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By : Somnambulicious
  • From ANON - Loki on December 11, 2004
    What! Nooo ho ho ho! You can't stop there[ch.awakening]I've waited so long,and it was just getting good.I must have more No I will have more!!!!(Suddenly slaps self in the face) Sorry about that now where was I going to start? Oh yes, now I remember. First off I just want to say thankyou so much for taking the time out of what I am sure is a busy life to share your wonderful stories with everyone, and to tell you how much I enjoy okay lets be honest love your stories check almost every day to see if you've updated.It really kinda gives me something else to look forward to. I mean don't worry I'm not obsessed or anything and I do have a life. I guess when youve been faced with and still are faced with such hard reality you just have to find away to escape, and since I refuse to drink or do drugs reading is my escape. I'm addicted to reading and I could be happier having it be that way . Reading gives me hope..so in away you give me hope so I just wanted to say thank you. (looks around)I any any of my friend this they ethier faint from shock, check my temp. to see if I was sick, or fall to the floor laughing. So anyways I loved your lemon god that was hot and just so you know it's driving me crazy not knowing whats going to happen next. Sssoo PLLZz up date soon ok thats all I wanted to say( I still can't believe wrote this [even though I do mean every word].)So I going to shut up now (Finaly) and say good bye.....BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! [signed] Loki
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  • From ANON - Asilin on December 11, 2004
    interesting chapter! it was good. will we get more of an explanation for the jagan next time? i hope so. well, update as soon as you can!
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  • From ANON - vashta on December 11, 2004
    I am glad to finally get an update. I really like your story, but I don't like the whole Sessho deal. I suppose that is the idea though? I am confident that you will get her out of it and let her keep Hiei!? How long are you thinking this will be? Will the lady bandit be back or is she dead? I couldn't quite get that, I think she is dead but also she seemed to just dissappear, I may have just missed it? Great story, first Kag Hiei fic that I have liked.
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  • From ANON - Richelle on December 10, 2004
    PLEASE please please keep writing!!!!!! I absolutly LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Luna the lunatic on December 08, 2004
    I want an update! I want an update! I want an Update!
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  • From ANON - stacey on November 08, 2004
    I LOVED IT< it was so grippin i couldn't stop readin it

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  • From ANON - Mija on November 08, 2004
    omg I finally caught up and am now panting with frustration...damn thas gas good, great lemon and all those wonderfull chapters leading up to it were awsome, totally loved the chaps and sooooooo cant wait for more, hope its soon, just finished and Im already going through withdrawherehere...lol...great work Somn please update soon...*this coming from the girl who hasnt updated in forever* ...m...much huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 30, 2004
    so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suse? se? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 30, 2004
    so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suspense? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 30, 2004
    so will Kagome's promise be revealed to the whole gang before it happens? or will that just be another way of suspense? neway...good chapter! update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Jaded Neko on October 30, 2004
    Yey now I can die happy. Wait, no that makes me sound even more insane than being crazy. And besides I can't die just yet I have so many crazy things to do that scares people in elevators to just die. Also I want to read how everyone reacts when they find out about Kagome's trade-off with Fluffy.

    Tell me am I weird for thinking that the Jagan is cute? Loved the interaction between Kagome and the eye. Acutally I loved it all! Even with poor 'Gome getting hit on by another woman, for some reason I couldn't stop laughing at that.

    ~JN

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  • From ANON - Jessjess on October 30, 2004
    Dear Sommy,

    I'm still suspicious until the story is done, however you are provisionally forgiven for the moment. Yes, the lemon was chocked fully of ny gny goodness, but the most important thing in my mind is the thing that Hiei picked up. Others can drool about the lemons, I want to know about the plot!!
    Will the Jagan reveal all? What is the secret hidden in Kagome's mi Are Are they two separate things? What the hell is that black thing? These are the question you have yet to answer. Not to mention, poor little Souta under the constant hammering of Naraku's evil influence, and why the Red Sox win the series. Oh wait, that was part of my Questions to God email, ignore that last part. I look forward to the others being answered.

    Your loyal Reviewer,
    and sometimes nagging influence,
    Jessjess
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  • From ANON - vashta on October 29, 2004
    I really you your story, but you have made me anxious. She absolutely has to stay with Hiei, she can't go with Sess. Please, don't make her.
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  • From ANON - Asilin on October 28, 2004
    wow...good story! but bad cliffie...evil evil evil place to end! *growls* you've got to update soon...please!
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  • From akumu on October 24, 2004
    Humm, I must say I find your story most intriguing and fun to read(quite a bit to try and all get in one sitting though ^_^;;). I will admit a bit of displeasure at it not being a Kurama pairing, but as you said, alternate pairings are fun so I just went with your flow anyways. A Hiei/Kagome fic always seems to make more sense for some reason though in a YuYu/Inu cross over with alt. pairings. I like your character portrials of those from both of my favorite animes, and want to congradulate you on them all seeming to be lacking OOCness. Your internal Youko/Kurama arguments are very fun to follow, and an enjoyable twist on the usual. I fully agree with you on Kurama hardly being such a price charming all of the time and the internal conflict seems very befitting. I do hope that you write another fun fiction with him as such in it. I will admit I would see Youko as likely a bit more mature then he is introduced(hehe, though that is a fun mental image that you gave of Youko practically bouncing around while singing "highschool Girls, highschool Girls") but one might also wager that being stuck in Kurama so long that he has grown a bit more fun loving in an antsy, immature kind of way. Anyways, in short, I love your fic, can't wait for your next update, plan to check out your other fic on and and your site as well XP.

    ps:
    Miroku was still half-asleep as he prepared breakfast, spilling the first pot of tea into the fire and nearly sending his robes up in flames on two occasions.

    I thought Miroku was no longer in his robes but rather Kakki pants, a shirt and a hoodi o.O??
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