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Reviews for The Girl

By : theMaven
  • From Starryice on July 12, 2019

    Another WONDERFUL story!!


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  • From midnightsweet on August 02, 2007
    not sure how i feel about this story, but it was very nice and sweet.
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  • From akuMau on March 03, 2007
    damn you!!!

    you made me cry.

    this had to be the most bittersweet rin/sess story i've ever read. if not, then it is the closest. as i'm typing, tears are literally falling from my eyes. grr...

    i can't form the words to properly pay tribute to this story. just know that your insight/input into the characters made this all worthwhile. Also, the fact that you put that insert at the end of the story...it just drove the story home.

    ok, i'm going to finish crying and go eat a pint of ice cream now.

    uber freakin' kudos!!!

    AK
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  • From ANON - kira on November 21, 2005
    WOW! Someone ahd recommended your fic to me & I'm so glad they did! It's sooo sad, but it's awesome!!
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  • From ANON - Joanna on November 05, 2005
    That was just beautiful! A well-rounded and realistic portrayal of the characters - thoroughly believable. You made a difficult-to-make-believable pairing quite real in this story, and it kept me riveted. Thanks for that! ^_^
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  • From ANON - Mmoirai on October 03, 2005
    I loved your story! Your writing is almost flawless, your characerizations are brilliant, and your story telling abilities are superb! I enjoyed every word! Thanks!
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  • From ANON - OX-CAB on July 30, 2005
    once again another great story^_^
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  • From ANON - Connie on June 20, 2005
    This has to be one of the best you've writen--though I've dearly loved each and every one of your stories! You greatly deserve each and every honor bestowed--a magnificant story-teller, that is what you are! You are the only person, and I do mean the ONLY one, who has managed to capture Sesshy's personality to an absolute tee! It is so real, the way you portray them and their situations--I can literally "see" it all--even down to the way our beloved "Fluffy" would react, or rather not react, and the way beautiful Rin would behave--so perfect!! I haven't cried so much, felt so much sweet heartach, or been so captivate by a Rin/Sess story since I started reading all the one's you've written! Thank you, thank you from the very bottom of my little black heart for such a wonderful masterpiece! And I dearly hope you'll be writting more of this pairing--if you do, I'll be waiting with anticipations galor! All the best...

    Connie
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  • From ANON - Alesyira on June 17, 2005
    What a sad ending.

    Great work. :) It's always cool to sit down with one of your fics, especially when it happens to be one I haven't had the pleasure of reading yet.
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  • From ANON - Caitriona on April 13, 2005
    man.....what a fic. I don't think that anything has made me cry like this in a long time. There is so much that I want to say about this fic that it is all running together in my head and won't run out my fingers to express what I feel. Damn good. I don't think I could ever read it again though. Knowing the sadness, love, longing, family, the everything that you feel by the end of it . . . I don't think I will read it again.


    Caitriona
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  • From Elsewhere on April 05, 2005
    This is an absolutely fantastic story...you really did a great job handling the matter of mortality, and I loved the three different perspectives on the goings-on...Ah-un's section was particularly humorous. Thanks for yet another fabulous fic. :)
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  • From ANON - Laura on March 25, 2005
    Wow! This story is absolutely amazing. I have never read a story with that much work! It was great to read a story such as this one. I usually write and see Sess/Rin stories that deal with a lot of OOC but this one seemed to be right on the money. You konw? Well, great job on this.
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  • From ANON - Gittelbug on March 04, 2005
    OMG that was soo good and cute and sad. I liked the ending quote it fits in nicely.
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  • From ColShaLin on February 08, 2005
    What a beautiful, well written love story. I was so impressed with the weaving in and out of the events. Wonderful, I so enjoy your work! I am slowly reading my way through all of it. Thanks so much for sharing.
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  • From ANON - Wolf Gothicka {2 Lazy 2 Sign-in} on January 24, 2005
    (sniffles.) SAD!!!! (Sniff) very good, I have never read a story from Ah-Un's POV before. Very nice.
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