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By : NekoYokai

From ANON - Nico on September 16, 2004
If you don't continue with this fic, I will be most sad :0( You must continue please! I beg of you ~gets down on hands and knees~ please! Alot of authors do this. They start a story, I get into it and then they decide they don't want to continue for whatever reason and leave me and the many other of their fans hanging. It makes me want to cry. Do you not love us enough to continue writing. I will bake you cookies and cakes and all sorts of goodies if you continue this fic. Ppppllleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssssssseeee!!!!! This fic is really awsome and I want to know what happens!!!!!
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From ANON - HiredSlayerKimi on September 16, 2004
Please continue getting very good and very nicely writen well later hope to see more soon.
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From ANON - Hazard911 on September 16, 2004
I don't think you should stop writing this story. Though, kind of cliche-ish, you have a really great writing style that could even pull off the much despised OC-ness that seems to be making it's way into EVERY IY fic. . . .can you tell I'm not a fan. Anyway, I hope you continue your story and maybe if your losing focus just remember, everyone loves (well, mostly everyone) Kag/Inu scenes. Just show them more taking an interest in each other rather than having them argue every time they meet. But then again, they say the best sex happens when your angry. . .*hint hint*
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From ANON - Serena on September 16, 2004
Dude, you have done really well on this whole fic. I'm really excited about it cont. Chapter three was good stuff to I'm looking foward to chapter four! keep it up!
~Serena
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From ANON - szmadad on September 16, 2004
Y'know, I'm sorry...I had read the update and didn't leave a review this time just cuz I didn't think I had anything new to say other than I hope you update soon.

Actually, the last line - where Kagome realizes that Inu has walked away with her purse made me laugh out loud. That was not something I expected.

And you gave some interesting details on Inuyasha's life...former drug addict who was used by kikyo and obviously made some very bad choices and hung out with the wrong people.

I DO hope you continue with this fic b/c as with any Inu-Kag story, I'm dying to read how they actually get together. Right now Inu is the one with the attitude that needs to change - he's been insulting Kagome at every turn...rather extreme behavior too. So of course, I'm interested in seeing how he could possibly shift gears to actually be a little nice to her...

So please DO continue..don't drop this story so soon!

:)
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From ANON - Spud...again on September 16, 2004
Sorry. I'll shut up after this. Promise. If you end up telling me if raccoon story was funny or not, DON'T E-MAIL ME!!! Somethingrongrong with it. That's all I have to say. Bye.
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From ANON - Spud on September 16, 2004
I just read the top paragraph in your A/N. You didn't screw up. The chappie was perfectly fine. I liked it. You made Fluffy nice, but strict. I like that! The chap wasn't even confusing. At least not for me.
Spud must now go and eat slop that mommy Spud calls dinner. She actually calls squid and rice DINNER!! I know what you're thinking. Squid and rice? What the hell!? -_O
I know! It's abuse I tell you! ABUSE!!! She's trying to poison me, and coverig ig it up by saying 'I'm trying something new!'
Well guess WHAT ma!? I'm on to you! I WILL get my revenge!! And I- wait... did I just say all that out loud? hehehe...

Anyway, update as SOON as you can! Buh-bye!!

