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Reviews for Sloppy Seconds

By : CutiePieHentai
  • From ANON - vashta on November 27, 2004
    Sooooo..... just how long are we going to have to wait? I am going crazy, but it is a good story. I would like for him to at least before, maybe right before but still before, they do the deed to tell her she is not a copy. She deserves that. How long do you think this fic will be? I want to know how much angst I have to endure, I will follow it to the end, glad you updated.
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on November 27, 2004
    (glomps) yay! i'm so glad you updated! and i'm really sorry to hear about your computer. kami-sama, that sucks! i hope you can keep up the previous pace (not before the computer crashed) of updates and bring me more joy! i love this story and i can't believe how close they were! (snaps fingers in disappointment) k'so! so close, so far, ne? oh well, next chapter maybe? a lemon? anyone's lemon? hell, i don't care if shippo has a self moment... (^.~) just so long as i get a little bit more than the limey teasing you've been doing!

    oh, btw, kagome didn't react at all to inuyasha's calling her mate? is there a reason for that?

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - shaina on November 24, 2004
    This is such an amazing story, and it's sooooo hot!!!!! I can't WAIT to find out what happens next. I'm so glad you updated. Kagome and Inuyasha are so sexy.
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  • From ANON - REVERA_04 on November 15, 2004
    Please update!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Revera_04 on October 30, 2004
    MORE!
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  • From ANON - hanyou-elf on October 30, 2004
    (glomps) a new chapter! i'm so excited! i checked every day for the new chapter and i am so glad you finally added a new chapter! i can't wait to see what miroku and sango do (you will write a lemonny good chapter, ne?) and what develops between inuyasha and kagome... i mean athey are both naked and wet and yummy for each other... you know? update this soon, this time i'm serious! i'm glad that you have gotten over your writer's block (you have, ne?) and are going to update soon!

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - g on October 30, 2004
    g
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  • From VampireWitch on October 27, 2004
    Lol - too muchldisldish abandon certainly leads to interesting consequences.
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  • From ANON - ~A~ on October 27, 2004
    You may have had trouble writing the chapter, but I think it turned out really well. It fits with the rest of the story, and I think overall it's good, even though you had writers block. Please update soon =)
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  • From ANON - Revera_04 on October 26, 2004
    AHHHHH!!!! NEXT CHAPTER!PLEASE HURRY!
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  • From ANON - Cassi on October 25, 2004
    OMG! I love your story! (Not just saying for ego boost... lol) Keep up the great work & PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
    I LOVE how you have actually made Miroku seem honorable (it's a first...), and I have never thought of IY being easily embarassed, but it works... Keep it up!

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  • From on October 23, 2004
    more more more!!!! this is sooooooooooooooo awsome!!! i feel like i'm in it.. ur really REALLY good
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  • From ANON - kinky again on October 20, 2004
    you know, i love this story and all the great kinky-ness that i can get from it, but this is utter torture! i've been checking every night before i go to bed to see if you have updated. i can't take the suspense. i need a new chapter! if i don't get one, i'll go insane! i know i will. i can feel it in me bones! (frowns) won't you please, oh please, update soon? i need to know what happens! i need to know if kag and sango are going to go at it together with a peeping pair or if they are going to go at each other with a peeping pair! (that would be even better, ne?)

    anyway, before my hentai mind leaks onto the computer, great job with the chapters and update soon, ne?

    ja ne!
    ~hanyou-elf
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  • From ANON - Midnight_Sparrow on October 16, 2004
    Lol! Poor Miroku.....I don't think he's going to be able to resist Sango next time...;D
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  • From ANON - Ralina on October 14, 2004
    I LOVE IT I LOVE IT!!!! Oh please keep updating. You've got a great plot, kept with the original storyline, kept the characters in their own worlds, and stayed true to the characters at the same time. I don't think that scene with Miroku and Sango was out of character at all. It eventually has to happen one way or another and that is a very possible way it could happen. I think you are very gifted and you should keep writing - and not just fanfiction. I'm sure that you could be a very sucessful author in your own right. Give yourself a pat on the back and please keep updating! I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

    *Ralina*
    P.S. Thank you for sharing with us that music video. I loved it!
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