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Reviews for Red Snow

By : bijouxdelalune04
  • From ANON - angel of light on September 23, 2004
    yea I totaly love this story it is really awsome
    you just have to write more.
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  • From ANON - No Sugar Added on September 16, 2004
    Oh you are so very evil. This is turning out to be a good fic- write more or I'll...um...get you. :-D
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  • From inuyashagemini on September 15, 2004
    o my good what is going on. i hate been in college but look at it this way when you get the good job and the car i would be all good and some chip.
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  • From ANON - Haley on September 12, 2004
    WHAT!!!!!!!! NO YOU CANT DELETE IT!!!!!!!!!! I abloloutly love this story PPPPLLLLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEE please please please please please try to post the next chapter as soon as possible!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Kurohara on September 10, 2004
    I'm very impressed with your story. Not only is it well written, but has an interesting plot. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon!
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  • From inuyashagemini on September 10, 2004
    what happen next
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  • From ANON - darklady on September 10, 2004
    update first write song fic later! your story is just getting really interesting!
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  • From ANON - jen on September 09, 2004
    i love this story. i like the way its writien and i always like it when Sess and Rin are paired. i think they are a good couple and i cant waor tor the next chap.
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  • From ANON - Mindy on September 09, 2004
    This is a good story. I love rin and sesshomaru and look forward to chapter four.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 09, 2004
    It's still great.....I hope it won't be to long before you have another chapter up.....wanting too long will make people forget about your story....and not review.
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  • From ANON - Ü on September 09, 2004
    That was good. hope you keep going
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  • From inuyashagemini on September 04, 2004
    i want more ! give me more. you are doing a good job at this. a dame good job might i say. what happen next don't keep the good people waitting we need more. is he going to find rin............

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  • From ANON - abby on September 04, 2004
    i like your story and hope you continue to write more, i only wish the chapters where a little longer; cant wait to read your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 04, 2004
    Another great chapter....I agree with you I hate Sess/Kag fic too.......UPDATE SOON
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  • From ANON - Talis on September 02, 2004
    Wow, this is a pretty good start for a fic :D It surely has alot of potential, if you work your talent well. Just a few things that might be good to concider:
    1) Try to make your chapters longer. It might seem bothersome [not to mention extremely hard], writting long chapters, but your readers will appreciate, and you'll have alot more reviews ^__^ [ and everyone likes reviews, ne? ]
    2) Maybe a bit more description would help, no? I loved the detailed description of Sessh and Rin's surroundings in the beginning of the fic! It would be wonderul if the rest of your story was written in such a fashion.
    3) Perhaps explaining how Rin felt during the eleven years she passed without her Lord, and how she reacted to being with her own kind again? ^^

    Well, besides that, this is a great fic :D! I hope you continue it, and perhaps take a few of the things listed above in concideration. Be assured that I'll check back from time to time to check if you added new chapters :3 And I'll read them, of course -^^-

    Luvu-
    Talis
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