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Reviews for Paradox

By : Somnambulicious
  • From ANON - Angora on October 24, 2004
    This story is awesome. I absolutly adore and can't help checking daily for updates, even though I know you need time to write the chapters. The charcters feels IC (and Hiei is as hot as ever ;-) ). The plot line is exciting and you certainly keeps me guessing about whats next. "Jagan" Hmm, does this mean we're going to that entity's interest in our heroine?

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  • From ANON - Jaded Neko on October 24, 2004
    Ah, I'm in great mourning. The Yankees got their asses handed to them on a silver plater. *Sob* Not that I really care but I was forced into being their fan when I lived about eight blocks from the stadium (Saying otherwise is suicide). But the good news is that you've updated so that eases some of the pain...

    Everyone's protective of Kagome and a little uncertainty, if I didn't know how that feels I would say its cute. Damn stupid human insecurities. But at least we're sure or at least hope we are sure where their relationship is heading.
    Now Sessy keeping her as a pet...ugh the first thing that pops into mind is Kagome in a Princess Leia situation (yes I've seen Star Wars, repeatedly, blame my mother!). But now I'm dieing to know how the others will react to it once they find.
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  • From ANON - JuniperJazz on October 23, 2004
    Yaaaah! Love your twisted, demented plot...that just thickened! (Might just have to go back through it to make sure I got all the details)
    Anyhoo, waiting on the update was sooo worth it! :-) Can't wait to see what you have in store next time!
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  • From ANON - Deviant on October 23, 2004
    .... *eyebrow.... twitching* You are an evil, eeeevil person, and I can just see you rubbing your hands together and wickedly plotting to yourself now that I was silly enough to give you a peek into the mind of my muses. XP

    *giggling* Loved the chapter though... Bishis being evil and snarly, what's not to swoon over? Well done and well written, but damn you for that title teaser at the end! *shaking fist in frustration*

    (I'd say more, but it's ra lat late and I'm about to accidentally mistake the keyboard for a pillow. LOL! Talk to ya soon though!)
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on October 23, 2004
    Hmmm, uber reviewer am I? I like it. BTW I have decided to name you the Writer Terrorist, holding innocent chapters in your head even though they scream to get out. You shall hold that title until you start writing faster.

    Oooh, I can hardly wait to see what our little Hiei will have to say about this new development. I'm sure he will be appropriately scathing in his "gratitude" and dig himself into a nice hole. Hm, Yuusuke teaching Hiei how to grovel. The mind boggles. Sesshomaru getting his ass handed to him for his impertenence. Maybe the title for that chapter should be 'Everyone Yells At Kagome," ne? It's what's going to happen.

    HOPE to see more SOON.
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  • From ANON - Richelle on October 22, 2004
    Oh PLEASE keep writing!!!!! I LOVE your story!!!! I can't wait to read what happens in the next chapter!!!!! :)
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on October 20, 2004
    I really like this story alotn yon you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - JuniperJazz on October 15, 2004
    ...and now we know why the Neko is Jaded....*reads JN's review* lol.
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  • From ANON - JuniperJazz on October 15, 2004
    Miss you!!! When are ret returning to us with another chapter? I guess life must be happening alot...either that your brilliant mind has gotten so far ahead of yourself, that your typing fingers can't keep up! Can't wait for the next one to come along! *sparkles in eyes*
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on October 12, 2004
    Ah, now I see, you call it research when in actuality you want to make us suffer by waiting so long to put chapters out! I'm on to your evil scheme. Dangle some juicy citrus and walk away? Naughty! Speaking of which "Hiei's idea of a first ." t." that was so perfect! *snicker* I loved that line!
    *Sobs!* I don't even get a mention! Are my reviews that bad? Or are you taking artistic license with my name? I will be checking the other reviews to find out. And if you are whats wrong with my review name? I thought it was cute.
    BTW popular consesus seems to be in futuristic fics that Rin (being human and all) grows up and Sesshomaru keeps an eye on the family line. Unless, of course, you buy into that 'demon bites the human mate and turns them into half demon' theory. So, while I could see them just torturing the the hell out of the sniveling weasel Jaken I just don't see Rin in this ficcie. Sorry!
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  • From ANON - Jaded Neko on October 11, 2004
    Stupid site! First it wouldn't let me read anything then when I review it doesn't come up then when I can it doesn't post it!
    *Pours 7up Plus on internet* TAKE THAT YOU DEMENTED BASTARDS!!

    Anyhow OW I think I got some lemon juice in my eyes. At least I hope it's lemon juice.
    Awesome as always.
    Man the maki world needs some regulations or something. How can they just allow underaged boys into a bar?! Everyone is sick, just plain sucking fick.
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  • From ANON - Luna The Lunatic on October 11, 2004
    Gooooooooood fanfic. best yuyu inu crossover i read....(Why is it alwasy Kagome and Hiei love parings? all well) Its not done pleases finsh i wish to know how it ends. Funny.....Anyways I hope the Evil rondam bunny people haven't cut off your hands so you can't type anymore. To the point I love your fic....FINISH IT!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on October 09, 2004
    OMG THIS IS SOOOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!!!!! I love this story it is def. a favorite. I mean how couou nou not like this story its just amazing and sooo unpredictable. you come up with the best ideas and i cant wait to read the next chappie and see what Naraku has up his sleeve. And thank you sooo much for the shoutout. THIS IS AWSOME PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - JuniperJazz on October 09, 2004
    Oooooh, the butterflies in my stomach!!! That was enough citrus for awhile...BUT! I expect that you shall not delay your loving readers too long with such a pairing on the line! Although, sadly, the more I read, the more I think that nothing will happen to Kagome without a 'counsel meeting' between all of her protectors...Miroku included. *sigh* (Actually, I can see him being among the most ferocious, since he's human and has a friendship love towards her, and the possibility exists that hsi input might have the most value - but that's just me...or is it?) I've been checking the last 3 days thinking that maybe you gave up on this fic! (I was going to cry, if that happened) *grins* BUT, you came through, and guiltily, I repent of my distrust! *sniffle* Never again...shall I doubt!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next installment! You're the bomb!
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on September 29, 2004
    OMG YOUR SOOOOO MEAN YOU CANT LEAV THE THERE!!!!!!!!! ehem sry bout that.This chappie was sooooo amazing!!!! WOW!!! I love it really i do. So please oh please oh please update soon and please let me know when your next chappie is up ok. Thanx soooo much!!!!
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