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By : theMaven
  • From ANON - Ash on November 25, 2004
    Wowies. O_o I sat here and nearly cried over Jaken. This is very, very well written, very descriptive. I love the use of Ah and Un's point of view, I've never seen that done before. Can't wait for the next update!
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  • From ANON - Teresa on October 24, 2004
    No there are no happy endings, but your are a wonderful writer. I was touched by the first chapter with Ah-Un. their POV was so cute. This last chapter was bittersweet. I really enjoyed this because it made me feel. Any story can can rise up that kind of emotion, to me is a good story. Keep on writing Maven.
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  • From ANON - LoganSaj on October 18, 2004
    That was a sad story... I liked it...
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  • From ANON - modra on October 18, 2004
    wow... this story is just so incredibly touching and beautiful. i almost never cry but this brought me to tears. i don't really know what else to say. just absolutely beautiful...
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  • From HimeAndi on October 18, 2004
    I am amazed and feel so moved by your work, I cant even express myself. You should take immense pridethisthis story, I only wish it was something you could publish to share with a wider audience.

    Be sure I will tell everyone I know about this story. Thank you for sharing it.
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  • From ANON - PoisonGirl on October 18, 2004
    The best compliment I can give this story is also the truest....I cried. And I never do that. Thank you.
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  • From ANON - Teresa on October 13, 2004
    This is so beautifully written. I love the way you have the dragons Ah-Un thinking. You have a way with your POV's. Very, Very Well Written. Keep up the good work. I enjoyed this.
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  • From ANON - HauntedReality on September 29, 2004
    You had to go and make me cry didn't you? It was a beautiful story. Thanks for writing it.
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  • From ANON - SP777 on September 29, 2004
    I liked this story very much, but there are 2 things I will mention...

    One, in chapter 3, it confused me when you did the flashbacks. I didn't know when it started or stopped.

    Two, also in 3, I loved how Sesshoumaru was doing a count on how many to kill and not to kill, until he was basically like, F@#% it! Kill them all! I thought that was clever.

    nuff said...
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  • From ANON - Taiki on September 29, 2004
    That was a short and very beautiful Fiction *sweps away the tears* Thank you so much ^_^ Taiki
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  • From Lease242 on September 29, 2004
    Every time I read one of your stories, I end staring at the computer screen in awe and clutching a wad of kleenex. lol I've read this start to finish 3 times now (had to print it out). I absolutely love your insight reagrding youkai, you seem to have a gift of bringing Sessh's character to life.
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  • From ANON - Sutlesarcasm on September 29, 2004
    You did a wonderful job with this fic. I can't imagine anyone doing a better job than this. Somehow, it just feels r. D. Don't stop writing, you have a unique and fresh way of telling Sesshoumaur and Rin's story. It made me feel good all over.
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  • From ANON - stalker of dreamz on September 26, 2004
    Well I read you on ff.net and now here, and I swear i love your fanfictions. This was so good, and the ending made me cry (well not CRY CRY but i had tears in my eyes) I luv Sess/Rin stories, and of course i luv when u write them. Keep up the good Work ^.~
    ~~>Stalker of Dreamz
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  • From ANON - Patricia on September 26, 2004
    That took a lot of love to write. It reminds me of the times when my husband was away. Now once again he is gone to Iraq.
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  • From ANON - KittyYang on September 26, 2004
    I absoloutly loved that chapter. At the end i cried a little.
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