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Reviews for Paradox

By : Somnambulicious
  • From ANON - Anon on May 21, 2005
    You got really lazy during chapter 12. I would revise it if I were you.
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  • From ANON - Diane on May 21, 2005
    I really like this although there are a couple of goofs in chapter 1, Kurama's hair is flaming red not black & the correct spelling of the orange haired guy's name is Kuwabara not Kurabara. Hope this helps.
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  • From ANON - Princess on May 10, 2005
    Please update soon! I can't wait for Kagome to tell Hiei about her deal with Sesshoumaru!
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  • From ANON - Princess on May 10, 2005
    OMG!!! THIS just keeps getting better and better!!!
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  • From ANON - Princess on May 10, 2005
    WOW!!! VERY IMPRESSIVE START!!!
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  • From ANON - Elementalchild on March 01, 2005
    This is a great story but you have cut so much out why did you and don't say you haven't ive read most of it once then you updated and now ot os diffrent Oh! well update soon please
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  • From ANON - Rose Fury on January 17, 2005
    I'm actually so easily pleased I can't find anything wrong with your story. But I do know a good story when I read it. Also, I think I'v actually seen Kagome act a bit like that before. But, what do I know. Well anyway what I do know is that this story is very good. If this is a rough draft then I can't wait to see the revised version.
    Ja ne
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  • From ANON - Richelle on January 16, 2005
    PLEASE update!!! I love your story!!!
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on January 09, 2005
    Honostly i didnt really find anything that i didnt like i mean spelling and stuff is normal cuz everyone has a little bit of spelling problems in their stories its like inevitable!lol but i honostly love your story and it was the first one i added to my rec. reading list! i absolutly cant live without ur story it is just amazing!!! Really i love it and hope you update it soon!!-sesshysgirl08-
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on December 28, 2004
    Wah! You mean I'm going to have to do this all over again? Are you trying to kill me woman? It's bad enough you FAILED to keep your promise of updating faster, *glare* but now you're planning on rewriting and updating the whole story! *falls off chair in a slump* Don't *sniff* I *tear* give *hitched breath* you love? Faithfully? Okay, I'm better, at least give us fair warning as to when you do the rewrite and updates, pwetty pweese!

    On to the other comments! You're right about this story lacking something. I'm not quite sure what it is, but you seem like you've lost your edge when it comes to dealing with the character interactions. You know the thing that says "I'm not just another crossover fic" That came out badly didn't it? No, I don't mean you've stereotyped the characters, but that oomph is slowing down.... almost like you're not as interested in the story. I have to re-read the damned thing and make sure I'm not blowing smoke, but that is how it feels to me. Not to mention my original crusade of "MORE SESSHOMARU!!!" Sorry, couldn't resist.

    Hoping your holidays kick ass!
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  • From ANON - Jasmine Fields on December 12, 2004
    Yay - you're back!!!! Okay, disturbances in the plot....hmmm, I like it so far, so I'm not so sure - but if you do make alot more changes, how will we know what's important, what you've inserted and the sort if we've loyally *bats eyelashes innocently* read so far? -Jazz-
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  • From ANON - Los on December 12, 2004
    Hey Som,
    Just wanted to tell you great story, and I that I can't wait untill the next chapters are up. Also I've been following your story for about 2 months now and I think it is one of the best crossover fan-fics I have ever read. It's too bad there are hardly any Kagome/Heie parings because they are hot!!!!! Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - Jaded Neko on December 12, 2004
    Ah! A ghost! Oh wait you’re alive! I knew you were, *Discreetly takes down memorial*
    Well I’m so happy to actually read something from you that the length of this one can be ignored (for now). But it’s unforgivable how you ended the chapter like that! Haven’t we suffered in wait long enough? Haven’t we been patient? Haven’t they gotten the clue to stop making Land Before Time movies yet?

    ~The jaded one
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  • From ANON - Loki on December 11, 2004
    I just read my reveiw and there are soo many spelling, ect. mess ups it jus embaressing. My only excuse is I was typing fast so I'm really sorry! In case you couldn't make heads or tails of it all I was sayng is thank to the author, that I love this story ,and that I can't wait to see what will happen next. So if you haven't read this story yet I recomend you do, because its truely a great story. So again I'm sorry for my last reveiw, and to the author I would just like to say.....PLZ plz plz update soon!!!!! [signed] Loki
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  • From ANON - kuramasbluegurl on December 11, 2004
    w000000t
    you updated!! I can assure you that it was most certainly worth the wait.
    cant wait till the next chapter
    have a good one
    take care +
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