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Reviews for Just the Two of Us

By : bansheepuppet
  • From ANON - Anon on November 02, 2007
    this story jumps around a lot without an explanation of how the situation started. in other words, there are holes in between the chapters and it's hard to understand.

    ASOTA
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  • From ANON - Sakata Ri Houjun on January 19, 2005
    This seems like an interesting story, except the formatting is so...off. There are whole passages missing from the ends of chapters, making them cut off which really throws off the pace of the story and leaves a lot of plot holes and gaps in between. And there was a major skip in the middle of one chapter.
    I really suggest you go through and correct these.
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  • From ANON - SC1026 on December 31, 2004
    i have much love for you writers. I don't konw if it was the problem with th aff.net data base or what but i really can't follow you story. it confuses me. you just jump from scene to scene without warning. I just can't keep up. =(
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  • From ANON - moonruins on December 21, 2004
    Thanks for posting that author's note. I went to that other Boy-Toy site and was finally able to read the rest of this story, plus a few others.
    I really love this story. It wasn't what I was expecting at all though. I knew that in the last two chapters Sesshomaru would be in it, and someone would get a favor, but from only those clues...it wasn't what I was expecting at ALL. Not to say I didn't like it though...heh heh heh.
    Actually I thought that Miroku would ask Sesshomaru to mate Kouga so that he'd always have a scent on him. Boy, oh boy, did I get a surprise. A nice surprise, but a shock none the less.
    Can't you tell how dedicated I am to reading this story. I only last reviewed like, what, two days ago? And it would have been even sooner but my computer started fucking up (no pun intended).
    Anyway, keep writing, because this is one of my favorite stories, and I'll die if you just...stop. Oh, that would be a nightmare! (Do you think I need to get a life?) As it stands, I'm begging you to continue this story, even if it's only for me!!! ^_^ I'm your number one fan, and you wouldn't leave me hanging, now would you? ...I didn't think so! ^_^
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  • From ANON - moonruins on December 19, 2004
    I really love your story, but now the chapters are messed up. I can only read a few paragraphs in the last 2 chapters (which are the ones I haven't read yet). All the other chapters are messed up but that doesn't matter to me because I've already read them. But it totally irks me that I can't read the last 2 chapters (with Sesshomaru and the favor and stuff). Maybe you could reload it again or something, that might help. PLEASE!!! This is like my favorite story and I've been dying of anticipation to know what happens!!!
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  • From ANON - YoungJae on December 01, 2004
    Um, dude, what the hell is going on? How come all of your chapters are cut into pieces? I can't really read the latest chapter since...well...I only see about half a document page's worth of writing. And then I notice that all your chapters are messed up. What's up with that?
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  • From ANON - WolfGirl on November 07, 2004
    Sesshy??? Cool that is really unexpected. Yeah you're right I already have an idea of my own. But please update soon! I cannot wait to see if what I am thinkin is true. ^_^
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  • From ANON - polarkitty on November 07, 2004
    Are you seriously stopping THERE?!?!? OMG! I have to know what you are planning to do with Sesshoumaru.....even though I do have a couple of ideas of my own.....Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 05, 2004
    I enjoyed your fic and would like to know when you post the next chappie please...keep up the good work kay!?

    Ja Ne
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 04, 2004
    You better come out with the next chappie soon! I love this fic and want to know what is going to happen between Miroku and Sesshoumaru, sooo plz be nice to MY Kouga and post that next chappie!!

    Ja
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  • From ANON - YoungJae on October 28, 2004
    This story's got potential. I haven't read many stories so far where Kouga was uke, but hey!~ Keep it going, I'm looking forward to the oncoming chapters.
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  • From ANON - LoganSaj on October 26, 2004
    I didn't have to THINK about what favor he was obviously going to ask. It is kinda obvious if oyu re-read last chapter...
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  • From ANON - Muse-chan on October 21, 2004
    Awwww... Please hurry with the next chapter! I wanna know what's gonna happen to Kouga~ And if Miroku will ever love him back~ And when they're going to have more hot, sweaty mansex.

    ...

    O.O I mean... *sheepish grin* Great story. Update soon~
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  • From ANON - artemis347 on October 13, 2004
    that was sooooo good! get miroku to understand! please! i love your fic! update pleae! it's so good!
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  • From ANON - moonruins on October 11, 2004
    Wow. I really love this pairing, but unfortunately I've only been able to find one other fic out there with them. And it was only one chapter with NO LEMON! *sniff* How sad. So I really REALLY love your story. And such a plot too. And so descriptive; I feel a little weird because I usually don't come across fics this...explicit. Is that the right word? I don't even know. lol. But it's very good. I can't wait for the next chapter. I hope it's soon, because I'm dying for more Kouga/Miroku action.
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