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From ANON - JuniperJazz on September 29, 2004
Actually, I am kinda glad that Hiei and Kagome were interrupted. I love a little rivalry between 'protectors' every once in awhile. What I think would *really* be fun is Kurama being interrupted by Kouga...hehehe and Kouga's chastisement interrupted by Inu because Inu's reconsidering his 'love' for Kags. *snickers* But then *sigh* it would be my fic, not yours.....Besides, Hiei and Kags need a little more emotional bonding before their 'physical bond' is worthwhilehat hat and Youko is prolly up to no good, so we need to find out what HE's up to.....Can't wait for the next one!!!!
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From ANON - Nefra on September 29, 2004
OMG! This story is, simply put, amazing. I do apologize for not reviewing sooner than this. The speed at which the relationship is moving between Kagome and Hiei is perfect. I just wish that they would stop getting interrupted. The brawl between Sango, Kagome and Inu Yasha was absolutely priceless! The timing for it was perfect, it seemed to relieve the otherwise tense atomosphere. Your spelling and grammar are wonderful, I have yet to see any mistakes. But, being the hentai I am, I hope to see that lemon between Hiei and Kagome very soon. Keep up the wonderful work. Hope to see an update very soon.

Ja ne!

Nefra
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From ANON - anne on September 27, 2004
love the story
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From ANON - JuniperJazz on September 27, 2004
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great cha. C. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to the Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wait for your next Chapter!
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From ANON - JuniperJazz on September 27, 2004
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great chapter. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to Feu Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wait for your next Chapter!
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From ANON - JuniperJazz on September 27, 2004
Hope your kids get spoiled...rotten...! Great chapter. Can't say it enough, I don't think. At least Kouga's okay - and has 'moved on'...although, it would kinda really mess things up if Kags went back to the Feudal era and told him about her being...quite the modern woman. (Think of the chaos that would ensue ;-) Oh yeah, I love that Hiei is firing things up. He really didn' t give Inu much a chance to protest his intensions. Gotta love that about Hiei...oh yeah, and Inu. Hey! What if Inu rethinks his decision in the modern era??? What do you think would happen - besides throw off your entire storyline? :-) Can't wair yor your next Chapter!
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From ANON - Anon on September 26, 2004
oh i really hope that you update soon. i don't usually update until the last chapter so i have to say that this is the best xover that i ever read. although you should add more kurama (HE IS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOTTTTT) OK THEN BYE BYE
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From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on September 26, 2004
WOW!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOO GOOD!!!!! I loved it it was amazing. You r just amazing. I really cant wait to read your next chapter and please let me know when it will be up ok. O and the reason i havent been updating is cause i just got my internet beack 2day so i didnt want you to think i forgot about this amazing story. So please update soon and i love this story it is the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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From ANON - Jaded Neko on September 25, 2004
Alright I guess I can put you on probation, you only get Kouga on the weekends.
As ys yys you don't disappoint, humorous and serious, nicely mixed together! :-D I even got a lesson in birth control! Super plus!

But now I have questions: How is it that Kanna is still young but Kagura's old? What's Kagome's big backup plan? Why is Nuraku such a voyaure (I know I spelled that wrong.)? Will Souta be broken? How will he ever pinky promise again? Why do fools fall in love? Where does the sidewalk end? What came first the chicken or the egg? When do the limes stop and the lemons come on? Why did I read this instead of study for my exam?
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From KuramasBlueGurl on September 25, 2004
hey great chapter!!!
(sorry i know i kind of say the samethings over and over, its just i dont think i have the right...to like...you know, give advice about writing, Cause the gods know how bad i am at writing!! ~_^) Though i do have a guestion, is kirara still in the story???? just wondering
well anyway i also like trying to think up of some type of questions to ask you, cause i like it when arthurs response back to their readers, and you do. Plus i like how you have a lil paragraph for your response and its all by itself for you to read, lol well its obvious that im rambling so ill stop here!
thank you for the great read
cya
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From ANON - Jessjess on September 24, 2004
Sure, friends are easier to deal with than family anyway. Hehehehe, Inu gets a wake-up call! I love it. Nice resolution on the Kouga thing, although it will be funny to see Hiei deal with that one. I still feel so bad for Souta. Um....thinking, give me a minute....trying to think of something I haven't said in a previous review. Repetition is boring. Oh yeah, Yuuske dealing with birth control pills! *snickers* Would have loved to see you write about that little gem, and I was picturing a bigger change to Sango and Kagome for some reason. Let's not forget the prod to find out exactly what Hiei's jagan wants with Kagome, other than the obvious that is, *rolls eyes* duh! I seem to get hints that there is more to that situation than you have been telling. Or it could just be my subconscious telling me tI waI want your story to grow to epic proportions in order to enhance my day. Okay, I ramble sometimes, doesn't everybody? One more thing and I'll let you *GOD I HATE STUPID POP-UPS THAT MANAGE TO GO AROUND THE POP-UP CONTROL!!!* Stupid useless software. Forgot the previous line of thought, oh well, I'll remeber it later. Bye-bye!
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From ANON - Elise(Demon Child) on September 24, 2004
I absolutely love your story. The depth of it and the detail. Just amazing. It also helps I'm a rather rabid Kagome/Hiei fan, but that's besides the point. I think I'll just get down to it. Usually when I get to the part of where the author needs to write more I deal out a "threat". So here ya go. If you don't get this amazing production finished I will be forced to feed you 56lbs of lime green jello! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! ;-) .......ahem......anyway keep writing!!

DC
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From KuramasBlueGurl on September 24, 2004
best chapter so far ~_^
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From ANON - Diane on September 23, 2004
I'm really enjoying this so far & can't wait for the next chapter. I do have 1 comment/correction, in 1 chapter you give an example of Oni [at the top] & it's a bit off Oni = ogre & in Japan there are a wide range of oni varieties, Yura of the Hair is an oni & so is the giant blue guy Sesshoumaru rides on.
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From ANON - Jaded Neko on September 23, 2004
Aaah! You hurt Kouga, no you didn't hurt him, you had his frickin' leg chopped off by a bird!! A BIRD! (Actually a Harpy, but damn American dubbing) That's unhumain! That's it, you can't play with Kouga anymore I'm taking him home with me!
^ That ranting up there is the resultchugchugging Nyquil for two days.
Anyhow absolutely love the emotional roller coaster of it all. One moment I'm happy at the interaction then the next I'm depressed as hell only to get happy again.

Oh and the ofudas made of post-it-notes, brilliant! Sadly I've been going around my friends sticking bright pink post-its on their foreheads with little scribbles on it.
I blame you! And television!
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