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By : aleaha
  • From vegeta6529 on November 27, 2008
    thawas ok but is there a reason their so short
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  • From vegeta6529 on November 27, 2008
    nice chapter koga is a bitch though
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  • From vegeta6529 on November 27, 2008
    IT WAS A GOOD STORY despite the many grammtial erroes next time use spellcheck
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on January 18, 2008
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on September 16, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on April 24, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on July 21, 2006
    oh and another thing dear..
    you really should look into the
    effects of drugs...
    this is just so misplaced.. i'm sorry i just
    cannot read anymore of this shit....

    it kind of pisses me off for some reason.

    you are totally undermineing inuyasha and
    kagome's entire relationship... you know
    sometimes drugs .. no wait.. ALL THE TIME
    drugs bring you out of yourself.. like
    drinking... and its sad to me becuase when
    they *fuck* as so many people harshly and
    grossly use as the term to describe it...
    they arent acting off of their true actions
    or feelings....

    this is just dispicable and I cannot read it

    really... you need to join a help group..
    get off the drugs while you still are
    salvagable. Drugs dont solve your problems..
    they give you a temporary fix in your reality
    that in the end always dies... and over time..
    it only causes more problems.

    Gomen Nasi but I cannot read your work anymore.


    heather.

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  • From ANON - XxSangoxX *not signed in* on July 21, 2006
    wow.. you smoke a lot dont you...

    you know... that's not good foryou... haha
    You might want to check your spelling dear..

    and calm down on those bowls.

    ^_^

    believe me I KNOW
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  • From ANON - lil_merc_girl on May 10, 2006
    wow. i'm sorry, and don't take this as a flame, but, i read the first two chapters, and that was it. it hurt
    too much to read the rest. one, the characters are completely ooc. two, you go from kagome and inu getting high, to kagome jumpin him, to a little lovey moment, and then back to jumpin again. you have to be consistant. it started out as kagome wanting to get a good ****, and then in the middle "I love you inuyasha" to just.... agh.

    i don't think i can say anymore about this.
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  • From ANON - janomaru on January 21, 2006
    please update if you dont i might end up like MoonDream only 6-7 times worse AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the pain






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  • From ANON - janomaru on January 21, 2006
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - inuizzle luva on December 08, 2005
    PLEASE WRITE MORE! THAT WAS GREAT! Byeizzle From inuizzle luva
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  • From ANON - kei-kun393 on October 04, 2005
    Your fic is very good you sould finish it. Can't wait to see how you finish it.
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  • From ANON - jojo on July 07, 2005
    wow i really hope you finish this story as fsat as you can becase it's the best thing i've read right now!
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  • From ANON - sango on March 01, 2005
    It's not a bad start, although I think you need to spell check it. Some parts of it just dont make sense.... But like I said, not bad... ^_^
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