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Reviews for The Girl

By : theMaven
  • From ANON - GreaterBeast_Xellas on September 26, 2004
    This was breathtaking, I am still crying from it.
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  • From ANON - Ladyhawk on September 26, 2004
    Simply put, that was beautiful. Thank you. A most enjoyable read. *
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 26, 2004
    As always your writing was beautiful...You are so my inspiration in trying to write better......I can't wait until your next story......and as always I'm getting my good cry on...your story constantly get me emtional.......KEEP UP THE GOOD JOB
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  • From ANON - Shadiyaray on September 25, 2004
    This is the most beautiful and Heart wrenching story that I have ever read.
    I am shedding tears now as I type this.
    This was so emotional. I can't stop crying.
    God this story was sad yet happy yet sad.
    I can't stop crying.
    You did not disappoint.
    Did I mention that I am still crying over here?
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  • From ANON - T on September 25, 2004
    This story hadbawlbawling. are are one of my favorite authors of fanficton and I always look forward to your Sess/Rin fics. Please keep writing!!
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  • From ANON - TAJE on September 22, 2004
    This the most beautifully written story using the POV of the dragons Ah & UN. Oh! Oh! Oh! I am so looking forward to the rest of the story. Thanks for the joy of reading.
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  • From ANON - S*© , on September 10, 2004
    For some reason, I'd seen this story listed and couldn't remember if I read it or not....then realized I didn't.

    But I like this, as a matter of fact, I have always liked 'POV' stories as long as it's done well and the writer tries to do a different spin to the story.

    Can't wait to see what Sesshoumaru's POV is...oh, and I liked the first part with Ah-Un. The way you made folks think Rin was still a 'young girl', where do you get your ideas from?

    nuff' said.
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  • From ANON - Love Hime on September 09, 2004
    Dear God, that first chapter was long-winded. I didn't even get halfway through it before skipping to the next. Hint: don't base entire chapters around exposition and dialogue. Writing needs a good balance of dialogue and prose, specifically action in the prose, to keep the story moving. Happily, the second chapter was well-written with both prose and dialogue and actually went somewhere.

    Your writing is far superior to that of the majority of "authors" on this site and you show clear talent and potential. Your skills just need some honing, I think. Practice makes perfect, so continue writing.
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  • From ANON - Tom on September 09, 2004
    Hello Maven. Even though Sango is infertile she would have allowed Miroku to take Koharu as a second wife so Children could be had, it just the way things were done back then.
    Semper Fi.
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  • From ANON - AzureHart on September 09, 2004
    Very well written. I hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - A.J. on September 09, 2004
    This is a great story. Very heart felt and sincere. I really like how you have the slow progression of homahomaru and Rin's relationship instead of having him practically jump her when she comes of age like most other stories. Please update soon and keep up the great work!!
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  • From ANON - Persephone of Abydos on September 08, 2004
    You do Ah-Un and Rin point of views really really well. I can't wait for the Sesshoumaru point of view! ^-^
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  • From ANON - New Fan on September 08, 2004
    Poor Rin. She love her lord but apparently the feelings are not the same. Will Kagome and Sango's myth be proven truthful or
    just what it is "a myth". I hope there will be a happy ending for Rin becasue of the lost of Jaken and even Kohaku. She had
    a chance with Kohaku and she gave that up. Great chapter. Update soon. ^_^
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  • From ANON - animegirl007 on September 08, 2004
    Another great chapter.....I really like the part about Jaken bragging about his many women....that was funny...and Sango was really mean in this fic...I never thought of Sango being against Rin and Sesshomaru....I can't wait to read your last chapter.....
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  • From ANON - Mischief on September 06, 2004
    Cool....you're writing another one! I always love all your stories. Please update soon!!
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