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Reviews for Paradox

By : Somnambulicious
  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on September 12, 2004
    you are so awesome, you update like all the time
    i wish everyone did that.
    anyway very good chapter, aww Hiei likes someone how cute
    well have a good one thanks for the chapter update
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  • From ANON - ice on September 12, 2004
    daymmmmmmm!!! dis is soooo tight!! i really love this story!!! i'm so confuse though, is it a kagome/kurama or a kagome/hiei pairing? i really love this!!! i notice that da insect thingy is in the future, so naraku is still alive??? oh mayn! dats bad! well plz update soon!
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  • From ANON - chickie on September 11, 2004
    This story is good! But is the pairing Hiei and Kagome? Please write as fast as possible for the next chapter. You should be an author at fanfiction.net as well. I bet you will have many, MANY reivews. Well gotta go!

    YOUR FAN

    CHICKIE
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on September 11, 2004
    AAARRGG! I can't believe I missed an update! Luckily, I caught up with this one. To answer your question about the speed of the story; no, I don't think you are going too fast. I want to see the confrontation and, who doesn't want a lemon, *rolls eyes* but I'd rather have a good background first. Without that this may as well be a PWP. I think you did well with Jinenji personally, I liked him in the story. You know if Kurama and Kagome get together *little chibi reviewer in the backgroud stomping and yelling "You promised!"* he'd have to take her to visit him. By the way, the whole Hiei and Sesshomaru thing can be easily resolved with the way the story is going, with Hiei killing so many youkai Sesshomaru would want to investigate wouldn't he? The food call has been given, I must away!
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on September 11, 2004
    I'm glad you liked my suggestion. I suppose though, reading your solution, that 'freeze' is a better way to keep Hiei on track. He'd probably throw a hissy if he kept on getting smashed into things. ^.^ I liked the display of Kagome as a kick-ass chick. It really does justice to her character to have her whoopin' some thugs...in the nude no less. I'm curious to see what happens now that Kurama's discovered the little 'paradox' in place. It looks like the cat is out of the bag... or kitsune is out of the pocky.
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  • From ANON - Mija on September 11, 2004
    omg two chaps and they were awsome, soo loving this story I can so see this in my head and I cant wait I wants more, please let it be a Kags/Hiei pairing but if not I do understand, you have such a way with diologue, cant spell so sue me, ok dont but anyhow my sing ing but but anyway you have a way with wordd thd the plot is sooo good I cant wait for further updates I know you may not be able to but can you email me if you update?? if not so k I will check back when AFF lets me on..lol...good fic keep it up your doing a great job I soo love this ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on September 11, 2004
    man your so freakin awesome
    you update your story so much
    thank the gods for arthurs like you!!!
    i cant wait for the next one
    cya
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on September 10, 2004
    Nice first technical meeting between Kagome and Hiei. I liked how she could throw him off balance with her comments. Her direct honesty was surprising though as I'd half expected her to go 'Well? What well?' and try and keep it under wraps. It will be interesting to see what kind of subduing spell gets sed oed on Hiei. Personally I like the word 'baka' as the fall word...

    *Imagining*

    Kagome: InuYasha no BAKA!
    Hiei *thud*
    InuYasha-tachi sans Miko: What was that?
    Kagome: Squirrel? ^.^0

    Can't wait to see what happens next!
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on September 10, 2004
    hey woot you update fast
    thanks for that
    i really enjoyed it
    cant wait for the next one
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  • From ANON - Kuramasbluegurl on September 09, 2004
    wow i love this story
    i think im off to you you other stories
    lol
    thanks for the great read
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  • From ANON - Jaded Neko on September 09, 2004
    I am basking in total awesomeness!
    Yeah I was suppose to be doing my homework when I first started reading, but I just couldn't stop! I figure it won't hurt if I have to repeat one class.
    Keep it up!

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  • From ANON - LadyOfTheWest on September 09, 2004
    Arghhhh! What a horrible thing to do! :snickers: That was such a huge cliff hanger! Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Jessjess on September 09, 2004
    Hey! That's the fiirst time I got a response from an author! Whoohoo! My day is complete! Okay, so sort of knowing what is going to happen is giving me jitters, well that or the chocolate peanutbutter cake I ate at six this morning, and I can't wait! You know if Kouga, the two gangs and seemingly Naraku are all going to have confrontations don't you think that Youko and Sesshomaru should meet? Those two seem to have a lock on the "I'm older, wiser, and infinitely superior" attitude. Ack, I'm bad! Promise, no more interfering in your story, just reviews, but I still love it.
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on September 09, 2004
    Whoo! Caught red handed. I'm wondering how Kagome will react to Hiei. 'Eek don't hurt me Mr. Gravity-Defying-Hair' or 'Hya! Don't mess with a Miko/Taijiya in training' while escaping back down the rabbit-hole so to speak. I'll be watching to find out!
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  • From HitomiBrighteyes on September 09, 2004
    An interesting start. I particularly enjoyed Youko's singing...Rather reminded me of Shigure's (Fruits Basket) rather elegantly perverse nature.
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