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By : CutiePieHentai
  • From ANON - sarah on July 05, 2005
    I dont really know wat to say but that was a really awsome story so far so keep it coming or ill go insane trying to guess wat happens next!!!!!!!! BYE BYE
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  • From ANON - Anon on June 20, 2005
    IT WAS AWSOME!!!=^-^=
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  • From ANON - Catz2.0 on June 12, 2005
    Wow! i reviewed you before and now I've finally finished the chapters you have written, and you knw what? I WANT MORE! I can't stand having to wait, I love your story and how you just don't end it when Naroku is killed. I hope you update soon, otherwise, every few days or so I'm gonna wrtie again and again... UPDATE!!~ GOTTA LOVE YA! Please update soon.
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  • From ANON - Catz2.0 on June 06, 2005
    Ok ooops, pressed enter... *smacks self on the head* anyway second of all... I LOVE THE WAY THIS STORY IS GOING AND I AM SOOO UNBELIEVABLY HAPPY THAT THERE ARE MORE THAN 20 CHAPTERS LEFT FOR ME TO READ! *gulps in big gasp of air as if about to spontaniosly combust* and.... I JUST HAD TO TELL YOU JUST HOW MUCH I LOVE YOUR WRITING YOU'VE GOT TALENT! * blows kisses and waves* talk to you soon, chapter 9 beckons me...
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  • From ANON - Catz2.0 on June 06, 2005
    Ok, I just started reading this fanfic now and I've already made my way up to chapter 8 (which I've just finished) and before I go any further, there are just a few things I need to say... *takes in big breath* I LOVE YOUR TITLES! THEY ARE SOOOOO CUTE! I WAS ON MY WAY TO CHAPTER 9 WHEN I SAW A TITLE BELOW SAYING *WHO LET THE DOGS OUT* AND I THINK THAT THAT IT WAS SOO CREATIVE OF YOU!
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  • From ANON - Hana on May 25, 2005
    I appreciate the work you put into this story. I hate using the word story because with works of literature like yours it doesn't do it justice. I would have reviewed more but I've never been very good at criticising people and reviewing every single chapter just to tell you the same thing over and over and over again seemed like a bit much. I can only hope that you continue writing, and not just fan fiction. You obviously have a gift with words. Thank you for everything. I enjoyed reading it.

    Sincerely,
    Hana
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on May 16, 2005
    I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - kazhdu on April 26, 2005
    Hi!

    I just finished reading your story, without interruption! I was enthralled and just could not stop. I am a great Inuyasha fan , though I only read the mangas (Animes have a tendacy to sway a little from the original story in some details - sometimes even bigger things - and I find that disappointing) and i love what you did with the characters. I will definitely be archieving this story in personal library (not on line, but library all the same!).

    As for the chapter inspired by your husbands illness, I truly feel for you and him. I just finished several months of heavy chemo and am having radiotherapy since last week, so I know how awful all of this might be. I'm also 25 years old, so you can imagine how I identified with your story, though I wasn't lucky enough to have anyone by my side (no family, friends too far away). All I can say is that he must have been happy (despite all) to have a wife as loving and dedicating as you. I also know how hard it is to stand by someone ill (one of my long time friends ceased all contact because he couldn't bear it, even before the chemo actually started and I also lost my only true loving family members by cancer and affiliates) so I truly admire your strenght. I don't know iuf it's worth anything, but I always found strength when loosing loved ones (I lost about 5 in the last 10 years) knowing that death is a part of life that we can not avoid and that the loss of loved ones is always harder for the ones who stay than the ones who leave. They find peace when we find grieve, but my grieve was always over their absence because i knew that they were not in pain anymore, be it physical (because of the illness) or mental (because life is always painful and tiring, if even just a bit). I have no particular believe, though i do have a strong tendecy to believe in reincarnation, but I know that -wheter they are reborn or simply meld in the earth- they're not in a bad place.

    Voilà! sorry for the rambling, I do that sometimes. And I also apologise for any grammar, spelling and sstructural mistakes, as well as any incoherence. English is not my mother tongue and even in french I'm more of a Sesshoumaru type. (Few words, not too much on the sharing feelings thing, you get the picture)
    Hope to read you soon for 'the wish' and any other stuff you may have written!!! (i will search the internet for your stories!)

    Ciao!

    Kazhdu
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  • From ANON - TricksterGoddess on April 25, 2005
    Woo, finally finished. Awesome story, I'll say more tomorrow for as seeing that your story is one of the reasons I only got 4 hours of sleep last night and I couldn't sleep tonight until I finished... you'll have to wait. Please update soon! Keep up the good work^__^!!!
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  • From ANON - Jacinda on April 25, 2005
    I Loved it!!!! We should get in touch sometime cause i have some good idea's for a story but i dont know how to turn it in *tear* Oh and MAKE MORE STUFF WITH KAGOME AND INUYASHA GET'N IT ON!!! lmao sry im just a lil perverted. Well if we do get in touch i need to let u know that this is my 2nd screen name my 1st one is InuYasha4098@aol.com i only use this one to get on the inu sights because my other one wont let me. well keep up the good work byes!
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  • From ANON - E on April 23, 2005
    wow, your story is absolutly incredible!! this is the best story i have EVER read. I am really impressed by your writing skills and the massively expansive details that you have in your story. It captivated me. I even cried. It was so touching, especially towards the end. At some parts i admit i wanted to stangle you for the excruciating torment between kagome and inuyasha but it was all worth it in the end. can't wait for the next chapter. I shall be impatantly waiting but waiting just the same. Oh yea the part about the husband thing, that was soooo sad! I read your little end note too. I'm so sorry about your loss. I understand your reasoning and the strength that you found in the aftermath of such a tragedy but i still cant help feeling sad about it. Thnx for the story and for sharing your story as well.
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  • From CerealKiller on April 21, 2005
    Loved it!!! awesome fic!!!
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  • From ANON - Kari on April 08, 2005
    awesome fiction, i loved all the Inu/Kag stuff, and i loved the lemon between!
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  • From ANON - Feral Angel on April 06, 2005
    Oh wow I have to say you are one of the best authors I have ever had the privlege to read your work. Your story has such character in it, everyone is so lively and real and that I can easily see all the happenings really...uhm...happening! *grins* It took me 3 days of reading but I happily got to read all that you have written and thoroughly enjoyed it. What I loved most about this story was the fact that you used actual episode events in it more so than any other writers work. It makes it more real, half the time I had to remind myself this is a fans work of art and not Rumiko Takahashi herself writing this! That's how good it was. I do admit there were a few flaws in it but hey, we all make boo boo's, so no biggie at all. I am just so happy to have fallen onto this story and look forward to more of it, since it sounds like you are done with it yet.

    Oh what I also enjoyed about this story was the fact that you had put events of your own life into it. I am so very sorry about your husband and wish he could still be with you physically. I know he will always live in your heart and be with you, living in your memories. I find I also enjoy reading your authors notes because it gives me a feel of getting to know you. Almost as if you were speaking directly to me, which I rather liked.

    Ok ok I'm rambling on. I'm just so completely happy with your work and...yeah! Heh so I hope to hear more from you. Hang in there and keep up the wonderful work!

    Feral Angel
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  • From ANON - DragonHostile17 on April 04, 2005
    sweet mason video. although your timing was a little off count.
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