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Reviews for Half-Blood Wendy Here to Stay

By : Numisma
  • From ANON - Inuyasha831 on November 21, 2006
    ok...
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  • From ANON - a on August 23, 2005
    wtf? thats so confusing
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  • From ANON - Nena on October 17, 2004
    I think this is probably the best written piece of literature that you've posted. It shows a much deeper sid you you, not only in what you are conteted,ted,
    but in your use of language. I like how you play with words and use allusions and metaphores. This definitely shows a growth and blossoming of your writing
    abilities. BTW: I hope you update Movie House Hanyou soon.
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  • From ANON - lilpapillonbleu on August 17, 2004
    That was Inuyasha, inorbiorbid way, being really sweet about his time with Kagome. Maybe it wasn't meant to be taken literally, but the thing about keeping her around until there's nothing left...wow. Just because I'm a nostalgic freak when it comes to Peter Pan, I almost cried when i realized you were making an allusion to that story, and I did cry laughing when I realized the one to Harold and Maude. In a loss for better, and more original, adjectives, that was one hell of an insightful piece of a one shot. The subject of Inuyasha's semi-immortality, provided nobody outright kills him i guess, versus Kagome's lack of, is a subject brought up in only a couple of the fanfictions i've ever read. Even Takahashi-san, herself, has never brought it up. It seems to be a touchy subject. Where i have encountered itng bng brought up, the author only vaguely gives some explanation about how mating them would automatically extend Kagome's life or match the two's mortality together. I am ecstatic about the way you handled it, just stepping out plainly and saying, "sorry guys, this isn't going to be a lovoveyovey gooshy story where they live and die together. This is going to be a reality check on the aging situation." ...and what a check it was. If you don't mind, I'd love to keep a copy of it on my hard drive so i can use it as a teaser to Movie House Hanyou. People should read that one, too. I should've reviewed that one, also, but....let's just say it was in the middle of the night when I finished the latest chapter and I wasn't in a physical condition to give any coherent, let alone workable, criticism. Much love, and write on...maybe i'll drop by and write one for Movie House Hanyou, too...
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  • From on August 16, 2004
    Bea...u...ti...ful! Very short, but extremely touching. It shows us InuYashaearsears like never before. He really wants to love Kagome, but he's also afraid because he knows that she will eventually die, but he will keep on living (that is unless he can changer her into a hanyou as well.....). Now, we just need for Inu to tell Kagome this, and then perhaps she will truly understand his reluctance (besides her being jailbait). Loved this little side story, and I'm looking forward to more updates to Movie House Hanyou.
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  • From ANON - Wasabi, Biatch. on August 16, 2004
    Numisma, that was absolutely beautiful. I applaud your complete ability as a writer, and beg to you to never stop wri. Ev. Ever. Congratulations on making me cry, it doesn't happen often. I just want to read it over, and over, and over again. Bravo. I don't think I've read something of yours I haven't liked. Your other one-shot from MHH, was magnificent. Movie House Hanyou in itself is amazing, utterly amazing. The plot line, the writing style, spelling, grr...r... It's reassuring, knowing that somewhere out there someone still uses proper english. I know you must hear this about a million times a day, and I disgust myself in saying it...

    But, if you're not too busy, could you please update MHH soon? It kills me not having new chapters. But, I do understand the need to write and have it up to your standards. Which, apparently, are pretty damn high.

    Ta,
    Wasabi
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  • From ANON - sikaria on August 16, 2004
    that is one sad way of viewing it but completely true. Putting it that way I feel sorry for him. It makes you wonder how can life be so cruel to grant people somethings and curse others with whatever its left. But hey thats life and thank god such a sad creature is not alive today forwoulwould be etenal damnation. Anyway in a poetic way I liked it keep up the good work.
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