P.S.-DOWN WITH EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS AND RACCOONS!!! (you do realize that I'll never let that go, right?)
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From ANON - Spud on September 16, 2004
*endless laughter* I'm... I'm sorry... I know it's more of a sad story... *giggle* but it was just hilarious! I have to laugh! It actually chased you? Oh my god! And it hissed! *snort* Anyway, you don't have to read if you don't want to, but I'm going to tell you of the 'Newspaper Incident.' So anyway, my dad walks into the kitchen and playfully asks if I got the paper for him. I say no and go get it, even though he was kidding. I open the door. Then before I can even get the paper I notice movement in the corner of the small patio we have. I glanp, ip, intrigued, and in the amount of time the thing gets from there to the placemat, (wich is about a foot away from the door [wind]) I realize three facts: 1) It's a full grown raccoon 2) It's almost right in front of my door, wich isn't normal, and 3) It's foaming at the mouth. Immediately I backtrack to the 3rd fact again, and start to panic. So I slam the door in the poor, rabid thing's face, and scream, "MOM! THERE'S A RABID RACCOON OUTSIDE THE DOOR THAT'S COME TO KILL US ALL AND STEAL ALL OUR CHEESE!" (I actually did say that, I was going through a phase) My mom and dad, as soon as soon as they looked through the window to see for themselves, called the exterminator. My mom and me went through the garage door to get to the car so she could take me to school. (I was ten) I come home later to find the raccoon was gone. I was kind of sad to tell the truth. Poor guy... girl... animal...Yeah. At least it was put out of its misery.
So anyway, thanks for telling me you laughed! Appreciate it! Now I can tell my cousin that story, and hopefully she'll get better. She's actually getting worse.:( Sadness. If it's not too much trouble, could you tell me if you laughed at this one too? It's for a different reason, but it's too long. But if do ddo decide to answer me, you could e-mail me at: toodles@rogers.com (toodles: another phase) or you could do like you did this time. If you do decide to e-mail me, only do it once. My dad checks my e-mails for hate-mail. -_O Urgh. If he found your e-mail, I'd have to explain who you were, and how I know you. Then he'd find out about AFF... I'd be banned from being in the same room with a computer for all eternity. O.O NO!! That must not happen!
Anyway, bye-bye! For now... MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S.- Evil killer squirrels AND evil killer raccoons must die!!!!!!
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From on September 13, 2004
update sooner. i like it though
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From ANON - Ceaseless Cloudy Days on September 12, 2004
I was sort of losing interest by the second chapter, but the third chapter was excellent. ^_^ I love your writing style--its brilliant! And damn that Kikyou for being such a slut...grrr...but still, if she didn't break Inuyasha's heart, then he would've never met Kagome, then...I guess. And I love the way you describe Hojou's density, LMAO! "No, our boy Hojo here couldn't find sand if he was lost in the desert." Haha, it's perfect! It's the same exact Hojou from the actual series, as we can see. -.-;; I like the way he goes all A.D.D. on Kagome, and vice versa. Keep going! This is a fantastic story! ^_^
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From ANON - Spud on September 10, 2004
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I laughed so long and so hard at that chappie, I nearly fell off my chair. Especially the Hojo and Caramilk part! OOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH,Inu-Yasha's gonna get it when Kagome finds him, isn't he? YIPPEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Personally, I like it when Kagome kicks Inu's sorry ass. As for the chappie in general, THUMBS WAY WAY WAY UUUUUUPPPPPPP DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon!!!

P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS STILL MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S.2.-Pickles, and goodnight Las Vegas!!!!
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From ANON - Spud on September 10, 2004
Dude, you finally posted the friggin' chapter! I haven't read it, but was about ten Ien I saw what you said to me. You wanna know why I said that? It's really freakish. I had this two part dream one night. The first part was where I was in my parents car, and then I hear this voice from the backseat. I turn around, ( are yoady ady for it? ) and there's this squirrel wearing this mini Terminator suit, holding a mini rifle.Then it started talking. I can't remember what it said, but I know it was something threatning. But I remember it's voice. It sounded like it was full of helium. Then that part ended. Part two, I remember standing in my front yard. I turn around, and t's t's this sqirrel, staring at me. Then suddenly It's eyes started to glow red. Then it launched, and I mean LAUNCHED at me, like a rocket. IT ATTACKED ME!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Then I felt other squirrels biting me! I collapsed and then I woke up. Turns out I had fallen out of my bed.( O_o ) Yeesh. Well, I hope you now know why EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* Okay, I really hope that made you laugh! I know I sure did! ~_^ PLEASE tell my somehow if you did or didn't laugh a this. I plan on visiting my sick cousin, and telling her that story. She's not a stiff, but she doesn't laugh a lot. The weird thing? The squirell dream is a true story! BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

P.S.- GO CHIPMUNKS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Spud on September 08, 2004
Story's GREAT so far! You must update! *thrusts fist up into the air* sorry *cough*. Anyway, in your message saying you would update soon, I started laughing so hard at the words,"Neko will go snooze," and I don't know why. I know you don't need to know all of this, but for some reason I just had to tell you. And I like to annoy people. BUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!! Spud must go now. My daddy, whom I nicknamed Butter-Brains, (Don't ask...*shakes head*.. too long a story) is coming. Spud must say Pickles, and Goodnight Las Vegas! ( and no, I don't live there )

P.S.- EVIL KILLER SQUIRRELS MUST DIE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (0_0)
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From ANON - black_n_pink on September 08, 2004
i really like your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!! its great so update
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From ANON - ZoZe on September 06, 2004
You're going to kill meeee!!
Every day I visit this site just to see if you have updated yet! But... nothing!
I feel myself in a current lack of IY-Fanfics! Argh....
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