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Reviews for Temptation's a bitch

By : shortybynature04
  • From ANON - None Of Your Business on July 02, 2006
    Omg! You have to write more. I was sitting here reading and when I came to the end I was like what the fuck why did you have to stop. PLEASE!! WRITE MORE ASAP!!!
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  • From on May 15, 2005
    stupid
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  • From ANON - freakna43 on September 12, 2004
    yo it's ight just improve
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  • From ANON - lana on August 23, 2004
    how can i start ummm well it was good but u shouldnt have stoped rite there and then u cou7ld have made it long but it still was good
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  • From ANON - essie on August 22, 2004
    this is starting out to be a great fanfic but it was to short please update soon
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  • From ANON - Hillary on August 22, 2004
    cute but too short
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  • From ANON - Mija on August 22, 2004
    well it was a short chap but hey it was a bit funny how Inu all of a sudden went Miroku on Kagome, hehe I cant wait to read more so I hope you update soon, would like to see where you go with this, much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From drcomalfy on August 21, 2004
    LOL. Sit boy! I like it. Short and yummy.

    Sinfully Yours,
    DM
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  • From ANON - Wild orchid on August 21, 2004
    This site is going into the toilet if writers like you keep posting. THIS IS AN ADULT SITE!!! Stop wasting space with your crap. Chapters are supposed to be longer than 1 paragraph.
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  • From on August 21, 2004
    How about slowing it down some? Describe it like you were watching them, or maybe one of the two. Be realistic. Don't try to rush everything together for a chapter. And you might want to hold back on updating until you get more than one page. Let's see, what else... Cliffhangers are the best! So you're on the right track...um...*thinks hard* Well... I hope this helps...if anything is wrong or screwed up...sorry... I'm not really sober right now ^_~
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