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By : Elysant
  • From ANON - MyOwnHappyEnding (not logged on) on August 27, 2004
    THANK GOD! well...actually Thank you! I was hoping they would get pass this Priestess/Hanyou thingy...now he will finally know.....let's all hope that nothing goes wrong...w I a I am assuming is going to happen...*Sighs* Love the chapter!
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  • From ANON - ZoZe on August 27, 2004
    Woaaaahh! Amazing fic!
    I wasn't able to stop reading it. Now that I've just finished the 7th chapter it is half past 4 in the morning!
    Although I'll die without coffee today, I would like to read more soon! :-)
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  • From ANON - Tori C. on August 27, 2004
    Damn! Come on! It was gettin' good again! I hope Kagome doesn't scream. That'd be bogus. Okay, I guess I'll be patient. This is an excellent story. Please keep writing.
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  • From ANON - aish on August 27, 2004
    great story so far. cant wait for the next chapter =).
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  • From ANON - Anonymous on August 27, 2004
    I like this story it's very good I can't wait to read the next chapter Your grammar and spelling are very good this fic is very very good and trust me I have read alot of fics please update soon thanks!
    DB
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  • From ANON - Adina on August 27, 2004
    You ROCK Your the best i love the way u update fast and they are super long chapters u have such a great talent for writing keep it up. ill keep reading and reviewing. Bye! -Adina
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  • From ANON - Koori on August 27, 2004
    Ahhh! Cliffhanger! Nuuuu! >_< Please update soon, I'll die if you don't XD Hehe.. I suppose.. I get into this fic... a bit.. too much.. hehe...

    But it's really, really good ^___^ Please keep it up :)
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  • From ANON - Evil Overlord on August 27, 2004
    **blinks** ahhhh!!! I really have to say, were I Kagome, I probably would have just left, instead of retreating to Sango's room. ^_^ Naughty place to leave it though, naughty!! Keep up the good work, your story's great so far!
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  • From ANON - ZiggyOtaku on August 27, 2004
    You know... when you spoke of that little Hanyou... automatically I saw a little Inuyasha- you know that scene with him looking back at you with a red ball in his hands? Yea.. automatically I saw that -without the ball- looking at them in the streets with that sad look on his face, but it didn't really look anime-ish. It looked like the cruel world in the city with a heart broken child abused and neglected. I know you described him to have red hair and to be a fox ^_~ but before you described him I saw little Inuyasha... and I don't normally get that colorful of a image in my mind reading a fic. I give you a very big congrats on your writing ability. You have true talent. Keep up your good work.
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 27, 2004
    ya know Ive been reading the last 7 chaps for two hours and now you leave it at a cliffy???? sniffles and wants to tear her hair out...and by this I mean mine lol....but I really like this story and please dont aske why it took me 2 hours to read 7 chaps k??? brain dead here lol, anyhow love the fic and I wants more please please please update k??? pretty please?? much huggles and thanks and smiles MIja...:-)
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  • From ANON - Opheila on August 27, 2004
    that was sooooo damn mean!!!! grrr i hat cliffys lol
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  • From ANON - Platinum on August 27, 2004
    THAT WAS THE BEST CHAPPIE EVER!!! I so knew that Kagome was going to be left out but i doubted and wante to make sure you'd put that in but then i thought 'nah thats whats going to happen anyways!' but i what really caught me off gaurd was the fthatthat Inu would reveal himself to her that fast bt then again it was probably jsut an accident. PLZ UPDATE SOON!!! AS SOON AS KAGS STARTED TO CRY I WAS SO DYING TO READ THE NEXT CHAPPIE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Zee and Ray-mon on August 27, 2004
    R: "duuuuuuude....saucy!"

    Z: "..."

    R: "Wish Inu would stop f-ing up though..."

    Z: "..."

    R: "Well come on man! Say something." *Types away as Zee lies like a slug on a nearby couch, straining ears for responses.*

    Z: "uhhhhh."

    R: "That's right. Just one big ugh! Ive been reading this to her ever since she sprawled out on the couch. Note to self - Be careful the next time be go out to eat. She tends to underestimate her immunities to alcohol and certain foods. *smirks* You should have seen her when we got out of there. The funniest damn thing I ever saw!!!"

    Z: "..."

    R: "Well I like it altho I wish they would get together already!!! Come on! I cant stand all the torture. It's like watching chicken and potatoes, you just got to wait for the gravy to pour in. MMM...saucy!"

    Z: "Tell them that if they are going through all this torture, we better get one hell of a bang soon!"

    R: "Yeah man, you tell off those perogees (How the hells ons one spell that? I'd ask Zee but she's in swirlyland)

    Z: "Yay"

    R: "Anyways, would Inu just play around with a friend like that. An ego like that is a really big kick in the head. Please don't cliff us again! This time I fell like im gonna fall into a sea of snake heads and I'm the extra sauce! The best part of every meal in my opinion. uh, Spongebob.........nitemares....

    Z: "Be nice R*beep*

    R: "Cant let anybody know that! I'm ready baby!"

    *takes a sledgehammer and waits *patiently* for Leafy's signal to charge the Writer's block, the little light on helmet flickering repeatedly*

    Z: "..."

    R: "Don't scare us like that again, thank you!"

    Z: "???"

    R: "Sorry if we're not sane. Continue on and we're praying for progress if you know my meaning.

    Z: "Smut!"

    R: "??? She didn't mean that."

    Z: "Mean what? Write more andl bel be better next time...I hope."
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  • From NekoYokai on August 26, 2004
    AHHH!! LEAFE :'( You make Neko cry... I read your work in awe. It's so captivating. And yes, writting alot probably does prevent writters block, but I don't know what happened, I'm blocked :( what's your secret?!
    Anyhow, Neko is very hooked, I loved the end of this chapter how he reveals himself, now im panicked to stalk twice as much for an update. I admire you Leafe :P keep up the good work. Love and huggles to you :3
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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 26, 2004
    you updated! hurray! very good chapter eve though I do think that kag is investing waaaay too much emotional energy into some guy she's never met. it always pisses me off when girls do that. its like, calm down! he barely knows you! but it was a good chapter with a cliffy! fun fun! update soon!
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