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By : Somnambulicious
  • From ANON - Spectra on September 13, 2004
    Oh, I just love Paradox to the point in which I have officially declared this my favorite fanfic! Yeah! I particularly like the way you have the plot set up so that you can see the story going either the Kagome/Hiei or Kagome/Kurama way. I'm also glad you got Inuyasha out of the way in the begining cause that would have been confusing if you hadn't stated that they weren't going to become more than just friends. Rock On! Keep updating :)
    -Spectra
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  • From ANON - LadyOfTheWest on September 13, 2004
    Wow three updates and no comment from me, I am soo sorry! Anyways I about died when I read the Sesshy part! Woohoo! Kurama, Sesshy and Hiei all in one fic! It's a fanfic girl's dream come true! You are really flying with these updates and I am so happy for you. Just wanted to comment on the IC/OOC of your story. I thought Kagome was perfectly fluffy and I dont think you strayed too far for mean old Hiei. Overall you have done absolutely wonderful with keeping them as close to realposspossible. In this last update, the part that really struck me was Hiei interrupting Youko/Kurama when he was making a move on Kagome. Now whether or not Hiei would actually be interested in her or not is moot but if he was that would SO be something he would do. I giggled out loud when I read that. Anyways, now I am rambling so keep the updates coming!
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on September 13, 2004
    You know the one thing I absolutely love about YYH is the fact that not a single one of them is a perfect person. In fact, I think that's what makes them the perfect team. Kudos to the one who figured it out in writing! Sneaky kitsune are so much more fun to play with.
    You know the worst thing about that painting? Tinkerbell is a foot and a half tall! *shudders* I don't have anything against Disney, but she's just so cliche!
    I was all excited when I read about the dark, shadowy being in the Makai, until I found out it was NARAKU! I don't think you're trying to work Sesshomaru in here very hard. *sighs* I'll forgive you because it's an awesome story, but geez! To clarify; I am not the world's biggest Sesshomaru fan, but he's just so fun to see the characters interact with. He get's all huffy, they get all puffy and things just explode.
    You know, it's awfully hot here in Tucson, so I'll have to cut this off. Too much sweat, my fingers are slipping off the keyboard. Gack! 103!
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on September 13, 2004
    OMG YOUR SOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY , ITS AMAZING!!!!!!he he sorry bout that. neway please update soon because i love everthing about this story and the pairings are the greatest, i love kag/hiei theyre the best ever. that and sess/kag. i love it and please o please review again soon. oo and if you would, could you e-mail me again when you do update?? you dont have to tho. neway GREAT STROY ITS AWSOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - baa baa black sheep on September 13, 2004
    your fan fic is grrrrrreat! i've read alot of fan fics with kagome/kurama pairings i love it i'm addicted to it and yes i've read the fan fic by any other name its fantastic far by one of the best kur/kag fics.you have a right to make a hiei/kagome pairing there are very few out there and extremely few good ones by the fact.
    this and another fanfic called 'a new mission' by mija on this website are the few hiei/kag fics that are actually good.
    and another thing your right about kurama being too much of a goody two shoes he is a gentle men but still he IS a fox demon after all ,a man,and a virgin he has needs too.he being a theif and a killer can't be a fuojo ojo type of guy sure he's nice and polite but every guy has there DARK SIDE.i think it would be a good twist to let kurama have a slight interest in kagome it would be unimaginable if he did not and youko being the /i saw her first so shes my picking/ type it wouldn't be a fun yuyu/inuyasha crossover.
    hey foxes need love too.
    it would be interesting if kurama gave kags a kiss and see the reaction hiei would have or if she had a one night stand with kurama(okay where didt cot come from ok pervert mode switched on) i'm looking forward to your upcoming fic.update soon!


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  • From ANON - Pallas on September 13, 2004
    I feel almost ashamed for not reviewing you sooner, as I'ven een enhoying this since the beginning. To say I love your story is an understatement. I love the plot and the fact that you keep me guessing about many things, for example who's going to end up with who.

    I have many questions too: for example, is Sesshoumaru still alive in the future (living in the Demon realm)? (I do hope he'll make an appearance!!) Will Kouga travel along to the future with the others? (But he does has a clan to look after, hmm)

    The pace in which you update is marvelous too!! I hope you keep writing for a looooong time!!

    Pallas
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on September 13, 2004
    Very nice. I liked the confrontation. The multiple sittings were a nice touch. I'll be curious to see how Naraku's appearance is handled. Will we perhaps see Fluffy-sama make an appearance?
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on September 13, 2004
    AHAHAHA! I almost fell off of my chair when I saw the Rocky reference! That was great, give the hubby a congrats from me. I guess I can just count out the Sesshomaru meeting unless you plan to do it when they go back for the others, won't I. *sighs* I was so looking forward to that. I'll forgive the whole Kag/Hiei thing since I did say I wouldn't care either way didn't I. Besides *winks* he's a sexy little bishe isn't he? All bishe need love! That could be the name of your site, which sounds interesting BTW. Know the feeling with the kids. Got two little monkeys of my own, they love walls too. *Big sigh* I should never have painted that mural for my Mother-in-Law in front of them. *walks away grumbling "Stupid Tinkerbell and Bambi....* See ya soon!
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 13, 2004
    omg that was a totally awsome chapter, you werent kidding when you said all hell broke loose, I would of loved to have seen that, and Kagome was right, why did Hiei pull his Katana on Inu, knowing Inu was only protecting Kagome??? well DUH Mija...because Kurama is his friend and he knows that Inu has a temper, what he can do with that sword, and that he would kill for Kagome...ok just answered my own question. yes I do so love to talk to myself..*I say sarcasticly* sigh anyhow great great chapter I cant wait for more, I have to have more, I cant wiat to see what happenes and oooh its soo cute that Hiei is a bit jealous and protective of Kagome..hehe...and ty ty ty sooo much for emailing me about your update ty ty ty...can you do it again??? would much appreciate it...again ty great chapter keep up the great work, and I dont know if youve read any of her work but Scottishfae writes crossovers between IY and YU YU, I love her writing..cant wait for more much huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on September 12, 2004
    oo ya my e-mail is bloomlover_2010@hotmail.com
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  • From ANON - sesshysgirl08 on September 12, 2004
    OMG!!!! WOW!!!!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE MORE PLEASE!!!!!please o please o please write more soon. this is soooooooo goood!!!!!!!O please write more soon and if you would could you e-mail me when you wrote more???thanx soooo much. O please write more soon. :)












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  • From ANON - Belle on September 12, 2004
    "Rocky"
    "Brad"
    "Janet"
    "Doctor Scott"
    "Brad"

    Wonderful scene, I'm pleased add added that at the end ^_^ Keep up the good work, I would add this to my list but AFF no longer seems to want to let me on under my name.
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  • From ANON - Killer Dragon on September 12, 2004
    Great story!
    E-mail me when you update!
    And... well... Update!!!
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  • From ANON - DarkChimera on September 12, 2004
    I really like this fanfic! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - kk on September 12, 2004
    I can'll yll you how much I'm enjoying this right now. Anywho, you said you want some ff links? This goes to a Kag/Kur site that has quite a few links: http://devoted.to/kurama_kagome
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