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By : Elysant
  • From ANON - szmadad on August 26, 2004
    Good gods! Please update soon! You ended that last chapter in a way that just has me begging to find out what goes on next!
    Again, I've got to tell you that I'm so stuck on your story. You're doing such a great job fleshing out charcharacters, their feelings and motivations. Nothing feels rushed...although I'm dying for Inu and kag to get together...your pace is great. After all, things can't happen overnight...the intense attraction is there...but the feelings and actions are all building.

    Again, can't wait to read what happens next now that Inu has revealed himself to Kags. I want him to realize that she's known he's a hanyou all along...
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  • From ANON - Zipper Tantrum on August 25, 2004
    You are evil!! How could you cut it off like that?? Oh!! The inhumanity!!
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  • From ANON - Aduba on August 23, 2004
    WOW great fic love these kind ur a great writter and u know how to entertain ur readers i loved every word 5 stars two big thumbs up dont leave me hanging update soon i be sure to review everytime and read every chapter love it just love it keep it up
    Adina
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  • From ANON - Kusari_Kami on August 23, 2004
    wow. u have an amazing talent for writing my friend. this is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time, and it is definately is holding my interest...keep it up. please continue and get another chapter up soon.


    cheers. *raises glass*
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  • From ANON - twilight on August 22, 2004
    but but butbut argggggggggggggg how could u ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh come on plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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  • From ANON - Platinum on August 22, 2004
    Your so evil how could you leave it there you have to update soon!! Im always checking this stor to see if theres an update.....so PLZ UPDATE SOON SO I CAN FORGET ON HOW EVIL YOU ARE!!!!
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  • From ANON - Tori on August 22, 2004
    Come on! I can't wait till the next chapters! This sounds cool.
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  • From ANON - Fairia13 on August 22, 2004
    Yes, yes you ARE so mean. Sooo...is this when Kag accidently triggers the release of Inu's concealment spell? Do you have an update list? Excellent story by the way. When does the bad guy come in? Naraku, perhaps? Maybe as a teacher...it would be funny if he were a priest or something like that. But...an evil priest say, bent on ridding the world of demons and hanyous, for some jacked-up reason - like they killed his parents, or pull a Hitler and he's bitter cuz he's a hanyou.. Hmmm..his father was a demon who raped his mother (I know you said no rape, but you could put it out as being "This is what happened." and not go into details.) and his mom is bitter and a little psychotic... Since he recogonizes Kag as a shrine maiden...sorry. I have runaway fingers, but I'll stop now. Excellent story, do post soon!

    FR
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  • From ANON - Three Cheers for the Indians on August 22, 2004
    dude, so far...you haven't risen a bit of disappointment in me and I LOVE YA FOR IT! You update frequently, good lengthy chapters, one SWEET plot, hilarious situations and basing it on one of my favourite pairings of all time. Get chapter seven going and don't disappoint the audience!
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  • From ANON - Zee and Ray-mon on August 22, 2004
    R: You cheater!

    Z: Oh god, Here we go again.

    R: You cheater!

    Z: She's just a little disappointed.

    R: You cheater!!!

    Z: Never mind, she's starting to tear up.

    R: Leave us hanging by our necks!!!!!!!!

    Z: She means you cliffed us.

    R: Oh the horror!!

    Z: Just smack a bottle of Smirnoff's on her head and she'll rewind

    R: Will the next chapter let us fall or tighten the noose? Or will the Great Chapter Seven play Robin Hood and rescue us from our fate?

    Z: I'm more of a Spider-man person.

    R: Yeah...he's hotter but come to think of it, Batman's my boy!

    Z: Straying a little aways from Inu-Yasha here.

    R: *sighs* He's so addicting.

    Z: You're scaring me...
    : No: Now if only I had some cheesecake-

    *WHAM!*

    Z: Ray-mon is not availible at the moment. Please leave your fanfic at the beep.

    *BBBBEEEEELLLLLLCCCCCCCCHHHHHHH!*

    R: *swirly* no turkey

    Z: Must have hit her in the gut to hard.


    IT ROCKED! The whole Kikyo handjobby thing was a bit disturbing (who would let that thing touch you), but we like the chapter notheless. Although it seemed just slightly "unfulfilling", only a tiny bit, we have high hopes for the next chapter and are *patiently* waiting for it.


    R: How long do we have to sit here for?

    Z: Until Leafy remembers the little people from her throne of high praise. (Just Kidding!!)

    WE'RE NOT WORTHY! WE'RE SCUM! WE SUCK!!!

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  • From ANON - drake220 on August 21, 2004
    you ARE so mean! man, hurry up adn update! i'm dying of suspence here!!!
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  • From ANON - miakachan on August 21, 2004
    Wow...Kagome has real willpower....If I saw Inu like that....I prolly would've jumped him...lol

    Btw...I mainly read this fic on Mediaminer but I think there's a prob with that one cuz even though you keep updating it, I can't go to any chapters beyond the third one......the only way I'm seeing new chapters is because your fic is on my favorites list.....
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  • From ANON - Valeron on August 21, 2004
    great. update soon. i wanna no what happens.
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  • From ANON - jazzyca on August 21, 2004
    omg! you are sooo mean! c'mon! please update soon! pretty please? i'll be your best friend! i love this story. it's different than most.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on August 21, 2004
    Oh you tease! Your last chapter just leaves us begging...really begging for more! And who knows, you might prolong the agony by waiting to be all lemony. Sigh :)

    I think I reviewed this story on MM.org, but I really love the way you're creating the characters and relationships! They aren't one dimensional. And talk about fire between Inuyasha and Ke. We. When those two get together, it'll be like thunder n' lightening! Can;t wait to see what happens when Inu realizes that Kags knows he's a hanyou but couldn't care less.

    Yowza!
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