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By : Zelix
  • From ANON - batgirl on August 14, 2006
    Even though I didn't like the pairings you had so far, I can tell that you are a really talented writer. So continue with what you're doing, and if you have time, can you write one with Kikyo/Sesshomaru/Naraku pairing?
    Thanks
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  • From ANON - chanda on September 04, 2005
    Wow, a blind Kags, very creative I do not think I read a story with kags being blind. Your stories have been very original and I look forward to your next one shot chap.
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  • From ANON - lexy on June 08, 2005
    oh my god...that was so hot and sexy..*pouts*..makes me wish i really had a boyfriend.. so plz continue you sexy beast!!
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  • From Dunkelgelb on June 07, 2005
    A new story in progress?

    Hell yeah!
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  • From ANON - stormfox15 on March 06, 2005
    yo wrote a ayame inuyasha storie those mi favs

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  • From ANON - Cdnmdn on January 21, 2005
    What can I say. HOT. Absolutly enticing, erotic, and exquisite. Fuck for no experience you sure have a way with lemons. My husband laughed at me when I came downstairs all wet. Asked me if I was dreaming about "Little Tetsiaga".(spelled wrong don't care)LOL Definatly "Lord of Lemons".

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  • From ANON - scherezade on January 04, 2005
    Demon Inuyasha-Kagome....wow! You really do have a unique way of writing these stories. Very interesting concept...your version of how Inu-youkai came to exist. I also liked how you allowed Kagome to "see" Inuyasha with her heart despite her physical blindness. I thought that was a sweet touch to an otherwise hot lemon. It's interesting...Inuyasha evidently can understand human speech even though he can't use it himself...
    Love beyond borders...beyond the boundaries of society's expectations. Beautiful. And did I mention...nicely hentai :)
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  • From ANON - Kiyana Va Sala on December 11, 2004
    I was going to suggest Inuyasha/Mrs Higurashi. Then I read the thing about only the above pairings. Ah well :P

    How about Ayame/Inuyasha? I have no clue how to make an effective AU plot for them, though...
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  • From ANON - BluePuppy on September 27, 2004
    Wow... All i can say after chapter three is that you are going to make a woman very happy someday.
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  • From ANON - Cassie on September 26, 2004
    Your writing was great keep it up and write more great stories for us. I would love a Kagome/Sess pairing. May be she stands up to him for some reason and he starts to see her as a woman instead of a girl and she's tired of coming in second with Inuyasha.
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  • From ANON - love-chan on September 25, 2004
    Zelix, could you do a story with Sesshoumaru and Kikyo as a pairing? I barely find stories with her in it unless she being bashed, and I like that pairing. Or could you do a story with Kikyo and Naraku as a pairing? Wouldn't mind either...
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  • From on September 23, 2004
    so good. so yum. but if i may, a small critique. the comments in parentheses are not needed. it is a distraction. but please, please write more.
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  • From ANON - Kiranta on September 16, 2004
    Kiranta here agin. How about doing a sequal to the first one(Inuyasha/Kanna), and how about having Sango or Ayame paired up with a custom character. If you want to know what he'll look like, just e-mail me and I'll give a description.
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  • From ANON - Utena the Black Rose on September 14, 2004
    I like it so far. Can't wait to read more. I was wondering if you could do a Sesshomaru/Ayumi (Kagome's friend) as a paring in a story? Plotwise....hmm...not sure. Maybe Ayumi could stumble upon a certain demon lord that has been sealed away. And surely, accidently freeing a powerful, cunning, dangerous, and tempting demon could be called a sin?

    Let me know if you will.
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  • From ANON - Valdimarian on September 13, 2004
    I loved this chapter, I could defenitly see myself reading more chapters like this one! I bet you could get a whole story outa the plot from this chapter, few more lemons from now till they're discovered, then they're forced to flee. A good FF story you might be able to use as an idea might be "Union of Souls" by Sol-Li .t's t's about InuTaishou and Izaou (though she goes by another name) and how they meet, same circumstances as this actualy.
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