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Reviews for Inuyasha: " The mystery love and marriage."

By : inuyashagirl
  • From BloodiedAngel on May 22, 2005
    Grrr... I want an update soon...
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  • From BloodiedAngel on May 22, 2005
    Try not to use said to often. Try using a thesaurus, find better words then 'said'.
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  • From ANON - ...................... on May 17, 2005
    i think u could do better it just that ur story is not very detailed enough
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  • From ANON - ..................... on May 17, 2005
    sorry but ur story fucking sucks
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  • From ANON - koraru on September 02, 2004
    the story is not very detailed
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  • From ANON - inuyashagirl on August 31, 2004
    I will tonight and I should have it back up by friday or Sunday night, I hope. Cause I haven't have time to proof read it. with school and homework all the time. So thats for the idea. And tell me if I have any more mistakes, cause this is my first story, and it took me alot of time to write it. So keep review and reading it and telll me if I did something wrong!!!!

    Thanks alot!!!!

    Inuyashagirl
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 31, 2004
    my GOD. your lack of gramatical skills tourtures me. please. go back to 6th grade. maybe you will learn that when you have a new person saying something, you always start a new paragraph. See below:

    Kagome said, "Sango, you're right, I do like InuYasha"

    "See, that wasnt so bad," replied Sango.

    PLEASE proofread your story, then re-post. i like the story line.
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  • From ANON - KikiAnn1RosEl1Derf2 on August 30, 2004
    Cute, very cute please continue it's getting good.
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  • From inuyashagirl on August 15, 2004
    hey yall, please review my story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From inuyashagirl on August 11, 2004
    so good so far!!1
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  • From ANON - tippi2 on August 10, 2004
    cool
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