
  • From ANON - lady everest on October 16, 2006
    Why haven't you updated?
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  • From ANON - lady everest on October 15, 2006
    Inuyasha is a "Inu" hanyou. You call him a neko, which means cat. He's a dog hanyou.

    I want Kikyo-Jr. to be paired with Inuyasha.
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  • From ANON - Lady Everest on October 02, 2006
    I want to see loving, sweet lemons later.

    I want an Inuyasha/Yokai-Kikyo pairing. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!

    Great concept by the way.

    NARAKU MUST SUFFER! KILL THE SICK PERVY CREEP!
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  • From ANON - stomponfrogs on May 06, 2005
    Well, that was a very....interesting story. I read the whole story without skipping any parts. Aren't you proud of me? Yes, it was quite disturbing, but I've read stoires somewhat similar to that before, so I was kind of prepared for it, although you do take the cake when it comes to violence. I'll be looking forward to the second chapter. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Kasutaishi on April 01, 2005
    Holy shit.
    Well, I cannot say that you didn't warn me, truly, I cannot. I don't think that anything could have prepared me for what I just read though. It was nothing if not.....inventive. I cannot in all honesty say that I have never written anything similar, because I have, repeatedly, but that, that was something else entirely. Congratulations. In all my time of reading fanfics and writing my own stories and whatnot, never have I ever actually felt queasy from something that I read. Inventive. Truly sadistic. Genuinely twisted and morbid. It was the skin bit that got me first, then the bit with the intestines......
    Oh yeah, I think I need some water now.
    I honestly do not know how you are going to manage to reconcile them, if you even intend to do so. I am genuinely interested in finding out how things turn out, so click on my email and let me know if you are continuing this story at any time.
    Oh yeah, and a word from my muse to yours......
    This is truly something worth applauding, the fact that you got her to write it, and the fact that she actually posted it!
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  • From ANON - ........... on February 26, 2005
    oh god.........
    such sadistic things...
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 25, 2005
    damn...that was sick but in a good way.
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  • From ANON - Sess_2005 on November 20, 2004
    other than the fact you kept calling him a 'neko' youkai, it was a good story. he's actually an 'inu' youkai. as in INUyasha.
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  • From ANON - krickets on October 20, 2004
    He he he i likes it. You have clear character deliniation and even though kikyo (d is is the same as kikyo you proved her to be quite diffrent and unique. I like the diffrent side of goshiki although i doubt that is what he was relly like. It should naraku as being very deviant when i dont thin narku actually like blood and guts he just likes emotional pain and anguish. He would torture some one by torturing the thing they love most. But it definatly made the story interesting
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  • From ANON - Tetsuya on September 05, 2004
    All in all, very well written. I found one typo, something like "was denied to him," which should have been "to her."

    From that, you can probably tell, I read the lemon, and I was disturbed. Not too badly, but more than I expected, considering that I was prepared for it. Although, the analyitical side of me that was unaffected by the horror noticed that it was very original, and also well written. Good diction for... yeah. Still, it's the most disturbing thing I've ever read. I can see why you got so few reviews.

    Somehow, the "whee" in the closing author's note disturbed me more than the whole lemon (probably because I wasn't prepared for it). As if the effort to prove that you weren't insane made you seem schizophrenic instead...

    At any rate, if you really are going to continue this fic, the "get out" author's note should probably suffice. I was originally typing "I strongly suggest that you cut out this dark part, and have it separately accessible, as a prefix," but now that I think about it, most people probably read the lemon because there wasn't anything else to read. Once (if ever) you have more chapters, it shouldn't be a problem. Just make sure you specify that the later chapters aren't bordering on dark and horrifying, that they're more based on action, etc. People might think that there's always going to be that feeling that there's some horribly evil section looming. Then again, that might be just me, because I knew that it was there.

    How long do you estimate before you post another chapter? I wish to see Yuukaku in action. In all fairness, I estimate four months for my 1st fic to be posted, six weeks for my 2nd. That should be enough time to get over the Ranma.

    But enough of my rambling. Those muses sure are impressive. Available at discount rates, you say?
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  • From ANON - Gregoriev on September 03, 2004
    OMFG!!!!!

    That was so wrong!!! when you said lemon, i htought you meant sex! not some horrible horrible depraved sick fantasy! it wasn't even fatasy, more like a vivid description of eternal damnation in hell, without the hellfire! in my fan fic i kept it real, real hot, real sexy, and without that marking shit. this...this was just indescribably horrible, graphic, obsene, and totally not something i could possibly enjoy in any way whatsoever.

    PS, you write really well. you should apply that to non graphic horrible deprived torture sex chapters.

    OMG!!!!

    ....I think i have to go pray now...
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  • From ANON - Tokumeino on September 02, 2004
    Very impressive. Great descriptives, particularly with the emotions. Interesting and very plausible concept. Excellent work. You should defiantly continue.
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  • From ANON - Shinuvasha13 on August 28, 2004
    Very nice. While some words I thought could have been better chosen, you have a way with words that creates a vivid atmosphere shows ones emotions and feelings, more specifically fears, better than anyone i've ever read. Like that moment when Naraku called Kikyo to him before he went all evil on her... amazing. You don't feel like the reader. You become K, wa, walking slowly up to Naraku, dreading what will come. I can't convey how well cause this effect of atmosphere and emotion. Your ability to show the the emotions inside the characters' heads like that is clearly your strongest point. All the other parts... it was all very good. It was clearly well thought out, like with the foreshadowing and stuff.

    The japanese usage was good too. In some fanfics ive read, it seems like the author pulls up the dictionary and looks for random words no normal fanfic reader (no matter how avid) should know. One fanfic that I read had different japanese words for outerinner battlements, the gatehouse, the watch tower.. no one freaking cares about those. All the japanese words you used your fairly basic, useful words that are good to know, and you even made complete statements.

    A lot of stuff is written between the lines too, very nice. Like Kagura's nickname for Kikyo, little bird... very nice.

    oh and that stuff about the emotions in their head and all, and really making the reader feel their fears... im not just being nice. its freaking awesome!
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