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Reviews for Red Riding Haori

By : sublimetrickster
  • From ANON - swasdiva on October 06, 2005
    What an amazing fic. I follow 'Dog Skin' religiously, and I can definitely see your same style infused in this piece. You have a very unique voice; it's adventurous and carries the same lofty grandeur as any substantiated fairytale, but interweaves modern nuances of dialogue and character portrayal. Combined, it's effervescent fun. You definitely have a knack for taking the fairytale aspect of Inuyasha to the next level. I've never read any other author's work where they can combine traditional western stories with Inuyasha so effortlessly.

    I just realized I hadn't even begun praising the hot action! I swear to you that I haven't read a lemon this steamy in a good long while. Again, your language is both bold but tender. I particularly love the way you handle Inuyasha. You manage to keep him in character while still exploring his emotions in a solid, believable way. My only beef, and it's not really a beef considering the title (which I ADORE) and the fact that you need some antagonist, is that Kouga is the bad guy. In a sense he's not bad, just a demon acting as a demon should (and God bless Kagome for *still* understanding this even after what he did to her) but I hate to see a good character turn bad. But really, that's just me sulking...his role in the story was not only needed but was the perfect catalyst for tension and discovery. And who am I to complain about a little Kouga/Kagome lime after all? ^_^

    All in all this story was brilliantly written, and while I agree that this particular fic is pretty much finished as it should be, I can't wait to read more of your work.
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  • From VampireWitch on November 29, 2004
    I liked it. Nicely done.
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  • From ANON - Trish on November 23, 2004
    i love the story so far!!!!!! Keep the chapters coming plz!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkMystic on November 22, 2004
    It was a very good fic, thanks for writing it, and write more I always enjoy reading. For your first fic you're really good at it, hope you update soon, cant wait to read more of it.
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  • From ANON - PrincessLemon on September 07, 2004
    I am highly pleased with these 5 chapters and I look forward to the 6th.
    As your Princess, I command you to continue the story!!!!
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  • From ANON - AJAngelique on September 07, 2004
    *HIGH PICTHED SQUEAL*
    MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!
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  • From on August 29, 2004
    this was definetly interesting! can't wait until u post a new chapter very soon!
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  • From ANON - BluePuppy on August 28, 2004
    OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!! I liked that story. Your writing is very good. Peace out!
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  • From ANON - szmadad on August 27, 2004
    Excellent chapter! I always love when Inu and Kag get together with a terrific lemon :D

    Really great job -and I can't believe it's your first fanfic...meaning, it was really well written. I'm still shaking my head over how fitting the Little Red Riding Hood tale is when adding the Inuyasha cast! Down to the wicked wolf!

    I'm glad that you let Kagome be assertive...she basically put the movn Inn Inu...and yet, it wasn't done in a way that seemed wrong considering she had been attacked by kouga earlier. You did a great job depicting her thoughts so that her actions made sense and didn't seem implausible.

    At any rate, I'll be looking for your next fic. Hoply, ly, the'll be a nice Inu-Kag in that as well (hint hint) :) I'm just nuts about that pair!
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  • From ANON - Zelix (Not logged on) on August 27, 2004
    This was your first fanfiction? Wow, that's all i can say... good story, excellent lemon and good characters, this was a very good story! Keep writing, you have talent!
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  • From ANON - Valkyrie on August 24, 2004
    Oh. My. Gosh. I feel as if I must burst into tears. I LOVE THIS FIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This was so magnificently well done. Rarely have I read a fic that has had such a great effect on me. Sublimetrickster, you are an effing goddess (or god, I'm sorry I didn't check your profile before I wrote this). Let it bown own to all that "Red Riding Haori" is a masterful work of genious!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 22, 2004
    Was kinda wary of reading this, but it's better than I thought it would be. I was surfing arounf on Deviant Art and saw your stuff and really liked it... so I thought I'd read your story as well. It's good. Hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - szmadad on August 21, 2004
    I've been reading this on mm.org and couldn't pass up the opportunity to review here!
    This has got to be one of the best Inuyasha style fairy tales I've read! For whatever reason, I had never thought of "Little Red Riding Hood" with the Inuyasha characters...but really, it fits so perfectly..down to the red haori/hood that Kagome ends up wearing!
    I'm glad that our hero has saved Little Red...but I don't want Inuyasha to think that giving her up will be what's best for Ka.
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    Kouga's attempted rape of Kagome should have opened her eyes to her feelings about Inuyasha...not that I'm downplaying her trauma...but I mean, she must recognize that instead of Kouga or someone else, she'd want to be with Inuyasha that way.
    The only reason I say this is cuz up to now, it's clear that Inu is interested in Kagome...and has thought about possibly asking her to be his mate....but it's unclear if Kagome sees him beyond being a friend who meets hy thy the well. There's been no mention of the depths of her feelings for him...be they attraction or love...beyond the fact that she feels safe and protected by him.
    Please update soon...
    :)
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  • From ANON - AnimeGirlInuyasha on August 21, 2004
    i really like this fic and hope that u can update it soon!!! its really well writen and i hope that it will only get better as the story goes on!!! (i love Inuyasha!!!)
    -M
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  • From ANON - Luna Stargazer on August 20, 2004
    Interesting plot, intriguing way of keeping the characters IC, and slowly drawing to a happy ending...A very well written and thought out InuYasha fanfic if I do say so myself. I hope to see more from you in the future. Fairy Tales are normally hard to do with characters being accurate. You have a true talent with it. Perhaps try something like Cinderella for another lemon or maybe The Little Mermaid.
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